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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: arunabhi

This is a great start dear .. A different look at the spoilers..

Bringing Subbu in the whole picture .. Great to deal with Ishitha's insecurities right noe esp at this stage when both are in love with each other. That's what makes this special..

Their romance in the end was really sweet .. Both feeding each other 😳😳.. Thanks a lot .. Continue soon .


Thank u so much...
Glad u understood my pov...
Next part wil b by tommorow
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
nice update 👏👏really good looking forward to read more from ur writing ...Thanks for pm..😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishra7

nice update 👏👏really good looking forward to read more from ur writing ...Thanks for pm..😊😊


thank u so much...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's beautiful shavi.
Plz cont sn.
Tnx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RMGT

It's beautiful shavi.
Plz cont sn.
Tnx 4 pm


thank u...
updte wil b by tommorw...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shravani , you are an amazing writer .
Very good hand in writing .

Loving this Ts .


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yhm-KaruDivu

Shravani , you are an amazing writer .

Very good hand in writing .

Loving this Ts .



thank u so much dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART-2

NOTE: there is no ishra romance...read on your own risk guys...

Ishu woke up before raman arranged clothes, towel and his accessories... she informed toshiji that she is going is amma's house... shagun listenes it and thinks to go to raman's room but remembers her insult last night so drops the idea...

Ishu starts left over work in amma's house and decorates area with photos of vandu's in different phase of pregnancy from shravu's time to now... She kept vandu's bala's photos, bala's family photos too...some photos of iyyer's, ishu-mihika-vandu also...

Ishu is taking a look of every thing for last time as function will start in few minutes... bala's mom want to taunt her but dropped the idea of taunting after seeing ruhi with her... ishu never bothered for once about her presence or taunts...being ruhi with her always gives strength to her...

All bhalla's came including shagun...bala to arrived with guests from Chennai which include subbu and his wife, son too... ishu by seeing subbu with his family became a little sad but seeing raman entering the house she smiled... she just went to raman and spoke about nothing but just want to talk with him...bala is keenly observing each and every of ishu...

The rituals starts with amma and bala's mom filling with some gifts and sarees in vandu's godh... it follows by other family members... bala's mom wantedly asks shagun to perform ritual as she is mother...raman kept quiet not to cause any issue for vandu's happiness... even mihika to perform the ritual...ishu is about to perform and raman goes out to attend some call... bala's mom and shagun seeing their chance stops ishu by saying she cant perform ritual as she cant conceive( I don't want to use word baanj...) and she is not a mother... even shagun adds by saying its will not be good for vandita if you perform ritual... vandu want to speak but stops herself because she want her sister to fight for herself... amma too keeps quiet... toshiji and ruhi wants to rescue her but for their surprise ishu speaks that iam having a daughter and iam mother too so I will perform the ritual and moves towards vandu to do the ritual but stopped by shagun' words... raman just heard ishu defending herself and understood that bala's mom taunted ishu...

Shagun did not notice raman and says dusro ki bacche ko apna bache banker koyi bhi maa banskati hain...( anyone can become mother by adopting other's child) to which ishu replies her by saying ruhi is not some one's child she is my husband and my child... sirf mein aur mein hei ruhi ki maa hoon...( only iam ruhi's mother...) don't ever forget ruhi is giving respect for you just because of me... she is calling mom to just because of my upbringing... ruhi is ishra's daughter and it is accepted legally too... that ISHITA RAMAN BHALLA is ruhi's mom... so never dare to say that iam not a mother nor ruhi is my daughter... I know you gave birth to ruhi but giving birth is not mother's duty it includes upbringing tooo...and who can leave their child for comforts and luxuries don't become mother... so you better don't call yourself as a mother atleast ruhi's mother who did not even know face of her daughter... don't ever forget that ruhi knows you because of me...raman is smiling by seeing JKR mode and feeling happy... she happily perform ritual for vandu...

Raman comes and joins her and entwil his hand with her's, pressing her hands with his... ishu is enjoying raman's proximity but ishu noticing vandu too... at glance she understood her akka is having some problem so leaves raman's hand and she immediately moves towards her and asks the issue to which vandu places ishu's hand on her whomb to feel the kick of the child... everyone feels happy for kick of their child but bala's mom taunts by saying you are mother to ruhi but you can never experience this phase of 9 months and kick of child... shagun smirks with happiness... Raman wants to shout on bala's mom and about to raise voice but looking at ishu having tears make raman to stop his act and wants to console her but she runs from the place immediately... Raman angrily galres at bala's mom and moves out...

Bala waiting for this moment follows raman to their house... Even shagun too follows so that she can hear what their conversation...

Bala stops raman and about to start convo but raman stops him and says how you allowed this to happen... you know ishita morethan me then how you kept quiet and allowed this to happen upto this extent...she always cries when your mother insults her and you wont speak anything and lectures me about how to be good husband and how to take care of ishu... now I ask you what type of jiju you are making her cry like this and standing like an audience in the room...and says its not time for not all these ishita just needs me and I will talk with you later and better warn your mother because iam not letting her free after this time... she has to face me for sure...

