Ishra TS: Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna Last part - Pg 25

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AdventureGirl14

@AdventureGirl14

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Vidya, I prefer reading your version of the track than actually watch it on the show cos its that's good. I so loved the twist where Raman traps Adi into confessing..how clever of Raman👏

Wish Raman was this sensible on the show as well.

Waiting for Ishita and Raman's reconciliation now.. continue soon😳

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Rianshi

@Rianshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

very nice update.. waiting for next..!!

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Anum_says

@Anum_says

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#103

awww raman badly missing his jhansi ki rani...
i just hope serial mai bhi cnfront kre adi ko

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PRAVEENDM

@PRAVEENDM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Words fail me or I m poor at expressing words.But your version of track made my day.Thank you.

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Okay firstly 'Kya?'... and with that I am swooning already! *sigh*

I may be angry @ my on screen hero but your written one won me in in two paragraphs...😛

Loved their little frustrations with each other, his apprciation of all the little things she does and his neat dismissal of Shagun.

The smartness with which he brought out the truth bout the pills and the way he dealt with Toshi... this is the Raman I miss. Thank you so much for bringing him back, if only here for how.

Really looking forward to the next update, thanks again for the PM Vidya.😊

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

omg vidya it was awesome
both their emotions r very well penned
loved it

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Thanks for PM.

It was Just an Awesome TS.

Ishita leaves Raman House for some dayds,Her decision was so nice.😊

The Feelings of Raman and Ishita was so nicely explained.😊

Finally,Raman findout Adi Truth,it was so nice.😊

The way You explained the story was so nice.😊

You did an Wonderful Job.😊

Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.

PriyaCherry.

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kuls

@theshushreader

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#108

awesome..

i read all the parts in a go..

am just speechless..

n the "kya" in his husky voice..

i was literally thrown into the *forbidden heaven*

eagerly waitin gfor the next part..

do cont soon

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swathin

@swathin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

wonderful update
loved rkb
waiting for next

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Vivek Nayak

@vivek.nayak

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Excellent writing Vidya. Superb⭐️. I loved your thought, imagination and dialogues. How could you manage them? I am just amazed😲. You are far far better writer than our CVs. I always loved your story.👏

Thanks for your PM.