FF || Tu Hai Ke Nahi || Chapter 5 on page 33 - Page 22

Originally posted by: shravsss

Haha.. So you are updating now...

I would like to know... What happens to ur Protagonist...😃

I would share my experience... tooo when I get to read yours...😳

Originally posted by: nrn1486

You're back😲

I thought you'd never get around to completing this story. So this update comes as a pleasant surprise!

I hope you stick around, Aamna.. love your IshRa fics😃

Originally posted by: -banu-

Aiyyoo... you are back...

Originally posted by: Samilicious..

The moment when you initially read something and make a few comments but, then you reread it and you begin too see the authors perspective. Which, eventually changes your initial thoughts! And this is what just happened to me, you proved me WRONG 😲 and you know what I'm on about! 😛

Originally posted by: aaminah123

My advice of reading it from beginning worked, eh? 😃

I'm glad it changed your mind and I do know what you are on about 😳

Of course your advice always works (not tried it with BOY yet 🤔😛)

How perfect are these two? 😳 I just need some place where I can gush over them

Raman= Chuck
Ishita= Blair
Rohan= Nate 😆
Aisha= Jenny 🤣


On a serious note, I really would love to the concept of this FF written as a novel because I tell you what the concept is so damn good. And it needs to be more than an FF If this ever turned into a movie or show, I would love to see GG cast 😛

And I'm sure in the upcoming chapters we will get to see the intensity between R&I like C&B 😳 I'm already excited 😉




^This dialogue said by Chuck totally is for R&I

Originally posted by: Samilicious..

Of course your advice always works (not tried it with BOY yet 🤔😛)

How perfect are these two? 😳 I just need some place where I can gush over them

Raman= Chuck check

Ishita= Blair. No
Rohan= Nate check
Aisha= Jenny No


On a serious note, I really would love to the concept of this FF written as a novel because I tell you what the concept is so damn good. And it needs to be more than an FF If this ever turned into a movie or show, I would love to see GG cast 😛

And I'm sure in the upcoming chapters we will get to see the intensity between R&I like C&B 😳 I'm already excited 😉




^This dialogue said by Chuck totally is for R&I

And I know I still need to review all the chapters Gosh I'm being so lazy these days 😵 I will overcome my laziness once you give me another update 😛

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Haha you see I like the men from GG hence I need to find new characters yo replace Ishita and Aisha. Jenny used to be my favorite until the first season. May be Serena can be Aisha, she does have the potential of being a model ;)

Review the chapter so that I can get my thoughts to sort out the next chapter!

Originally posted by: Samilicious..

I like Aisha
I like Rohan
I like Raman
I like Ishita
Gosh is there any character who I don't like in this fiction 🤔😆 And why do i always end up liking all of them, oh its because of you and the way you have written each and every character!
Firstly, I'm glad that you did decide to continue this and even if you weren't going too, I was going to force you Plus after hearing the concept, I'm super duper excited to see how you continue to write it!
Your Raman reminds me of Miles (Looking for Alaska) & Quentin (Papertowns), somehow you always bring me back to JG 😆 It's not my fault, the credit goes to you and your characters. Coming back to Raman, I have to say he has to be my favourite character in this FF (I know I just love the guys), he is a charmer and man of anyone's dreams 😛😳 However, I did hope that his character had was some shadiness.

This chapter was indeed full of mysteries, it was so short yet you managed to tell us so much. Most importantly, the emphasis on Raman's feelings towards Ishita was the highlight of the chapter for me, no matter how much he loves her, he knows that the odds are against him and he will have her. This therefore, brings me to my favourite extract from the chapter "And who would have the pleasure of such enjoyment and praising her? He thought bitterly as he recalled the answer. Not him. At least in this lifetime." I'm so glad that Raman is not living in denial, and I love the fact that he hasn't told his feelings too Ishita. I also reckon Ishita doesn't need to know yet 😛

Rohan seems like a douchebag but, I still like him and I want to read more about him. I have so many questions in regards to him but, I won't ask instead will wait for your upcoming chapters! I've always wanted to see Ishita in trouble 😆 Oh I hope something happens to her...

And I really do hope that the child Aisha is carrying is Raman's 😛 Like I said to you before, I'd like to see the child born as a still born (makes it more sad). Anyways, I'll be looking forward to seeing what you present to me...

Overall, after reading the chapter several times I loved it...It was short and sweet. And I don't think I need to say anything about your writing becauseyou always seem to nail it with your writing!

P.S. Can I just say I've missed reviewing your work here (I'm joking 🤣) Anyways, look below 😆




^That's me giving you a hug after reading the chapter! 😆😉

And I'll end my review with this quote "The more you leave out, the more you highlight what you leave in." Update soon darling 😳

xoxo