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Part-2

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Raman was sitting in the office

Mihir enters the room

Mihir: raman

Raman doesn't respond

Mihir:ramannn kaho koya hua hai

Raman:ha voh mein actually ... Virenka phone aya gharse

Mihir:ha voh mujsebhi phone kiya ...what is ur decision ?

Raman :mein kya decision loongha mihir mein vaha jaana nahi chahtha...

Mihir:akhir kabtak tu bakthe rahunghii ,we have to face everything in life and zindhanghi joh horaha hai voh sab faith hai and it could not be stopped by anyone ,aise sochkar sab boolja tuuu and start a new life

Raman:ek naya life start karne keliye naya hopes ,wishes ,dreams chahiye parr mere yeh sab 3 saalse...

In Bhalla house

Arnav reaches the house,his dress so dirty because of the soil

Romi:hey bhai...kya haal hai tumhari...zaroor koyi ladkiko linemara hoka aur isski baathh...

Arnav:romi tuuu...

Viren:arnav kya haal bana rakha hai tu ..aur cake kaha hai?

Arnav:kya bathavu bhai ek paakal ki vajase{he says all things happened}

Romi starts to laugh viren too but he stops suddenly

Viren:cake nahi mila toh hum kya karunghi

Arnav:cake millunghi but it takes time... 11 o clock ko...

Viren:11 kya baath karahi hu tu bhai ,u know ramna bhai araha hai

Arnav:{shocked}kyaaa?sachmei arahi haii toh arnav aaj tum toh gayiii

Viren:meine mihirko phone karke bathaya hai bhaiko manane keliye I am sure mihir will do it...dut cake ko... hum kyaa karenghii hummm

Arnav:ab mein kya karu? ,na aneka prayerbhi nahi karsakthi kyu ki ruhiki ghushii keliye toh...

Romi:johbhi hai face kar bhai...best of luck and please nextb time kabhibhi uss labkise mille toh mera number dena usko

Arnav ;romi tujhe chodunka nahi...

He ran behind him

In ishita house

Dappu and jeevika was busy in decorating

Khushi ran to the house like she had wined a war

Jeevika:tum itni gush kyu hai?

Khushi:voh toh mein kya dee mein toh aaj rakshase jeethkar arahihu...

Dappu:rakshas?

Khushi:ha dappu rakshasss {explains all the things}

Dappu:kya baath karahi hu dee aaptoh heroin hokayi

Jeevika:cake hum ko milla phirbhi yeh tumne accha nahi kiya khushi kissi ke saath jekadkaar nahiii ye teek nahi hai

Khushi:chuopkar dee please...aur ek aur baath ishu deese math bolo agar voh yeh sab jaanthi ho toh usse acha nahi lakunghi ...aur voh mujhe goobsare daathunghi phir lecture sunavunghi uff I can't even think about it

Jeevika:kuch ajeeb haina deediki same taste ,humne socha uski taste kissiko bhi hongh par koihaii, some connection may it would in the past life

Khush:ooo please,,,, purana rishta choda yaar hota hai aisetum zyaada math soch

Dappu:hey time hora ha hai...

Khushi:ha tu jaakar uncle aur aunty ko bulakar avo

Dappu:ha

Jeevika:tu uppar jaake dekh sab set hai ya nahi

Khushi:ha hope dee ko sab pasand aye...

All was ready ,ishita was not at all happy because she hope they have forget the birthday,suddenly she receives a call from khushi

Khushi:hello de

Ishita:tum kaha ho?

Khushi:mein yahi hu de uppar aaa aap avona please mujhe yeh nahi dekparahi hai

Ishita:{tensed}ha .. mein abhi arahi hu

IShita reaches there and there was full of darkness

Ishita:khushiii tum kaha hoo tum teek tho haina.

