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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Samilicious..

Firstly, a question- Is it Aaminah or Amna? Apologies if I have been saying it incorrectly 😳

Thank me, WHY? I'm used to blabbering and how could I not for you 😳

Ahh YES, I should've guessed that you may not like reading in first person narration since you write in third person. I tell you what, it's harder to write in third person...AND you have nailed it sooo. You are damn perfect & talented with your writing skills Mashallah 👏
Coming back to John Green... Agree his books are in first person narration but, he provides us with a really compelling first person narration where a unique character is giving you their take on something that is happening, and yet it's clear to the reader that it's not the whole story. You're getting a biased look at the world, which is central to the appeal of the first person narrative. It's just his writing style, quite unique!

OK, I'm going to recommend you with some of the books that I loved...
Firstly, please start of with the Fault in our stars...Just give it a try.
  • The Fault in Our Stars was a beautiful novel. The characters are beautifully drawn and heartbreakingly realistic. Ultimately Green strives to portray his characters not as those fighting cancer are often shown, forced into playing the role of brave and wise soldiers stoically enduring untold suffering. He shows them as they truly are, just people, beautiful wonderful people but people none the less. They have no choice but to keep fighting because they are given no other option and because to admit defeat means death. It is not their struggle that defines them but who they are in spite of it, managing to live and to love and even have fun and laugh. They use every moment given to them in he most beautiful way possible and that is what makes them exceptional.
Truly, this is a remarkable book and words cannot express how I feel towards it.
Secondly, do read The book Thief...
  • Very rarely a book comes out that steals my breath away. The BookThief, by Markus Zusak is a revelation. Narrated by Death, this story follows Leisel as she steals books in Nazi Germany while she and her best friend Rudy discover the power of words, language and friendship. Zusak's writing is mesmerizing; it's sarcastic, emotional, sophisticated and wondrous.
Thirdly, A Thousand Splendid Suns by Khaled Hosseini...

  • This book moved me to tears, it is truly a remarkable and beautifully crafted novel. At times Hosseini paints harrowing and brutal scenes but always retains, through the characters of Mariam and Laila, humanity, spirit and above all love. There were chapters in this novel through which I literally held my breath, wishing with all my heart that what was unfolding would not, could not happen. It is very easy for those of us lucky enough to live in safety to visualise Afghanistan as a brutal, forsaken place, but this novel shows us something more. It forces the reader to acknowledge and recognise not only the suffering of people in our war torn world but something else, the human capacity for survival, forgiveness and love.
I've got loads more...Let me know what you think of the ones I've recommended 😛😉
@Bold- OMG 😲 Am I dreaming or something? You've actually accepted my demand Awww Shukriyaji, I really really really appreciate it. You've literally made my day ❤️ Ahh I can't describe my happiness right now 😆 😳
In regards to an epilogue, only write it if you think it's necessary... If your planning on ending it abruptly then an epilogue is needed. If you do complete justice to the ending (Which you will be doing) then don't include one. 😛

P.S. I'll be looking forward to your reply...🤗🤗
xoxo

Its Aamna in pronunciation, Amna when I spell it officially. Aaminah when IF has enough Amna on board.

Since you are a huge fan of green and also because you endorse him repeatedly. I'll just probably be kind enough to him and give it a read soon.😉

Also thank you for taking out time to give me an insight of the books. A confession, I tried reading 'a thousand splendid suns' but it was so sad. I just couldn't bring myself to read it further. The command Khalid has over words and the way he writes is so eloquent that it depressed me. As much as I enjoy writing dark stories, the fiction does get on to me and I'm a day dreamer so I'd rather find my solace in a happy world. 😃


Can I ask for some romantic, third person writeup? 😳
Yes, I'm the same hopeless romantic!

As for the request, I'm happy that you are happy! And the epilogue is still undecided samiya. I have yet to finish writing the last chapter before that.

I really appreciate your efforts in the detailed description of the books/authors. Thanks again!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Just read all 14 chapters in one go. I just could not keep it down. You are simply amazing. The storyline is extremely interesting and your writing style is incredible. Please add me in your PM list 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Amna! Wow... Don't even know how to tell you how much I love this. It's os natural, and his sincerity and desperation, her heartbreak and reluctantance and their love just shines through ... terrific job!😊


Finally they are talking and we can see their differences in approach to the event and how much each of them were just waiting for the other to make it okay.. neither is wrong or right in that expectation at least and it's great that at least they are beginning to communicate. That's always been the problem between these two and will alway be so I suppose- it hopefully one day they will address this.

Anyway, I am really looking forward to the next part.😊


@ bold- thank you, its an accomplishment for me. They both had had their reasons to act the way they did. Its easy to point finger but very difficult when it comes to realize their own mistakes and undo them.

I hope you like the forthcoming update too Anu!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shalz_123

amna... we need u to distract us from the disgusting episodes being aired... when r u updating??>>

Its good I don't watch the show nowadays. It keeps me sane.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -SakuraS-

Beautiful updates, especially the last one!! I don't know how you do this but every chapter amazes me more than the previous one.. !!

Raman is melting all of us.. along with Ishita :)
Feeling bad for both Ishita and Raman but I guess it should be getting better for them soon..

Thank you! :)


Thank you sakura, for the kind words :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Viji15

LOVE LOVE LOVE !❤️
are you ending it soon??
Beautiful update as always Aaminah 👏


Thank you viji! 😊
Yep, next is going to be the last chapter. Insha Allah.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shalz_123

thank u so much for this lovely update...lovely just lovely...it breaks my heart seeing raman so sad... finally ishita forgives...if not forget the hurt...great update...


Thank you shalini, I'm glad I could entertain you after the trashy episode that you endured :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aarohi26

unres. yipeee. i was frst one res. amna di i am seriously fallng with this story day by day. i know i am commnting frst tym bt seriously i was folllowing ur ss from frst day. sorry for noy commntong earlier as i am hell busy with my xms bt today update... omg i srriously loved it. really i just loved the dad daughtr bonding alot for which i am carving in show. now back to ishu, finally she realized her husband luv. i thought ishu must b sleep with him while taking care of him bt its ok. i luv ths one also. now we all r seriously waiting for nxt part. plz update soon... we all really dont want to wait more


Thank you aarohi, I'm glad you have liked this fiction so far.

Honestly, I was juggling with the idea of her stay at the hotel too but then I didn't want her to give in that easily. Also because I wanted it yo be more realistic hence she left him.

Good luck with your exams! Make us proud and you get an update soon insha Allah!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Fiction_Lover

Hey Amna thanks for updating. You kept your word.😳

I was bit disappointed with the start as you changed the track.😕But after that it was very emotional & touching. Its sad to see them both like that specially Raman.
I hope his dream becomes reality and she actually comes there.
Waiting for a quick happy update.😳

Hi Monika, I had to update as per the promise.😊

The initial part was the after thought of ishita, its all right if you couldn't connect to it. But I'm glad you liked the rest.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey amna when are u update.
waiting for the next update.

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