Yeh Moh Moh Ke Dhaage - IshRa OS

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Piu

@Non-existent

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Wow! How beautiful was that! 😊

Such artistry of words and emotions, served in perfect proportions.

You captured essence of the characters so exquisitely.

Loved how you took the inspiration from the song and connected the lyrics perfectly.

Brilliant!👏

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

@Eyes-Wide-Shut

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

This turned out to be a wonderful study break, anything musically inclined and you will find me there so no surprise that the title made me click on this OS because I am currently obsessed with this song. The melody, the lyrical beauty, the voices..everything about this song is sheer brilliance.

Thank you for penning this down, it was a treat to read.

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

u always make me speechless with ur way of writing stories..

all the emotions..words...feelings make me lost in the story..

this one was so beautiful..

loved it

the song was so apt for them..

the situation where she gets to know about his job..their convo..

acknowledging that they love eachother yet not saying it was so cute...

loved it

thankyou for the beautiful story!!!

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Mehak Ashraf

@Mehak_KPian

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Awesome OS. I have been following all your OS's since along time back but couldn't comment. So, here is ny first comment on your OS. Superb piece of writing. :D

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deepa

@_Dipsi_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Thats such a beautifully written os aani...love ur stories..i m a big fan of ur writing

thks for the pm

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

OMGGG Aani..Im in love with ths piece of your writing. Beautifully written. What IshRa shared in their room right from helping her, thn getting passionate, thn confrontation and again with lile hubby wife nokjhok and then sleeping together was such a beautiful journey.

Kash serial mei aise kuch dekhne ko mile! I could literally imagine all of it happening in the serial!

Write moreee! Im loving it!

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Your writing is sheer magic Aani. And this one shot is magic 😳 I love how you've picked an untouched issue in the show. Ishita is obviously going to have a reaction if and when she finds out. But this one's made me hope it plays out exactly this way.

IshRa have improved on the communication front, but still have a long way to go. Raman's habit of hiding things isn't healthy and I love how you mulled on it here. Ishita's anger and Raman's curiousity and restlessness on her not talking to him was SO CUTE. The way he finally approached her, the way she spoke to him and questioned her concerns. In all her anger, her concern was foremost and it was adorable how Raman was finding it funny because he felt so happy and assured on being loved and cared for. It had a glimpse of how barren his life was without a life partner who genuinely cared so much not just for him but also for his self respect and did not want him compromising on it. It was a brilliant way of showing the couple's love and bonding.

Your writing, your quotes all are so brilliantly thought and then tallied with the story, that it makes it worth not just one read but many to just let the beauty of it all sink in.

Wonderful One SHOT and a lovely conclusion to it 😳

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

I loved the thought process in this one aani. She was distressed, more so on his behalf. And the way she was hurt was well portrait. Really enjoyed reading it.

Also thank you for the ending bit where they sleep together because on the show it seems like a long lost idea.