Suddenly all started to wish ,happy birthday happy birthday to my dear dee happy birthday u

Ishita was so surprised and loved

Ishita:hoo yahi thi tum saare ka plan hainaa

Khushi:ha aapko kya laga hamne apka birthday boolkaya ...

Ishita:hmm

Jeeviks:hum kaise humari pyaari dee kabirthday boolsaktha

Bala;happy birthday ishu{he gave a present}

Ishita:thank u

Dappu:jaldise avo , let us cut the cake ,humko yeh cake bahuth mushkilse milla hai and all credit goes to khushi ko,she really had fighted for it {suddenly he stops thinking wha the hell is he thinking }

Ishita:fight karke matlab?

Khushi:kuch nahi voh voh actually kya haina recipe pe baaremei kuch problems hua,apko toh pata haina cakeki recipe toda ajeeb haii...so that's why

Ishita:khushii sach batavo kya hai...agar tum sach nahi batavunghi toh mei nahi kavunghi

Khushi:agar bathavo toh bhi nahi kavunghi

Ishita:kya tum kuch bola?

Khushi:nahii sachmei yahi hai sachh

Ishita:jeevika tum bol

Jeevika:mein kya bolu?

Ishita:I said say

Jeevika:voh{she explains everything}

Khushi:dee please yeh sab aapki gushikeliye hai

Ishita:meri gushi?meri gushi?kissi aur duk dekar mujhe kya gushi millunghi I wont get anysatisfication and happiness

Khushi:see dee its urs, cake pe aapka naam hai and that was their mistake voh logteekse order nahi kiya

Ishita;mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai take it from here and use vapas dho

Khushi:mein?kaise mujhe hani batha uska ghar kaha hai,aur batha hai toh bhi nahi doonghi

Ishita;ok then its fine mein loonghi usse yeh cake ,sichoagar birthday kissi chotte bacha ki hoghi toh nahi khushiii

Ishita went to the shop and collected the address

In Bhalla house

Arnav was so tensed

Romi:bhai choda na sab teek honghi

Arnav:sab ,teek ,kaise?

Viren:ha chill bhai ,I hope raman bhaiko manana asaan nahi hai it take time and I am sure 11taki voh pohuchunghi to tum fikar mathlo

Ruhi comes

Romi: wow ruhi chuhi aaj tu toh princess lakrahi hai

Viren:ha ruhi u r looking so beatifull

Ruhi:thank u chachoos

Neha: voh toh beautiful lakunghi na meine use sajaya hai

Romi:voh toh hai dekha kitni achi baalthi uska ab toh dekar lekraha hai some one

Neha:uuu hom rudeee

Shagun and poornima enters

Romi:mami aap ,aapne toh kaha busy hai nahi aapavungha...phir kyu

Poornima:kya ab mera aneki problem hai tumme

Rinky:nahi mami uska kehaneki voh matlab nahi hai voh toh bas yuhi poochrahi hai

Shagun:chodo na maa hum aaj yaha humari pyaaari ruhika birthday celebrate karne ayana ...oh ruhi u looking fab

Ruhi hates shagun she hides behind neha

Shagun:ruhi dekho mein tumhare liya kaya laya hai ...I am u would like it

Neha:ruhi take it tumhare liye hai

Ruhi:thank u

Shagun was searching for raman

Arnav:kya shagun tum kissee doondrahi hu

Shagun:mein no nothing actually decoration dekrahihu niceee

Romi:thank u ji meine kiya avona mere saath mein pura decoration dekathi hu aapko

Shagun:no mein voh khudi dekloonghi

Romi:kya ghod dekunghi come

Shagun was so irritated she was not at all interested in any decoration and all she was only interested in raman ,romi was having victory smile

Arvav:tumme kya lektha viren yeh yaha ruuhike birthday celebrate karne ayi hu

Viren:uski manmei eki maksath hai voh hai raman bhaise sshaadi karo ikeliye voh kuch bhi karunghi besharam aurath...vaise bhi use kaise batha chlkaya raman bhai aaj araha haii

Sswamini:meine bayhaya

Arnav:maa aap kyu bathaya iss ko

Swamini:let it be na beta there will be some masala wala scences let us enjoy it

Arnav:agar uski vajasekuch hua toh it will be not good for u maa

Swamini:beta tumm meri

Arnav:chup

Rinky ran near to them

Rinky:raman bhai akaya hai

Arnav:kya? Akaya...

