IshRa TS : WHILE SHE WAS ASLEEP - COMPLETE - Page 9

Originally posted by: Isha_Pathare

Mind blowing update piyu di ...just loved it ...thodi time keliye laga this shagun will spoil it all ...but I trust you 😉 ...poor raman he must had toughest 3 months ...but aant bhala toh sab bhala ...awesome ...thanks for the pm 😊

Originally posted by: -Pankhuri-

now i am really really angry...aaj tu story khatam karo mission pe hai kya...first bin tere and now this one you ended both 😭😭

coming to update...it was as always the best...i loved how you showed the pain Raman went through the engrossment of himself in bars to forget the pain 👏

and finally the ending 😳😳

lovely update Piyu...i have never seen such a beautiful ending to any of the stories i have read lately on the forum

Originally posted by: Dilshika

Wonderful update! Awesome.

Originally posted by: RMGT

Beautiful update dr.
Love it.
Bt y r u ending ur all stories? Plz start new ones.
Tnx 4 pm

Originally posted by: lourel24

Amazing update

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

oh so finally the were together...

:)

great story..lots of confusion...:P

but loved it..

loved all the emotions portrayed in the story..

lovely part!!!!!

Originally posted by: pretty_h

wow superb love it piyu well done the way you write it too good the time both was after shagun come out n then you make her fall for him that remind me of the movie of har dil jo pyaar karega lol salman preety n rani thx for it