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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: RomComFan
Amna.. this is fabulous.
I love the back and forth. Love that he's the one that's longing and she seems to sense something too, as resistant as she is.
Black & white is the classic office wear combo non .. so good.

Seems there might be more to Rohan then meets the eye... interesting.

Love the different set up... can't wait for more!😊

Black and white- nothing beats this classic combination. I am in love with this one nowadays.

I love these double meaning, to and fro conversations. As they say, there is nothing more erotic that a good conversation.

Rohan- I think given the response I need to mend a bit and make you all see him in neutral light because I wanted tough competition for Raman not an easy way out for ishita.

Thank you Anu!

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: pomegranate
everyone is already hating on rohan, not me because I hardly know him.
first, I love that ishita is a successful business woman in pencil skirts. always good to see modern ishita in fanfictions.

Raman already fell for her, but she is engaged. so will that lead to forbidden romance?

And I wonder if it was my writing that made them see him as a hindrance or was it their love for ishita and raman! But thanks for being neutral about him since I haven't yet decided much about his character.

I'm glad you liked the changes I made Zara!

Forbidden romance? Perhaps not. Let's find out soon :)

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Viji15

@Viji15

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Quite a start!

I love your writing!

The story is yet to catch my heart..,

knowing its your piece of your work...I can confidently say i will fall in love with it!😃

update soon :)

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Another story from you.. Great start!! Raman fell in love with Ishita at first sight

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usaonly

@usaonly

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

I love this FF Amna it really different style of Raman and Ishu the first meeting quite impress Raman try to get attention from her.What is the English meaning of the name of this story can you please tell me? Will wait for next update Where is Rohan gone that make Ishu wait like we wait for you?

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Viji15
Quite a start!
I love your writing!
The story is yet to catch my heart..,
knowing its your piece of your work...I can confidently say i will fall in love with it!😃
update soon :)

Thank you viji!

Aww I hope it will live upto your expectations :)

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: frenzyy
Another story from you.. Great start!! Raman fell in love with Ishita at first sight

Yes, its me again!

Thank you :)

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: usaonly
I love this FF Amna it really different style of Raman and Ishu the first meeting quite impress Raman try to get attention from her.What is the English meaning of the name of this story can you please tell me? Will wait for next update Where is Rohan gone that make Ishu wait like we wait for you?

Thank you jum! I'm glad you likes the premise so far :)