All was so excited to see raman ,all went near him and all were asking many questions like kaise hai tu? Tumme dekar kitne saal hokayi and all but was not answering and giving any importants to them

Raman:ruhi kaha hai

Viren:voh bhai ...ruhiii

Ruhi comes

Ruhi:raman mera dosth

She ran to him and hugged him

Ruhi:thank u so much mere birthdaymei ane keliye

Raman:hmm come let cut the cake ,I don't have much time

Kadhambari:ha avona hum cake cuttthei,

Arnav:ab mein kya karu...?cake ready honemei abhi bhi 2 hour baki hai

Viren:don't worry bhai ...now..what will we do hmm idea hai papane hum sabko cake kareeda hai kyu ki hum ruhike ajeeb cake nahi kasaktha so we can take it

Arnav:par..ruhi

Viren:kuch nahii come

All came to cut the cake ,shagun was trying to get raman s attention but he was not just looking at her

Ruhi:yeh toh mera favorite nahi hai

Raman:tumhari fav nahi hai,viren what is this I said na all should be her fav chahei kitni bhi paise hoka

Viren:bhai paise ki baath nahi hai that was a mistake

Raman:mistake?..

Arnav:bhai uski koyi galathi nahi gakathi mera hai{he explains everything}

Raman:uff mei kya bolo...ruhi adjust with this now aur 11 bajhe mei tumhari fav cake miljaavunghi

Ruhi:nahi mujhe mera fav cake chahiye matlab chahiye{she ran out }

Raman:mein ek baath poochu yaha kissiko bhi isska chintha hai kya I hope u all r not caring her,irresponsible

Swamini:nah,i hum sab uski koyi care nahi karahi hai tum haina sab karne keliye...

Raman:all r only best arguing and nothing more

swamini was ready to say something but arnav stops

arnav:maa please stop and bhai I am really sorry galathi hakayi mujse but don't sat we don't care for her

ishita went the shop and collect the address and reaches the home

she could see asmall girl was standing outside and crying ,she went near her

ishita:bachu tum kyu ro rahi hu?

Ruhi:mujhe kissise baath nahi karna hai

Ishita:oh kissese baath nahi karna hai ?toh math karon mujhe help toh karsaktha haina?

Ruhi;nahii

Ishita:tum hai kya birthday girl?

Ruhi:ha toh

Ishita:toh kuch nahi ,mein toh bas tumme ek gift karne kelliye aya

Ruhi:gift?

Ishita:tumme stabbery ,chocolate and bitter guard cake pasand hai kya?

Ruhi:ha aapko kaise bathaa?

Ishita:mujhe toh sab batha hai infact mera bhi fav hai

Ruhi:really mera aur aapka taste same same wow but aapko batha hai mujhe mera fav cake nahi milla

Ishita:hmmmujhe batha hai issliya toh mein yaha aya tumme tumhari fav cakedene keliye

Ruhi:sachmei wow thank u aunty I was really missing that cake

Ishita:ab tum gush haina

Ruhi:mein toh gush nahi bahuth gush hai par kaise patha cchala it is fav

Ishita:voh actually mera bhi birthday thi toh mara behan mera liye cake order karne gayi ayr usse patha chala aaj kissika birthday voh bhi uski dee ki tarah hai iss cake ka flavor ko pasand hai

Ruhi:oh aaj aapka bhi birthday hai

Ishita:hmmm

Ruhi:aap toh mujhe gift diya toh mujhe bhi aapko dena hoka na

Ishita:hmm zaroor dena hogha

Ruhi:kya du???

