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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Always always always such a pleasure to read your work! I love this FF so far! Still mysterious so far, but both Raman's and Ishita's feelings are etched. We know some of Raman's emotion now, hope to read more into Ishita's emotions. The flashback was just plain ADORABLE! 😆 I loved it! Especially the "I'm not a fox, I'm Jhansi ki Rani!" 😆 Waiting for the story to unfold a little more.

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Remya

@remya1990

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Amna, wonderful update. How do you come up with such versatile stories !!!
Brilliant dear. The language through which you expressed their emotions was up to the mark. You make me hooked to your stories.
The innocence of the past, the love and concern and the comparison with the encounter that they are having now...Wow
And Amna, the suspense and tension you create is balanced with the love and concern that you create in the story.
Loved it.
Waiting for the next update, and thank you for this long one.

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Hey Amna. No I am not done with the chapter and yet, I couldn't stay away. Good one. Love you.

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pomegranate

@pomegranate

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

This chapter was so well written, you are a very good writer.

the story is finally becoming clear, ruhi is ill and that is why ishita is so desperate for raman to lister to her. let's see how everything unfolds.

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VENBA

@VENBA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Brilliance can be the only word to describe your update...👏👏

Awesome and fabulous...

You are an awesome writer..

Waiting for the next part..

Please pm me...😊😊

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: frenzyy
amazing, jus no words! the past romance b/w ishu and raman was so awesome.. was wondering y ishu agreed to what raman said without a fight and y she kept bringing her daughter in between their convos.. oh no, ruhi is ill waiting to see raman's rean to dis.. great update!

Thank you, thank you! 😊

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: usaonly
Wow Amna I was guess right last comment I didn't said the word bone marrow it stuck in my tounge but I afraid that you will knock me out for my nonsense.😉 Anyway still very interesting what happen to both Ishra to go separate this way plus Ruhi health you make me eager to know more what all behind this story will have to wait for next update. Have a great week ahead dear.😊

Yes jum, you guessed it right! Thank you :)

Hope you have a lovely weekend too!

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Thaslima

@PinkRose95

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#148

amna its just awesome...

eager to know how the story wil progress now..just a small doubt now ishu and raman r not living together..ru lives with ishu...

but how???😲

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: -Srishty-
Ammu I was out of words for some long minutes, I kept looking at the screen but my mind was somewhere very distant. When I was trying to compose myself I realised that I was overwhelmed with so many emotions.

Along these 3 parts I got curious, happy, intrigued, mad, happy, chirpy, etc but all of these were forgotten at the end of the last part where I just felt exhausted and mentally stressed like I was living in the situation. That's how engrossed I was.

You are a brilliant writer👏👏👏 *puts kala tikka on your writing skills and creative ideas*

Now I understand why Ishita said Raman is going to regret doing it. And by the way this has to be the boldest part you have written with all that talk in the flashback.

I'm anxious to know what happened between Raman and Ishita one years ago but more than that I want to know how Raman will take the news and about Ruhi's development.

I feel like you're exploring a new type of writing and I'm more than satisfied with it.

Chapter 3 was a complete package update!

P.S: unlike your previous works there are different songs at the end of the update, that's new!

Thank you srishty! I'm honored if my words could move you so much. Its always a pleasure when I get such response. I wanted to write something serious and in darker shades.

Ah, the word play is something that I really enjoy. Give me a witty conversation and I'm hooked!

I couldn't think of an apt song when I began writing, hence different songs. But I think I'll stick with broken for now. I love the lyrics, and may be khamoshitan ost for ishita's point of view. Give it a listen if you haven't.