Firstly, Aaminah can I give you some big jappis (please excuse my hindi 😆) 🤗
Right from chapter 1 to chapter 13, your story has kept me intrigued...each and every character (especially Raman) has been portrayed to perfection. I'm just in love with your Raman ☺️ I'm just wondering how hard it must be for Ishita to resist herself from Raman 😛
I serioualy can't commend you enough of how great your writing is, it just seems like I'm reading a John Green Novel (literally my recent favourite author) 👏👏
The kiss between Ishita-Raman was subtle yet beautifully written 😳
I just can't wait to read what happens next, excited to see what Ishita's reply will be...
"What do I have to do make it up to you?" He asked solemnly as he placed his hand over hers on the table, looking deep in her eyes. The remorse she saw in them was real and so was the love which was lurking in them.Pure Brilliance 👏 I could literally imagine Raman, any girl would just want to forgive him and hug him tightly ☺️❤️😆
The fact that you are ending this in another two updates has left a bittersweet feeling 😔 I'm just wondering why you haven't written a novel yet 🤔 Aaminah Mashallah you have the talent, I highly recommend you too write one ⭐️
Take a bow Hun
Keep up with the awesome work and keep us entertained with your imagination! ❤️Loads and loads of love from Samiyah 🤗🤗🤗
P.S. Please please update soon, a sincere request from a ill patient...
Edited by Samilicious.. - 10 years ago
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