Ishita:ek pyaarisi kissi desaktha hai kya?

Ruhi:of course apko toh sirf yahi chahiye as birthday gift

Ishita:ya and u know this will be best birthday gift

Ruhi kissed her ,this all was noticed by raman and viren and they couldnot see her face

Raman:koun hai yeh?

Vviren:nahi bata bahi ,koyi bhi ho humari ruhi ka chehre ka smile toh vappas akayana and u know na it is not easy to handle ruhi parr usse toh kamaal kardiya kitni assanise voh mankaya

Raman:ya whatever... tum jaakar usse cakeka paise dekar avo

Viren:ha bhai

Ishita:toh meri chotti princess let me go now bye

Ryhi:bye aunty love u

Ishita goes from there

Viren:ruhi voh aunty kaa hai ?

Ruhi:voh toh gayi

Viren:hmm anyways tum gush haina

Ruhi:ha mujhe toh mera cake milkaya ...

Viren:toh come in let cut the cake

Ruhi:hmm{notices something}{herself}yeh kisska payaal hai hmm...zaroor uss aunty kahi hoka ,let me keep itwith me jab akli baar usse millunghina jab usse vapas doonghi

All came to cat the cake arnav was relaxed

Ruhi cut the cake feed raman and everyone and all of them give to her

Ruhi:raman mare liye koyi gift

Raman:sorry ruhi meine gift nahi kareeda tum jhoo manko voh mein doonghi

Ruhi :pakka...

Raman;ruhi promise

Ruhi:aap mera saath rahona yaha hamesha please mujhe chodkar math jaa

Raman:{shocked}ruhi voh mein nahi

Ruhi:aapne toh promise kiya na{started to cry}

Rinky:ruhi don't cry raman busy haina

Ruhi:toh promise kyu ki

Raman:ruhi please koyi aur gift manghona

Ruhi:nahi mujhe toh aap hi chaahiye

Indhar:ha zaroor haina raman{gives direction to raman please}

Ruhi:sachmei

Raman shakes his head saying yes

The party was over all was resting in their room

Raman goes p viren room

Romi:bhai aap?

Raman:viren kaha hai?

Viren :ha bhai bol

Raman:collect thecake from the shop and deliver to that gisl's house

Romi:itnisi baath hai voh mein karoonghi

Ramna:no viren javuunghi voh bhi akele sunna viren isse saath math lejavo

Viren:ha bhai

Rama goes from there

Viren:romi mein jaarahi hu byee

Viren collect the address and goes to ishuta"s huse

Viren reached there

Viren:execuse me ,yahi haina iyyer house

{to dappu}

Dappu:ha, aap kouun?

Viren:mein viren

Ishita:dappu koun hai vaha

Dappu:koyi viren ayahai

Viren:vih actualyji mein yeh cake dene keliye aya hai,ur fav

Ishita:aap bhalla house se hai kya

Viren:ha,hope aap vaha aya cake ke saath

Ishita:ha meine aya,but cakeki kya zaroorat thi

Viren:it is our pleasure to give u please don't reject

Ishita:ha thank u and sorry mera behane aaj joh kuchbhi kiya it was not good

Viren:koyi baath nahi and she didn't fought with me it was my brother.let me go bye

Ishita:hmm

Vien goes from there

Indhar goes to raman's room

Indhar:raman

Raman:ha chachu

Indhar:aise math piyo yaar

Raman:nahi vhachu I can't ...and chachu please mujhe jaane dijiye aur ruhi samjavo

Indhar:kaise samjaavu mein voh bacheko I don't think she will listen to anyone and betta tu kyu vapas jaarahihu akhir kabtak jeeyungha aise

Raman:mujhe nahi bata chachu and I can't even stand here mujhe mere pithahua kal ...boolna chahthahu par nahi horahi hai mujhse ,and when I stay here mein sach mei paakal hojavunghi apko patha hai kya I can here maa's voice and where evere I look mera Arohi{lover}nazar arahi hai aur mere simmii {he falls infront of him,chachu was only a person who he share his pain}

Indhar:raman doon't cry please...aur tum nahi jaavunghi,3 saal hokaya abhibhi tum yeh saab kyu ramna tumme kya laktha deeko yeh saab dekar gush honghi...raman u should change...kya tum zindaghi bar aise rahunghi kya

Raman:may be...

