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Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut
Vee has him till she brings her real puttar on line so I am gonna let her have him for a few days. Warna mere dimag me toh puttar ne mujhe kayi sari baar dadhi chubhai hai. 🤣

Dadhi is all well and good but my god, that clean shaven look. I just wanted to devour him today

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

@bold: how can i feel his daadhi on the phone..kaash koi rasta ho..😳

All I meant is you can meet him in person to get the actual feel 🤣 .. Stupid me

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usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Vee this is beautiful and romantic OS. Finally they get real honeymoon it happen in our writer world not from the show. Love their beautiful moment alone without anybody disturb them and the swimming pool part was so sensuous the way Raman check her out was superb. Hope to read more from you. Thank you for the beautiful OS dear. have a wonderful week ahead .🤗🤗

Edited by usaonly - 10 years ago

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: arunabhi

All I meant is you can meet him in person to get the actual feel 🤣 .. Stupid me

Nahi nahi not stupid you, it's stupid me! anyways yaar my puttar is far from me so it's mostly FaceTime for me. 😕

Tabhi toh I am full time obsessing over reel puttar because both putters are far! 😳

Edited by Eyes-Wide-Shut - 10 years ago

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

sensual writing beats crudeness anytime anyday ;)

and your writing at that...taking it to another level 😉

beautiful beautiful writing. now just tell me where this heaven is and i'm packing my bags 😃

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vidya.anand

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

@avni, sorry for the late comment...was away on a trip when u sent me the PM

passionate and sensual update...bath jab shower ki ho, toh hot toh hoga hi!

and confession was romantic and especially the way they played truth and dare and then confessed once again before all!

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Veeann

@Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: rutu83
sensual writing beats crudeness anytime anyday ;)
and your writing at that...taking it to another level 😉
beautiful beautiful writing. now just tell me where this heaven is and i'm packing my bags 😃

Rutu, I actually based the island on one of the exclusive honeymoon island resorts in Fiji. But it was too far from India so I pretend it was the Andamans.

So glad you liked it 😃

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Veeann

@Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: arunabhi
You have a unique way of writing romance and this was another example of that. Esp the way you describe things. Subtle and bold. Biwi , 360 degree change in days. Shy Biwi went all bold ..

Swimming pool romance was too blushy and entered romance land ! Yaaay to the dhaadi chubthi hai portions. It just got better !

Loved reading and Thanks for writing V. Vidya, special thanks to you for getting her to write. It's been long 😳..

Aww, thanks Aru.😃

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Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut
OMG Vee this is outstanding! Him carrying her in his arms to their bedroom and the reversal of PDA during their flight...sigh!
Best was him staring at her while she swam in that flimsy sarong, and the dadhi chubhti hai...dead!

Kash mujhe bhi puttar ki daadhi chubhe!

Thanks Doc. Glad you liked it, I find it hard to write one shots since I suffer from excessive verbosity, so I had to end it abruptly otherwise it would have gone on and on and on. But good to know a writer as wonderful as you liked it. 😃

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Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: paru_rox
How the hell do you manage to write this stuff V. This was so good ☺️. ... Loved the honeymoon setting you chose especially the fact that it was so secluded & without anyone near by 😆

And Ishita going all out on Raman in the flight back. Sensible gal. She knows ghar aake kuch nahi hone wala 😆

You know V ... its time you started on a new SS. Been too long and we need our dose of blush-cum-grinning ear to ear a bit more regularly. Bas.

PS - Am still to start reading on all the OS's in the Prop thread. Looks like am in for a royal treat with this one.

Awww Paru. Thanks yaara for finding and reading this OS. I know how busy you are right now. Means a lot that you found the time to read this. 🤗