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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Guys,

This is my first story ever. I cannot stop thinking about the olv on Shagun and Ishita. This is how I like the story to proceed from there. Please give your review after reading this.

Thanks.

Ishita Decision

Ishita comes back from her date with Raman and she sees Shagun trying to slap Ruhi. She holds Shagun hands and warns her if she tries this again she will throw her out of the house.

Shagun says you cannot do that as I have an ammunition name Adi as long as he with me no one will be able to throw me out of this house. He is Raman's and Toshiji's weakness. Shagun also taunts Ishita saying that you love Raman. You will do anything for him so you want be able to send Adi out of the house because If I go he will come with me.

You are a glorified nanny in this house. Don't you remember how they asked you to apologize to me because of Adi and Raman has not touched you because he still loves me. Shagun further taunts Ishita saying that you don't have any standing in this house. Ishita doesn't say anything and goes to her room and closes the door. Shagun thinks she has shown Ishita her place in this house and she will be able to do anything from now on.

Ishita meanwhile thinks she has to show Adi his mother is manipulating him so she makes a few calls and waits for the results. When the call comes back everything is arranged she goes out of her room to prepare dinner for everyone.

In the evening Ishita calls everyone to the hall. Raman, Toshjii, Mr.Bhalla, Romi, Simmi,Mihir, Amma , Appa, Ruhi, Adi and Shagun all come there and everybody has question on their face why did she call them here.

There is a knock on the door. Ishita opens to find two gentlemen with Neil. She invites them inside the house. Raman asks Ishita who are they and what Neil is doing here. Ishita looks at everyone and tells them as mother of Ruhi, daughter in law of this house and Raman's wife she has taken some decision regarding Adi.

Shagun is thinking now Ishita is going to go away from this house to make Adi secure by that ensuring I get Raman.

Everyone is worried knowing Ishita's selfless nature. Raman is more worried what she has planned now. He calls her Ishita and when she turns and locks eyes with Raman whatever he see in her eyes gives him confidence and he doesn't talk anymore this is noticed by Shagun and she thinks if they are not in a relationship how can they convey what they want through their eyes.

Toshjii ask Ishita what decision you have taken about Adi. Ishita replies these are men from court they are here to exercise the court order against Raman as he cannot come within 30feet of Adi. I called them here with Mihir so that he can take Adi with him to his house.

Everyone is shocked because no one thought Ishita will do anything like that. Toshjii starts that he is Ghar ka chirag and after a long time he has come home she cannot let him go out of the house. She is saying Ishita I am your mother-in-law you have to listen to me. Shagun smirks and thinks she Ishita what I told you is happening.

Ishita address Mr.Bahalla and ask him can't she take any decision in this house matter. He says whatever you have done for Ruhi is always good so I will trust you to do what is good for Adi as well. Ishita calms Toshjii and lets her know she will make everything fine. Toshjii is in two minds now. She wants Adi to stay but she also cannot go back on her husband's word.

Ishita ask Rommi, Simmi and Mihir do they have any problem with this arrangement. Everyone agrees to her decision. Shagun is in dilemma now as everyone has agreed to her decision but she thinks Raman has not yet spoken and he will definitely not let Adi go from this house.

Ishita finally looks at Raman. Raman looks into her eyes and does not speak a word. Ishita understood from their eye lock what Raman wants but she makes her heart hard and asks Shagun to pack up her bags and go with Mihir. Shagun comes to Raman and says he cannot let Adi go like this as he is in a safe environment and he is improving. Shagun shed crocodile tears and Adi cannot she his mom in this state and comes near her and says mom don't cry. He goes to Ishita and says you cannot do this as this is my house before you even came here. He cannot leave me for second time.

Ishita finally turns to Neil and get some papers from him and gives it to him. She says your father did not leave you but he could not come near you as he had restraining order to come near you. If you like to stay in this house ask your mom to sign these papers which says she is taking back the restraining order and she has to state that Raman is not an abusive father. Ishita tells Adi that if his mom signs these papers he can stay in this house or he has to go with Mihir. She says everything is in your mom hands now and gives the paper to Adi and goes and stands near Raman and gives him a light pressure on his hand.