Indhar:u r not going it is final and give me the bottle aajkeliye itna hi kaafi hai

Ruhi comes

Ruhi:kya raman tum jaarahi hai kya?

Indhar:nahi raman nahi jaavunghi

Ruhi:wowww

Indhar:o meri ruhi is so happy ab tum dhono bathe karo mein jarahi hu,good night

Ruhi:good night

Ruhi:raman kya tum mere liye ek help karunghi ?

Raman:hmm

Ruhi:tum iss payalko sambhaalke rakna jabbi mei tumse poochu tab mujhe vaapas dho

Raman:yeh yeh paayal tumko kaha se milla

Ruhi:voh actually ek aunty ayana cake lekar uska hai

Raman:ruhi tu jaa mujhe need arahi hai

Ruhi:ok bye

Raman ran near to the cupboard ,his doubt was right

Flashback

Arohi:raman yeh paal sambhalke rakna ,yeh humara pyaari ki nishan hai

Raman:yeh paayal kyu ?

Arohi:kyu ki jab mujhe yeh milla ussi din tum mujhe I love u bola, 2 saal tak meine tumhare peeche kiya aur tum mujhe baavbhi nahi deraha tha and whan I got ths uss din tum mujse akar kaha that u r loving me u asked me to be ur life partner ...issliye this paayal is special for may be it will be special for the who was wearing ...

Flashback ends

Raman:yeh paayal toh same to same hai kya yeh paayal usski honghi ,nahi ek paayal koyi pehanungha kya,may be she,may be it would be special for as special for me{he wipes the tears}

-to be continued

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wndrfl .i just loved it .fb paayal part was awesome
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Lovely update continue soon thanks for the pm :-)
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wow...nice update...

loved it...

ru nd ishu are nice...

loved raman's flash bak..
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Superb SS...
Waiting for next part..😊😊
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awesome
upadte soon n pm me
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Part 3

Sorry for the delay

Hope u enjoy

In shita house

Ishita:khushii... sorry

Khushi:mujhe nahi chahiye kissiki sorry vorry

Ishita:khushi sunn na ,I know aaj tum joh kuch bhi kiya sab mere gushi keliye kiya...and tumhari koshish toh kamiyaab hoyina ,see I am so happy..and we got the cake also let us cut it enjoy,and jeevika kaan kulke sunno iss time mere khushi mujhe first cake killavunghi

Khushi:mujhe nahi cuttna hai any cake,mujhe neend arahi hai issliya mein jaarahi hu,u guys carry on

Ishita:tumhari bina...what is wrong with u khushi,,mein sorry bolana ,,,sorry please manjavuna...khushi tume bata hai kya aaj mein pehli baar kissise milla who has taste as mine and surprisingly hummare birthday bhi ek din...aur tumme batha hai kya aaj ka birthday mere liye sabse best hai u know that chottuse girl na ...she was so sad because she couldn't get fav cake and when I gave her the cake na she was so happy ...uska har anssu stop hokaya and she start smile then laugh aur phir ansu aya aur voh gushi ki thi...I am happy because she is...please khushi mujhe maaf karde...tumme kaha na u want to make me happy and I am so happy hummari vajase koyi aur ko gushi millana

Khushi :ok akali baar itna badi lecture math dho...{she wipes her tears}meine maaf kiya because u r happy and not because ur lecture ...