Bala stops raman and says I wantedly did this...I know when my mom and my brother with his family come to the function...this is sure to be happen and to be frank im waiting for this to happen... what you know about ishita is very less compared to me... I seen her from when she is 15 and I know what ishita is not what doctor ishita...

Raman asks what you are saying... you wantedly made my wife cry and saying you wanted this to happen... What's wrong with you... bala says the ishita I know has dreams for life...but the moment her engagement broken with my so called stupid brother... she made herself like a person that seeing dreams also is a sin...she stopped living her life and smiling... when ruhi came into her life she started smiling again... with ruhi you too came into her life and then she started fighting tooo... she started fighting for ruhi with you and now started fighting for you too... but today she fought for her which she did not do in her life time... she stood by herself today... She proven that no one can dare to say that she is not ruhi's mother... you don't even don't why she left from their... raman says I know because your mother said about feelings of being mother and she cant take it so she left... bala laughs at raman and raman gets irritated and ask what... bala says this is the reason you never understand her... what she projects herself out is not that she is feeling the same inside... raman who is not having any paitance to listen to bala but says... don't make puzzles and say me why she left...

She went from their because of her memories with subbu and this function...raman asks WHAT..?? bala nods in a yes and says she totally forgotten her past and subbu but she couldnot forget one thing that the dreams she seen with subbu having a child... today when she saw subbu with his family she felt little sad not because subbu is happy with his wife and son but subbu left her for child... he just said to ishu that only child will be the reason of staying in marriage not the love between the couples... But by seeing you entering the house she smiled and came to you because you also think not having child makes couple being together but love between the couple is needed for being together...

Ishu accepted the fact that she cant conceive and she composed herself in such a way that hearing vandu's second pregnancy also did not break her... vandu showed each and every sonography report to ishu so that she can feel what a mother feels but my motive is different behind all these...I want ishu make cry and vent out her inseucrities... she is very strong, independent and can take her decisions by herself and has a wonderful family who will support in her each decision but she is not the strong person which she shows us... she is very sensitive and delicate...she never fought with subbu nor with my mother whenever she insulted being not becoming mother... but today she stood infront my mother and opened her mouth...

Raman life always gives two ways when our loved leave us...one is love and other is hate... when shagun left you... you have choosen hate and but when subbu left ishu she has choosen love... she never hated subbu for his betrayal...she only hated herself for choosing him...ishu took time to overcome but she never crossed path with subbu... she decided if she did not get happiness this doesnot mean that she will snatch subbu's... she is happy when subbu became father because for which happiness he left ishu today he has that... and ishu never learnt hating because she want don't want to remember him by hate too... when you came into her life she started fighting and she found her new side...

She never believed in fighting and getting nor complaining about any thing... She just became a doll and accepted every thing that came into her life...I treated ishu has sister and my younger brother has son...I hope you will also treat romi as son not brother... but what my brother did with ishu is not acceptable... from that day I left my family for ishu and played boy friend, lover, jiju and brother for her...I flirted with ishu everytime to make her feel that she deserves happinees and she dersves flirts, love and life too like any other girl...but never succeeded until your marriage proposal happened... she did not see any dreams with you but she dreamt of being a mother for ruhi and I slowly gained ishu who once seen dreams...but today she break down because of vandu's child kick... when we are having shravu... ishu and subbu are very excited and pampered vandu a lot... subbu and ishu felt shravu's kick first and ishu dreamt of being a mother for first time... today her dream of being a mother stuck her, the dreams of life which seen once stuck her... She went into her past for the first time... and Iam really waiting for this moment... if she gets into her past she will become normal if not she herself composes and becomes doctor ishita who knows her medical condition who accepted truth but never shared her pain...

The problem with both of you is you never share your problems and you never fight together for that... raman ishu has overcome her weakness but I want her pain to overcome too... and coming to you never overcome your weakness... you have to fight with your weakness but you only reacts emotionally when it comes to your weakness... I hope you understood which weakness iam saying to you...

Now iam saying you another fact... when its come ishu and others even it includes vandu & shravu... I will choose her over all and this fact knows to vandu also... because ishu is my weakness and this is known to all but she made me to overcome this weakness... so I choose ishu over anyone but not for my weakness but the way she made me to overcome my weakness...I dont even think twice if ishu is right or wrong...i will stand by her even she did not need me also...I never question her decision but only accept it without thinking because of the trust I had on her

Being a perfect husband not only includes giving away presidentship, taking care of amma and appa, keeping ishu's name board on the front door...it also includes accepting your spouse anger, weakness and insecurities... ishu always felt insecured about ruhi because not the love for her but the weakness she has for ruhi...and she is tolerating shagun not because of adi it's the trsut she has on you and your love towards her... she never feel insecured about you because now shagun don't dominate your senses... this is what she gave in her relationship to you raman... now its your turn to give her what she deserves and take out all her insecurities and weakness... I hope now you will start to understand her cries and her words...

P.S: comments and critisism are accepted...

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4302375/ts-lets-face-it-together-last-part-on-pg-17

Edited by shravani_2311 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
awesome well written loved it.bala was waesome .shagun ka kuch nhi hosakta
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
super loved it pls update soon

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