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hhmmm..interesting...👏👏

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Interesting ...plz continue soon thanks for the pm ...update soon

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hmmm new chrts interesting...

nice start...
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update soon

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Awesome Lazeema..continue yaar😃.
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interesting one
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update soon ur doing a f
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Hi my dears...

I thank u all for giving me comments and engorging me to write more, the special thanks goes to jiyaa02who have suggested the name for my SS all the credit goes to her

Here is my first update on the story "Once again...let fall in love"

I am so tensed even I don't know u all will like it or not it's really first time for me to write something new ,uff I can't take my nails from my mouth I am just biting it and sitting ...

Hope u all will like

It was the day of celebration, the day which they got a lovable member to their house it was Ruhi who helped them to recover from the all losses and pain faced in their life .All was busy with decoration

Ruhi was siting in the room alone and she was so sad and not at all interested in the party because her raman was not there ,raman was the most imp person in her life

Viren notices ruhi who was sitting alone in the room and he goes near her

Viren: Roo meri bachi aise akela kyu bett rahi hai ,kissiki saath jakda hua hai kya?

Ruhi:nahi

Viren:toh aise kyu bett rahi hu ,come let us go down and check out the decoration and all come

Ruhi:mujhe nahi ana hai iss party mei

Viren:kyu?

Ruhi:raman nahi haina issliyee

Viren:hoo toh yeh baath hai koun kaha raman nahi hai,voh zaroor avunka

Ruhi:then where is he ? abhi tak pohacha nahi

He makes her to sit in his lap

Viren:hmmm...voh actually kya haina ramn thoda busy hai kaam mei ...phir bhi cake cutne ki pehale hi voh ajavunghi

Ruhi:choot pichli baarbhi yahi kahana

Viren:pichli baarki tarah nahi hai issbaar zaroor avunghi, ruhi promise

Ruhi:pakka

Viren:{sad face}hmm...vaise ruhiko toh hum log pasand nahi hai haina...usse toh sirf uska raman se pyaar hai,see u r not happy with us

Ruhi:shooo... ,sad mathho mujhe sab pasand hai ...actually kya haina raman toh meri paas nahi hai issliye I missing him agar aap yaha nahi hai toh I will be missing u also ...please rona ki naathak bandkar mera pyaari mamu

Viren;ho ab humari ruhiko samach mei aya hmm...come dekthe hai kaisehumari rumi chachune decorate karahi hai come

they went to hall

Romi:hoye meri ruhi chuhi kaise hai chachuki decoration pasand aya kya?

Ruhi:pasand to hays par...

Romi:kya hua?

Ruhi:meine apse kitni baar kaha mujhe spider man pasand nah hai I just love only Barbie doll phirbhi aapne spider manki tasveer rakha it is not done...

Rumi:it is not a matter for me I will change it now

Ruhi:hmm jaldi karo raman anese pehala sab ktham honi chahiye

Arnav:bhai?

Viren:ha bhai is coming

Rumi ; [with a frighten face] sach mei

Viren :Rinky...Rinky kaha hai tu

Rinky :arahihu

Rinki reached

Rinki;kya hai?

Viren;tu ruhike saath mall mei chalo uski dresski kuch fittings baki hai toh go make it ready

Rinky; ha bhai...ruhi come let us go

Ruhi says bye to all and goes

Rumi:raman bhai araha haiii ab mein kya karuuu

Arnav :kya rumi kuchgalath kiya hai kya

Viren:it is not sure guys

Rumi :shukkar hai matharaniki

Arnav;toh phir ruhi se choott ...

Viren:what can I do guys ruhi was crying kyuki raman bhai nahi hai that's why I told her that bhai would come, I hope we have to talk to him ...ruhi keliyee haina guys

Ruhi;yaaa par mujhe decorate karna haina tum dhono try karo ok

Viren looks arnav

Arnav:bhaiii haa mujhe cake buy karna haii toh excuse me

All was afraid to talk with raman so they went from there saying different reasons,last viren was left

Viren calls Raman

Viren:hello

PA:Hello aap koun bolraha hai?

Viren: mein RKBka bhai viren ,can I

PA: MR viren sir is in meeting so can u call later please

Viren:ok don't forget to inform it is urgent

PA:sure sir bye

Viren:kaise bhi ruhike iss birthday mei bhai honi chahiye

In ishita's house

Ishita in kitchen

Ishita:Khushi...yeh paakal ladki kaha gayii

Khushi:uff chillavo math arahihu

Khushi:kya hai dee

Ishita:haldiki dappe kaha hai

Khushi:mujhe kyu poochrahihu yahi kahi honghina

Ishita:tumse nahi hai toh kisse poochu tumhi toh haina yahaka master chef

Khushi:voh toh mein huuu mujhe batha hai u r teasing me kyu ki mujhe master chefmei selection nahi milli dekho agli baar zaroor mein jeethunkiii

Ishita:peechli baarbhi yahi kaha

Khushi:kuch bola...

Iahita:no

Khushi:hatto yahase ... see isse kehthe hai haldi...

Ishita:ha halide toh millie par mirchi kaha hai ?