Adi goes to his mom and asks why dad has restraining order against him. Shagun cannot give a credible answer to him and a very small doubt starts forming in his mind. Adi gives the papers to Shagun and asks what she wants to do. Everyone is looking at Shagun and she is trapped now so she signs the papers and gives it back to Raman and he gives it to Ishita and she asks Neil to file the papers in court and clear the legal matter. Neil leaves with the two gentlemen.

Mihir says he will also go to his house as the problem here is resolved. Amma comes and asks what this is all about. Ishita says only for her mother's ear this is starting stage of Kali roop. Amma blesses her and leaves with Appa. Everyone goes on their way. Raman takes Ruhi and Adi and goes to his room and hugs them both. Adi is starting to feel Raman love now somewhere in his mind but he is still poisoned by his mother's words so he cannot readily accept what is there in front of him but a very small soft corner is developing for his dad.

Ishita tells Shagun that this is her answer to her morning question. You thought I am very quiet and putting up with all your antics so you thought me weak. I will put up with anything but won't stand back if someone threatens my daughter and my family in my house.

Ishita says to Shagun did you see what standing I have in this house they treat me like their daughter. Raman does not have to confess his feelings through words or expensive gifts for me. I can understand his heart and he can understand mine. I showed you today what I can and will do for my family. Adi is my family and I will definitely get him from your clutches that is a promise and she leaves behind fuming Shagun.

Ishita puts Ruhi to sleep and checks on Adi and comes to her room. Once she is inside Raman closes the door and locks it as he does not want any disturbance now and takes her in a bone crushing hug. He asks what happened today you had to show how much I matter to you by taking this drastic step.

Ishita says are you not angry with me that I almost sent Adi out of this house. He says I know you. You will not do anything without a reason. Ishita tells what happens in the morning and all the things that have been happened in the house since they came to stay with them.

He gets angry with Shagun and Adi. He is spitting mad at her how can she even raise her hand to Ruhi and talk to Ishita like this. He wants to throw her out of the house right now. Ishita stops him and says if we throw her out now our Adi will also go with her. Raman is once again thinks how can she love Adi after what he put her through understanding Raman Ishita explains he has not done anything except act as a tool. Raman loves her more and wants to cherish her all his life.

Ishita tells Adi is not Ruhi. We have to show him how manipulative his mother is and bring him back to our family. Raman says we will fight together for our son.

Both of them are on their side of the bed for the first time without Ruhi. They look at each other since they have not confessed both of them did not want to consummate their marriage. They look into each other eyes and know what the other person thinks. Raman opens his arms and Ishita goes willing to him and they both sleep peacefully knowing well they are there to support each throughout their lives.

Hope you guys liked it. Give me your comments good or bad.

Edited by mayasundar - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
its Briliant way to SHOW her(Ishita) position inthe house of BHALLAS
you give the Idea of CV's ...but they are ...:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is what I call sensiable and logical move
Brilliant Os dear
Well written
Only if cvs had brains but by them loving Shagun and susu baccha cvs also lost their mind...showing crap thing
Would love to see such happening in serial as well but I know that can only happen in our dreams or in the forum stories
Anyways once again loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it...
Atleast ishu said to raman... Hop v can see lik this in shw too...


Nd i loved hw family members suprtd her...

Shagun herself traped... This is epic...

Ishu giving answers to shagun to her baseless words are suprb...

Raman having trust on her and supprtng her was suprb...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A fairly well written piece. :) A good read.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update...
well written
do write more..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful,OS dear. How smart Ishu is finally she use her brain to take over Shagun dumbnest and show her important in Raman life and his family. Hope they use this regal,process On TV too to get Adi back.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful update dear!👏
Actually..i must say this was a sensible update..which i really don't expect from yhm cvs 😆

Great..you gave them a gud idea...hope they do something like this only😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏👏 Wonderful and sensible OS Really wish something like this was shown in the show, especially mentioning the restraining orders against Raman (which every seems to have forgotten about)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is so lovely... thank you for a smart, refreshing take on this horrid OLV.😊


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