Ishita:please give me a hug na then only I could believe sachmei tum mujhe maaf kardia

{they both hugged}

Khushi:{to jeevika}hey tu kya dekrahi hu come join us

Dappu:ishita dee there isonly 5 min to end this so please come to cut the cake

They cutted the cake and enjoyed a lot ,ishita was so happy than her other birthday

In morning

Bhalla house

Raman got up from the sleep saying ishita

Raman:[shouted}ishitaaa

Raman :ishita?why I was criying for her and who is her...and why should call her name koun thi voh...

Arnav comes

Arnav :bhai

Raman;hmm kya?

Arnav :voh..app kahi saalki baath aya na ..so..

Raman:so what

Arnav:daadi apse milna chathi hu

Raman:daadi?daadi ko kaise patha chala

Arnav:voh mein bathaya

Raman:mein kissise milna nahi chahthi hu

Arnav:voh bhaiii

Raman:mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai meine kaha na its final ok and agali baar mujhse juda hua decision take karne ke pehle mujhse ek baar poochlo

Arnav:sorry bhai

Swamini:kab tak tum aise sorry bolke rahunghi...sharam karooo apne apko jab dekho bhai bhai kehkaar hamesha uske peeche bakthi rahthi hai aur tujhe kya milrahi hu...hai arnav sudar jaa ttu

Arnav:kya apki lecture katham huyi can I go n ow

Swaamini:yeh nahi sudrunghi

Romi:kya hai bhai subhah subah chaachi ki jakda karna shuru kiya

Arnav:maa..i just hate her

Romi:bhai tumko batha hai kya ..agar hummari paas kuch hai toh we don't understand the value of that but jab chala jaathi haina tab humko samj mei avunghi na jab humko uska value samaj mei avunghi...jaise meri maa ne mujse chodke chala gayi jabse mujkooo{he start to cry}

Viren:ho humari chottu romi senti hokayi {he hugged him,raman comes}

Raman:what's going on here kissikko aaj office nahi jaana hai aur tu romi college nahi jaara hi hu hai kya...

Romi:ha bhai I am going byee...

In ishita's house

Ishita:jeevika khushi abhi tak utta nahi

Jeevika:nahi dee

Ishita:kya abhi tak nahi utti usse college haina

Jeevika:hmm hope she is not going to college

Ishita:kyaa aj bhi nahi...sho yeh ladki bhi naa

Khushi's room

Ishita:khushi utto dhere horaha haii

Khushi:deee aaa mujhe bahuth dard hora ha haii

Ishita:acchaaa kaha hora ha hai meri bachikoo

Khushi:stomach mei...aaa...mujhe nahi hogha

Ishita:uff dekhho jeevika usse toh bahuth dard hora ha hai ...let us call doctor

Jeevika:ha dee one injuction can make everythinnng ok

Khushi:gayi mera dard gayiii mein fresh hokar athi hu

Ishitha:khushi ko injectionse

Jeevika:dar lekktha gaiii

All went the college and ishita to orgghanage

Ishita is happy to spent time there ,especially with dadhi{raman's dadhi}

Ishita directly goes to dadhi's room

Ishita:dadhiji dekho mein aapkeliye kya layavu

Dhadhiji was not responding to her and ishta understood she is cring

Ishita:dadhiji aapp kyu rorahi hu?

She hugged her

Ishita:dadhi kuch boliye

Dadhiji:ishita puttar mei ...meri potha aya hai kahi saalonki baath

Ishita:toh kya aapko usse milna hai kya...agar milna hai tooh mein use yaha bulathi hu aur hum aapka ghar jaathi hu

Dadhi:usse mein yaha anekeliye kaha par voh inkaar karthiya ...

Ishita:kya?inkaar kardiya yeh kaise hosaktha hai...stop criying dadhi don't cry for one doesnot like u ...

