ishra Ss' Bade Papa ' updt last part pg 116 august 31 - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hansa please continue dear you are doing very good in both story and i love both.If you are comfortable in Hindi is fine I think many of your fan happy to help you out in English it might be small group of reader who didn't know Hindi like me but I am very happy and appreciate with your dedicate and your talent so do whatever you feel happy dear.🤗🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Hansa please continue dear you are doing very good in both story and i love both.If you are comfortable in Hindi is fine I think many of your fan happy to help you out in English it might be small group of reader who didn't know Hindi like me but I am very happy and appreciate with your dedicate and your talent so do whatever you feel happy dear.🤗🤗



thx you so much for your support I will do it im glad to have friends like u all
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey dear you are writing really very very good 👏... please dont stop writing 😒 🥺 continue ur both SS and I am really very thankful to u for writing 'Bade Papa' u are doing a gr8 job 👍🏼 U hv made it really very interesting and wonderful .. I wld hv nvr been able to think how to bring Sarika in Bhalla house ... u hv done it excellently ... m just loving it ... Please continue writing and don't feel bad for writing in English u are doing good and writing in English will help u learn more and enhance ur writing skills, but if u feel uncomfortable u can switch to Hindi I am fine with it.
U are an Superb Imaginator and Writer please keep writing ... PLEASE
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ekta979

Hey dear you are writing really very very good 👏... please dont stop writing😒🥺 continue ur both SS and I am really very thankful to u for writing 'Bade Papa' u are doing a gr8 job👍🏼 U hv made it really very interesting and wonderful .. I wld hv nvr been able to think how to bring Sarika in Bhalla house ... u hv done it excellently ... m just loving it ... Please continue writing and don't feel bad for writing in English u are doing good and writing in English will help u learn more and enhance ur writing skills, but if u feel uncomfortable u can switch to Hindi I am fine with it.

U are an Superb Imaginator and Writer please keep writing ... PLEASE



wow it a huge comliment from you ekkta im thankful to to who ask to do on this concept your support means a lot thank you so much n will cont it as all my friends said the same thx again for support
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hanzu sis , what are you saying yaar ! What if an awesome writer will stop writing ? You are an amazing writer . And I don't get any difficulties in reading your updates . Keep going behna !
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Yhm-KaruDivu

Hanzu sis , what are you saying yaar ! What if an awesome writer will stop writing ? You are an amazing writer . And I don't get any difficulties in reading your updates . Keep going behna !



thank you jaise for give me courage n support too with your comment im glad to have friend like you dont worry I will do it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi guys a big thx for all comments of yours which has give more courage to cont my work thx a lot im back home will have to go after two weeks again now for treatment. happy to be here again. here we go


bade papa

part 7

scene start with

romi call sarika n ask her if she want to eat some thing from out side. she said pani puri she want to eat n should be spicy too.

romi brought for every one as he know simi or ishita may tease him.

after reaching home he give to ishita to serve all . when he was going to sarika ishita tease him on saying.

arey wah romi you brought pani puri for us but im sure it was some one else who wanted it right. in teasing mode

bhabi you too now you are pulling my leg. with shy n smile he leave

ishita share with every one.

sarika share the pani puri with romi, it was so stasty n spicy she love it n thx romi too.

romi ask her how was her day. she answ how it was . both was talking even she ask his day he share it how it was.

sarika got text n smile n reply n ignore romi too. romi think it mani as she was smilling when she was reading text n he leave her with her privacy.

after he left the room sarika say sorry romi I have to ignore or hurting you only for you to realise your love for me n for our baby too. to herself with a sad face.

simi stop romi n ask him in which ocasion he brought pani puri . with smile n teasing mode

he said simi di you too being my sis you are teasing me I wanted to brought it that all. in embarrasing mode n leave.

toshi come to simi n say how romi has started to change now hope soon he too get happiness too.

simi console her on saying dont worry every will be fine soon have faith in god . she got a text she smile n leave from there.

raman come home he check on sarika n ask how her health is , she reply him n he leave.

ishita in her room was arranging clothes in almari n raman enter in he walk silently toward her n put his both arms around her waist from behind.

ishita knowing his touch act as she dont know who is he n say.


kaun ho tum agar mere pati ne dega kai tum istara se uski biwi ko gale lagarahe ho to gair nahin tumhara.