Khushi:tumme kya hokaya dee is anything wrong ,see mirchi dabbetoh tumhari saamne hai phir bhi nahi dikrahi hai...

Ishita:ha, actually... kya tum kuch mujse kehana chahthihu hai kya ?

Khushi:nahi toh kyu kuch special hai kyaa?

Ishita:nahi...aaj date kya haii

Khushi:ooo dee thank u soo much aab mujhe yaad ayaa aajtoh..aajtoh..hayiii

Ishita:kya?

Khushi:SRKka movie release hai aaj ...aajtoh mein dappuki saath filim dekne chalunghi aap mujhe rokungha nahi na

Ishita:tumme rokkar kya faydha tum jaaa

Ishita:{herself}aajtuh meri birthday aur isse yaad bhi nahii,aur mrera fav cake bhi nahi banarahi hu, may be jeevikako yaad hoka...

Khushi went near jeevika

Khushi:ho meri paadashaala thoda waktha voh bookko aur tumhaari eyeko rest dho please...

Jeevika:khushi please aaj no masti kal exam hai

Khushi;ho please... dee aajtoh special haina

Jeevika:special?

Khushi:ha ishudee ka birthday

Jeevika:oh mein toh bhuli kaya..

Khushi:issmei koyi ashcharya honeki baath nahi haina,tumme toh sirf kithaboka naam yaad honghi

Jeevika:khushiii...any ways let me wish her

Khushi:no no not now surprise party organize kiya hai meine aur dappune milkar...so please don't spoil ,

Jeevika:hmm ab bolo mujhe kya karna hai

Khushi:tumme toh uppar jaakar dappu help karna

Jeevika:hmm ab bolo mujhe kya karna hai

Khushi:tumme toh uppar jaakar dappuko help karna hai decoration mei aur u should very careful deeko kuch pata chalna nahi hai ...

Jeevika:dee ko tu sambhaal na tumme toh koyi kaam nahi haina

Khushi:koun kaha mujhe kaam nahi I have to collect cake,the cake maker was so confused to hear such a recipe ,sachmei yaar dee taste bahuth alak hai duniya mei aiseajeeb taste kissiko bhi nahi honghi

Jeeevika:sak huchmei kaise yaar chocolate and strawberry is ok but bitter guard kaise ?

Khushi:voh sab chodo late horahi hai let me go and tum dyaan rakna ok koyi gadbad nahii

Jeevika:ok bye

Khushi went to to collect cake where Arnav is cpming to collect the cake

Shop keeper: sure can I help u?

Arnav:ya actually I have ordered a cake

Shop keeper:that ajebse cake

Arnav:{smiles}ya chocolate,strawberry and bitter guard...

Shop keeper:5 min sir let me pack

Arnav:ya of course

Khushi entered the shop while arnav was leaving with the cake

Khushi:hoyi bhaisaab mere cake kaha hai voh bitter wala yaad haina

Shopkeeper: voh toh sir lekhar gayi I hope he is from ur house

Khushi:aapne aise kaise soch saktha hai ,koun hai voh bula voh toh sahi

Shopkeeper:voh aathmi ...who is standing near the benz

Khushi:tumme toh mein dekhloonghi ...{shouted}hey bhai saab don't start the car mein arahi hu that is my cake...ho he stared the car

Arnav didn't see khushi he start the car ,khushi ran behind him ,she was shouting but he wasnot at all hearing her, at last she throw a stone to the car which made arnaav top the car because the mirror of the car was broken

Khushi:shukar hai vvoh gaadi rokliya

Arnav:hai paakal tumne kya kiya...gaadi ka mirror toda aur bolrahi hai acha hua ...

Khushi: achahu aap gaadi rukha varna mera cake miss hojathi ti,aur aapko yeh biiter wala cake khane padenghii...see it is good na I have stopped the car

Arnav: mental hospitalse arahi hai kya?

Khushi:ha bilkul aapke gharse arahi hu mein

Arnav:u bloody...anyways mera bath sunn this is not ur cake and i am not taking by mistake yeh cake meine order kiya..sunliyaa

Khushi:ho MR rakshass yeh cake meine order kiya mera dee keliye and I will take it

Arnav:mein tumme nahi doongha MS paakal

Khushi:nahi dhoonghi..?mera nahi hosaktha toh aapka bhi nahi hosaktha...

{he take some soil from the ground and put on his face}

Khushi:yes ab toh mera hai iss cake

Khushi ran from there

Arnav:u bloody ...tum mujse panghaliya yeh acha anhi hokha u r fighting with the wrong person...vaise ab mein kya karuuu...let me say cake to make once more varna yeh paakal ki vajase meri ruhiko dukh nahi desaktha

IN RAMAN'S OFFICE

PA:sir aapko gharse phone aya

Raman:gharse:

PA:ha koyi viren bola apki bhai hai

Raman:ok

PA:sir ussne bola kuch urgent hai

Raman:ha I will

Raman:{himself}mujhe batha hai tumne kyu phone kiya buttt...

-to be continued

Sorry for the mistakes

Hope u all enjoyed

Please comment on it guys,it means a lot to me

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