ff ' I am with u' updtd part 17 on pg 28 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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read all parts in one go.wndrfl ff.loved it.pm me if psbl
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
This is quite a fun story
I like it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
A very very gr8 FF dear 😃 I really loved it ... u write soo good 👏
U have written each and evry scene so nicely i liked it ...
Raman's entry and his description was also just excellent ... I literally imagined him stepping down from the car and taking off his glasses. . ☺️ 😳
Raman's reaction and his way to shock BM is superb 👍🏼... excited for next part ...
Plz update soon and also please PM me PLEASE 😒
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
I read all 11 parts in one go...
Such a beautiful story..
Awesome...
Please pm me the next part..😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plz update soon yaar...We r waiting...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hai friends sorry for the late update...Thoda busy shedule

here is the next update..Actually in the show i liked the way ishu calling Raman as Ramu..so thought to include this here..

Hope u enjoy it..

PART 12:

All were shocked by his change in behaviour..

ishu raman ko kya hogaya..I thought he will reply to mummy ji about u but he is not saying anything..

I too don't know akka..iss Raavan kumar ka dimak me kya chalraha he??

Akkas just chill..jiju ne sabke samne tumne introduce karna chatata...he is so cute...

Raman along with others are sitting in the living room..(except BM and subbu)

Kya Raman aap mujhe bataya nahi aap yaha aanewala hai..

mene tho surprise dena chatata lakin I don't know that I will get a surprise..I don't know that this subramanyam is subbu and u will be here..o my god I thought I was imagining u..

BM bola ki kal RKB anewala hai arrangements karo..tab hame patachala

oh tho tumko kal hi patha he ki may aaraha hu...

ha..I also thought to surprise u thats why I didn't ask u

Jhansi ki raani...tumne mujhe surprise nahi almost heartattack diya tha..

Koun JKR beta...

(aagayi.she is not allowing me to talk with my madraasan)wo aunty ji mere wife ko yaad kar raha tha...

unka naam JKR he??

nahi aunty..vunki Harkathe JKR ki hothi he..

what is that lucky girls name??

all suddenly turned to them and waiting for his answer..

are ab me kya karu...just then Mihir called him..

bachaliya mihir ne..took the phone..

ha mihir bolo

ha..aj raath ko mujhe vo papers chayiye..

kal me unko handover karna chatata...

ok bye...

then the dinner also done quietly but starring at eachother..

Subbu is eating while staring at ishu..this is obseved by both ishu and Raman..

(thinking) iss subbu ne aisa dekhraha hai ki vo vusse khaletha hai..so to distract him from seeing ishu he coughed...suddenly Ramans alarm is activated...Raman and ishu are smiling looking at it..

Ye beta e gaana kyu ?? any thing special..

ha vo mere biwi ki yaad dilathi mujhe e gaana..

miku winked at ishu ...

ho...acha beta..lagtha hai u love her so much..

he just smiles at her..

she is so lucky to have u in her life..

no aunty i am lucky to have her...and I want to thank u for it..

ha..why thanks for me and for what..

then he realised what he said...ha vo..aap ne meri intna acha welcome kiya na isliye thanku bola..

they finished dinners and heading to their rooms...

Ruhi ajj tuna chitti ke saat soyegi na..hum bahot saari stories padenge aur bahot saari games khelenge... said winking at ishu

wow..chitti..games..ok..chalona...

Raman (thinking)..wow..miku mere halat ko samjhi tumne..thank u and meri madrasan ajj tho mujhse bachne waali nahi hu..

Ishu smilingly entered her room and started making her bed...Raman followed her and entered the room..and directly hugged her from behind..she also responded for his touch..

Raman chodiyena..koy dekhlega..

oye..meri biwi se Romance karthe huye samay me mujhe disturb math karna..by saying he placed a small peck on her neck..

waise mera sawaal ka jawaab abhi tak nahi diya tumne..

ha..what was the question??

wahi...tum mujhe miss kiya nahi..or tumhari subbu ki chakkar me mujhe bhooli gayi??

suddenly she jerked out of his clutches and turned towards him with teary eyes..kya kaha aap ne..subbu ki chakkar me??

are why are u crying baby..I was just joking...

e mazzak lagtha he tumne...How can u say that..I don't want to talk to u..joa yaha se..