( who are you if my hubby saw you hugging his wife then you are gone)

oh really tum hare pati itni katarnak hai , lekin woh bewakuf hai jo aise rousuraat biwi ko akela chora zamana karab hai. with a kiss on her neck

( oh really your hubby is so dangerous , but he is a fool to let a beautiful wife alone , world is very bad ) .

she kiss his hand too.

arey sharam nahin tum ek rhair mard ko kiss karti ho woh bi kulam kula .

yeh dont you have shame to kiss another man that too open place.

nahin agar pati der se woh teen lavz lai ne se time lai sak ta hai to yehin hoga na biwi kisi aur ke saath hin jayegi. with smile.

( no if husband take so much time to say the three words then that will happen wife will leave him)

oh hello madem you too did not say it even I say I will search another one too. he broke the hug n walk way to see what will she do.

oy oy mere pati naraz jogaye . try to go close to him.

( oh my hubby is angry )

she go in front of him she put her both arms around his neck n goes close to him n both have eyeslocks.

what is your intention han. he ask

nothing just want to be close with you like this.

he put his hands on her waist to pull her more close to him.

if you want to be close to me then it should me like this.

raman i should bring your tea .

to go who stop you . he blow on her face .

which make her know whar he want.

any body can come.

let them come im with my wife. kiss her forehead

it not time for it.

I dont care about time. kiss one eye

ruhi may come.

it not today she will come. kiss another eye

woh mumiji may call me.

she know im here she will not call you. kiss one cheek

raman.

hmmm. kiss nose

sarika may need me.

romi n simi are there to take care of her. kiss another cheek

now only lips was left to kiss she know if he will kiss her lip it could go in other way . he pull her more close to him his hands was caressing her bare waist to make her feel sensuous.

her face was expressing what she was feeling n getting too.

woh raman . he dont let her cont talk

he kiss her on lips n she respond his kiss n they move their tongue in every angle their hands move on caressing other body with love attraction. they broke kiss to breath then again kiss then he kiss her neck even she kiss his neck. both was lost in kiss n forget if the door was open.

when ishita saw the door open.

she say door is open raman or if some one has seen us. feel embarrassed n leave .

raman talk alone. im a fool why I did not close the door we would cont our kiss setion too.

ishita was doing tea for raman

simi n sarika was talking then romi come simi leave them alone. romi was doing his work there sitting on coach n sometime he gaze her too.

when raman came down for tea simi was staring him even his father n toshi then they laugh at him in a hide way . ishra look at each ever with a confused face .

simi go to ishita n said wow early early romance han. in a low voice n hit her shoulder to ishita .

she ask what she is talking. in a blushing way in low voice.

you leave your lipstick on bhai neck check it . with smile n teasing mode.

she saw the mark n shy she went to raman n taks him in a corner n ask him why hw did not look in mirror before coming down .

he ask why he should look in mirror .

she wipe his neck n feel embarrassed in front of her laws .

mr bhallah say dont feel shy it happen even with us right toshiji .

toshi reply have some shame you are talking with our d I law.

ishra was shy n smile too .

later it was dinner time sarika wanted to have dinner with all family . romi carry her till table to eat . they were talking laughing too. after dinner romi take her in garden to have fresh air then in room .

he stay in room doing his work when he know sleep hw went to cover her n was about to touch her face but he stop n say good night to her n leave .

sarika open her eyes n say good night romi having tears in her eyes .


thx

love hansa

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hope you will like it n will do comment too .

next raman say he will be bade papa soon


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thank you so much for comment im glad
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
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thank you so much shravi im glad you like it n see it great too

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