Dadhi:nahi ishu voh mujhe bahuth pyaaar kartha hai shayad dikha nahi sakthi uska dardne usse sabse doorkardiyaa

Ishita:kya rkb ki baaremei bolrahihu

Dadhi:ha ussiki baaremei bahuth mankarahi hai usse milneki par koyi baath nahi

Ishita:toh aap ghar jaakar usse millo

Dadhi:nahi ishu mein vaha nahi javoonghi...

Ishita:kabtak dadhi

Dadhi:mujhe nahi jaana hai ...ek din mein vaha javunghi voh bhi mere ramanki saath

Ishita:hmm...ab yeh saab chodo dekho mein aapkeliye kya laayahu

Dadhi:oh my fav thank u so much

Ishita:u welcome my sweet heart...mein abi aya

Dadhi:ha

Ishita:{herself}mujhe kuch karna chahiye dadhiki khushi keliye...yes I have to meet MR.RKB

In the way to college

Khushi:dee mujhe aaj college jaane ka man nahi hai

Jeevika:tumme college jaaneki man kab hotha hai?

Khushi:deee

Jeevika:chodo khushi bas ek saalki toh baath hai na

Khushi:ha woh sochkar toh mujhe toda sukoon miltha hai...par tumhari haalath toh dekho abhi bhi 2 saal,kya zaroorat thi doctor baneki

Jeevika:zaroorat hai meri dee ki adhoora swapna poori karnaki ...tumme batha haina ma aur papa ka swapna thi deeko doctor banana and she also wanted but padayi humareliye chodthiye usska saare sapne cchod diya hummareliye now she wished to me to complete her dream

Khusi having tears

Khushi:sorry dee meine yeh sab yaad

Jeevik:it's ok

Suddenly a car rushed speedly ,there was full of mud in jeevika and khushi ka dress

Khushi:heiii andha his kya saara dress karaab kardiya

Jeevika:ayyo ab college jaise javungha...aise tumhari man jaise hi hokaya

In car

Viren:yeh tunne kya kiya

Arnav:joh mujhe karna chahiye..issi ladki ki vajase hai kal mujhe raman bhaise daatt pada

Viren:par{he see the girl face who was trying to clean her face}hai ghadi rukho

Arnav:ab kya?agar rukhaya toh voh ladki humko nahi chodunghi

Viren:tu ruk mujhe nahi laktha voh aisa karunghi

They stopped the car khushi notices that

Arnav:bhai vaha math jaa...voh humko nahi chodunghi

Khushi:oh tumm ...meine kahana dee koyi accidently nahi hui jaan poochkar karaya hai yeh raakshas

Arnav:ho toh kya...

Khushi:dekha dee abhi maafi maankne ki vaja voh ...

Arnav:maafi voh bhi tumse

They started to fight

Jeevika:please stop khushiii bas bahuth hogaya come

Viren:rukho ji sorry mere bhai ki vajase aapko yeh sab hokaya

Khushi:hello humko aapki sorry nahi uski cchahiya

Viren:arnav soory boltho ladki yoko chedna acchi baath nahi

Arnav:bhai aap meri bhai ya uski mein nahi bolunghi agar bolna tho first she has to say sorry

Khushi:no way

Jeevika:maafi ki koyi zaroorath nahi hum jaarahi hai

Viren was fully in jeevika's land he couldnot take his eyes from her

They started to walk

Viren:hey rukho aise kaise jaa saktha hu aap ...arnav should say sorry

Arnav:bhaii

Viren:tum kabhi math kehna

Khushi:kya?

Viren:arnav sorry bol jabtak sorry nahi bolunghi tabtak aap dhonoko yahi rahna hai

Jeevika:please mr humne bola na we don'tt want any sorry

They left

Arnav:aap kaisa bhai h o mujhe support karna ki vaja usslogo ko support karahi hai

Viren:voh mein I was not supporting them

Arnav:ha meine dekha

Viren:ha mein dekhrahi thi usse

Arnav:kisse?

