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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#211

oh so beautiful part..

loved their convo about their relation being real...

the surprised tone with which he asked whether she really is not mad was not at all surprising..:)

they have come along way in their relation..

its nice to see them now at this stage together...

u portrayed all the emotions very well...which made it all the more beautiful...

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143rhb

@143rhb

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#212

First of all thank for pm

Super update.

curiously waiting for next update.

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appuss

@appuss

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Superb update Aani👏... I can actually see the scene playing in front of my eyes😃

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khushi

@khushi_shankar

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#214

Really nice story! Please do update soon.

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smilydear

@smilydear

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Wow Ani! Great.

Thanks for PM.

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DipaRB6

@DipaRB6

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Love reading your stories. They communicate ishra inner feelings and thought processes so well. Looking forward to the next part!

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#217

OMGG that was beautifulll Aaniii dear!

loved itt so muchh.. the piled up emotions inside their heads/hearts finally spilled out. loved those bold lines said by Ishita and the kisss!!! eeks!! beautiful..

cont soon... im waiting

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#218

It was awesomely written Aani!

loved the way she assured him that she was ok with his changing her clothes...and the last part was so romantic! ☺️

cont soon!

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Wela

@Wela

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#219

Loved the update... I love the John Legend song too so you had me hooked with the title...u weave an amazing story that keeps u wanting for more 😳 Looking forward to reading more..Update Soon pls!!!

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#220

loved it!

their physical awareness and slow acceptance from ishita's point of view was brilliant 👏 i loved how you showed ishita not wanting to titillate but belong 👍🏼

aww raman- very sweet allaying ishita's disappointments about losing the race

and of course lovely end😃

continue soon

Edited by rutu83 - 10 years ago