I am sorry yaar..I am just joking..please sorry bolana khaan pakad ke..pls..pls..

If u don't talk to me I can't live ishu..pls..by saying he hugged her..

tike..maff kiya agar dubaara aise baat kiya na...I will not talk to u..vaise I missed u so much...

acha..kithna yaad aayimeri..??

ithna..by saying she kissed him on his cheek..

hoy..hoy..madrasaan ithna bold hogayi he..

meri Ramu keliye luch bhi...

Ramu..?? e kaisa naam he..mera naya naam he kya..

ha..ajj se may tumne pyaar se Ramu bulathi hu..how cute na..

acha..lekin mujhe na..jab tumn pyaar se Raavan kumar bolthi hu na tab achha lagtha hai..koi baat nahi...e bhi acha hai...lekin ek sharat pe..

kya??

Tike bulao uss naamse..but only u have the right to speak that name and I call u ishu..and only I should call u like that deal??

tike baba..

now u will waste my time with these talks or kuch kaam bhi karthe?? winking at her...

are ek do din ke baat mili hamne..baat tho karsakthi hena..lekin aap kuch aur soch rahi he..besharam..

acha..besharam ki baat karrahe ho..ab dikhati hu vuska mathlab kya hai..by saying he directly attacked her lips..started so softly and passion increased as intensity increased..after some time they parted for oxygen and both are breathing heavily...

ab samaj me aaya...dont mess up with me..

she smiled at him just then her door was knocked..

ab koun hai..kabab me haadi..

me dekthi hu..aap vaha jayie koi dekhlega..

by saying she went to open the door and shocked to see subbu at that time..meanwhile Raman is standing behind the curtains just beside the parting door..

subbu..Tum is samay me kya kar rahe ho??

Subbu: ishu after many days we met na..I think we can talk for some time..

Raman(thinking)..e tho ishu bola..mera right e kept face irritatingly

subramanyam...I already said u to call me ishitha not ishu and...No..I don't want to talk any thing with u..so please excuse me..

Raman: thats my ishu...ab sale ishitha bolo varna..tume mardelenge vo...

I know u were angry with me but..

before completing ishu interupted...I am not angry with u subramanyam..Actually I am thank full to u..bcz of u only Raman entered my life..so I am not angry with u and Even I am not having any feeling like hate..also bcz u r not related to me in any way..so please exuse me..

oh..fine..by saying he moved out with sad face..

Raman moving other side by mistake he hitted to parting door and moved to other room..and shocked to see his room..tho kya baat he beta..tumhari kismath ko dekho..pehele chennai phir..subbu ka ghar..ab iss madrasan ka attatched Room..

His thoughts were interupted by the knock to his room..

subramanyam aap..yaha..

sir vo aap keliye fax aaya tha mihir sir se..

oh..thank u..

are u feeling comfirtable sir?

ha..ha..I am fine..I was so tired so I think I should sleep early..

oh...he understood that he littrally saying to leave him..fine sir gud night.

gud night..

here ishu is searching for Raman..kaha chali gayi thi e raman..

suddenly he comes and hugs her from back..and says yaha..

vase aap iss papers pe sign karo na..uske baat mujhe bahot kam he..

Raman e sabh ki kyaa jaroorath he..?

pls ishu mere liye..

she sighned and gave it to him..

he immediately put those papers on a table and picked her in his arms and headed towards the bed...

(I think u can assume what happened there after...)😉

actually I am weak at writing romantic scenes..so i think u should adjust with these simple ones..sorry for those who expected hot romance..

precap: Launch..program


note:

guys My exam schedule is released so I can't update till next sunday..

I promise I will update on Monday..

Hope u understand..

Thank u

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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
awesome update
loved ishu and raman romance
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
awesome update...
loved it...

i love ishra's romnce...

ishu answering subbu was suprb..

i vl wait fr monday...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome yaar.loved ishra romance thnx fr d pm
Edited by aviana - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
👏 wow ishitha answering subbu
thanks for pm

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