Viren:vusse

Arnav:voh pakal ko

Viren:nahi...paakalki sisterko imean ur hone wali babhi ko

Arnav:hone wali babhi ko?acha ji ...

Phone rings

Viren:raman bhai ki phone tu utta please

Arnav:mein nahi tu, we r late and it is because ou u

Viren:aaj mei toh gayi

He takes the phone

Viren:hello

Raman;kaha ahi tum dhono irresponsible idiots

Viren:voh bhai bahuth traffic Haina

Raman:bahana toh bahuth hai...come fast meeting keliye time horaha hai

Viren :teeke bhai

Arnav:chale

Ishita went to raman's office to meet him

Receptionist :mam can I help u

Ishita:can I meet MR.RKB

Receptionist: sure wait one secmam aapka naam

Ishita:ishiat

Called raman

Receptionist :sir aapko koyi milnae aya

Raman:usse kaho I am in meeting and if it is usgent kalkeliye appointment dene kaho

Receptionist :kal

Ishita:bolo todhi urgent hai and tell him iam coming from orphanage receiptionist:sir bolrahi hai urgent hai orphanagese arhi hai and all

Ramn:I said na iam busy

Ishita:please sirko bolana

Receptionist:please ms ishita sir is busy

Raman:hey one naam kya bola

Receptionist:ishita

Raman:coffe shopmei wait karnekeliye bol I will be there after he meeting

Receptionist:ha sir

Receptonest:aapko wait karne keliye bolo

Ishita:ok

Ramn:{himself}dekna chahthi hu yeh ishita ko...she is always in dream no in my nightmares but aaj tak face nahi dekha

After a while

Raman enter the coffee shop which is joined their company.he enters and suddenly he goes to fall down but suddenly ishita comes and catch him ,her touch was making something special,the touch feels like electricity passing through his body and it was so special...he thinks shayad yahi hi ishita ho

Raman:what the hell

Waiter:sorry sir paani ghir gaya tha

Raman:pani ghir gaya aur clean nahi karna chahiye kiss type ka workers ko rakha hai yaha

Waiter:sorry sir abhi clean karahthi hu

Ramn walks from there to find ishita

Ishita:yeh kaise insaan hai madhath kara phir bhi ek thank u bhi nahi

Raman hears it

Raman:than u...hmm gush

Raman:kaise doondu iss ishita ko

Ishita:ishita ko doondrahi hu hai kya

Raman:ha tumme koyi problem

Ishita:it's me

He wonders he looks her and was not answering whatever asked by her

Ishita:sir please kuch toh bol kaha kokaya hai aap?

Raman:hmm ya so ms ishita what the matter?is any problem orphanage

Ishita:sir mein orphanagese chudkar baath karne nahi aya

Raman:then

Ishita;aapki dadi ki baaremei baath karna athi hai

Raman:dadhi?kyu

Ishita:voh aapse milna chahthi hu

Raman:I am busy

Ishita:kya busy aapko ekbaar dekne keliye voh tadap rahi hai please sirit is a request

Raman:ms ishita mein apne dadhise milna ya na millna it is my personal way so please don't interfior in it and is there anything related to orphanage

Ishita:[angrily]nothing

Raman:so let me

Ishita:{herself:kiss kismki athmi hai yeh apne dadhise milna nahi chahthi don,t feel about anyone

Raman:ya I don't ..bye ms ishita hope actually I wish there will be no any chances to meet second time

To be continued

I know it is boring without ishra scenes but it is the starting na dheere dheere teek kardhungha

Thanks

Don't forget to comment,I need it

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update...
Thanks for pm...😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm sorry for commenting late, but I've been busy all this while. Hope you understand.
It's beautiful
Your write ups are commendable .
Loved it.
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww lovely the fight between tge siblings was so cute looking forward for more ishra scenes lovely update

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