All Of Me, Loves All Of You - IshRa SS | Last Chp - Page 89 - Page 68

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anku-

There are some emotions, some confusions, some moments that can't be explained, but just felt by a person undergoing them. But its the success of a writer when he/she can express that moment so beautifully that the reader can understand all of it in one read.


Raman and Ishita here are going about a simple task of wanting to get Ishita changed. But just doing that has made them go throw a volley of emotions. From facing the ghosts of their past, to getting closer emotionally and finally physically, they've gone through a journey of a lifetime just in a day, just in a moment rather.

Their love is defined by the amount of trust they have in each other, the closeness they share emotionally by always being there for the other. But as husband and wife/man and woman they definitely have moments when they feel physically attracted and today was one such moment when they want to cross that barrier and give each other that love they've both craved for. Raman wants to make her feel wanted, wants to feel accepted as unlike how he was with Shagun. Ishita wants to feel desired by him and wants to be loved , to be healed and wants to give him the acceptance. Not wanting to reject the moment and cause him more pain. They almost go about it.. but there lies the beauty where they think more for the other than themselves.

Loved how he stopped, loved how she apologized, fearful for having hurt him. Just mesmerized by how he calmed her. Raman's maturity and sensitivity in the approach was splendid.

I've loved every part of the short story Aani .. didn't want it to be over. It was beautiful, mature and dealt with the complexities of a growing relation.

Please continue writing 😃I think I am going to get withdrawal symptoms 😆



Anku this is such a sweet, generous and amazing comment - THANK YOU. 🤗 its like you wrote a summary of my SS - this is that wonderful and insightful.


Readers like you keep me coming back here, I will be here as soon as inspiration strikes again and you know it 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Aani only you could have made a short story, when the protagonists were in the same room, same clothes, during the same day and time! Wow!

The intimate moments between them were so hot, yet so beautiful. Her innocence and his efforts to not pounce on her. The last chapter more than made up for all the wait, at least I did to get them change. Thoroughly enjoyed it. And I know I'm soon going to read it again because it deserves at least a second read.

Kudos!



Hey Aamna thank you so much ☺️ 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rozy77

gosh, such an amazing, sensuous part☺️☺️☺️
thanks a ton for making it lengthy 🤗. i was taking my time in reading it . it was so so beautiful...❤️

finally they got down to changing the clothes 😆... i must applaud Raman's controlling abilities. he proceeded to change Ishita in such a deliciously, achingly slow way that no wonder both were turned on ☺️. its great that they found solace in those hot kisses☺️
i just dont have the correct words right now to describe how mind-blowing the entire scene was. i will never get tired of typing that you are so brilliant at this👏👏

what a lovely journey this has been. Am gonna miss it, but will keep coming back every time to read it all over again😃

thanks for sharing it with us
take care🤗


Thanks Rozy 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aashiqua

Oh god..u r an amazing writer...your style of writing and the beauty of each word..I don't know how to appreciate it...it's just beautiful the way you portray emotions through words...truly gifted ...


thanks Aashiqua 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

Very beautifully written.

You're really an commendable author.
love the way you express the emotions.


thanks Vidya 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

Res.
I am on a vacation. 😊


take your time Sneha 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Aani thanks for update last past was beautifully portray their loving and care toward together. Raman have to wait till Ishu recover so he can start his journey with her and now he know she can make him happy too not like he had experience with his ex. Their understanding and good communication will help their love to be stronger and live happily this is what we want in the show buy I guess that day still to far to come. Thank you so much for this beautiful story and hope you will have new story come up in the future. Have a wonderful weekend dear.👏👏


thanks a lot dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RomComFan

This is such a wonderful ending to this beautiful story. I looove the quotes at the beginning the last two especially are books I quite enjoyed reading so they have a special place in my heart.

Love your words about the birthmark and the way you described the disrobing and the way she expressed her feelings about how far they have come is just amazing... so well done.

And the ending with Ru and the questions and ISHRA's little battle over answering... perfection. Yet another amazing piece of work from you... I am just going to be presumptuous and say I can't wait for the next one!😊




Thanks so much Anu 😊

Hope the next one happens soon cause frankly I cant write just out of the blue, need to be inspired 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyyy finally managed to read this one. Sooo late man 😕
This was just beautiful Aani. U write amazingly, 😛 Love the little details u give😳
Am going to look forward to ur next. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally I managed to sneak some time from my hectic schedule to catch up on this...I was waiting eagerly to read this part from the time u had updated this part. I was waiting for the perfect moment to read this n finally managed to grab one.😊

Aani...This part was so mesmerising!! I was so into this!!! My Good God u r a magician!! Was it ur writing or the effects of Ishra that managed to create a spell on me!! I was in a different world I must say!! Hats off to u girl for casting such an effect on ur readers wit ur writing...All adjectives fail to describe what an amazing writer, analyser, story teller u r!!!

A BIG BIG HUG to u my girl...🤗

Don't blame me here for insisting u to come up with another tale now 😳
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