Love at First sight SS Chapter 8 on page 12 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Awesum shot! Loved it! Hope ishra have a smooth meeting!

Cont soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
This is different.. I like it.

Great job! Looking forward to your next update.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Interesting story.Just thinking Raman know ishu family and had plan to do something to get close to them.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Chapter 3

Yur der..wat took yu so long 2cum 2me??
I was waitin fr yu frm mrng.
I can only hear his voice but y I m nt able 2c d owner of dat voice.
Aio prandh muttal..ishita
I should lift my head 2c till now I m lookin only floor..oh god wats happin 2me here??
I lifted my head n searched fr person who spoke doz words??
But no one was der..i took few steps forward 2check...I saw sum1 workin in kitchen his back was facin fr my side ... d same b4 I saw d day wen doctor showed me d stranger who helped appa..n damn sure he waz Raman.. i was thinkin 2cal him but I heard him callin
Raman:ruhi ruhi ...he started 2search..but feelin heavy gaze on him..he turned around n looked @me confused..
His dark choclate eyes met wit my black ones,i felt goosebumps i can feel his gaze on me...i blushed little...d trance broke by his voice

Ra:Hello..may I know who s diz??
Me:Hi Im Ishita Iyer..i wanna meet Raman...
Ra:Raman ..Raman Bhalla he extended his hand fr a freindly hand shake which I took imm..(Aio iron grip..its paining...) pls sit down..will b n min.
He came wit cup of tea n handed over 2me..Hmm i cleared my throat 2start conservation..
Me:Actually I came here 2 say thank yu fr savin my appa dat day.
He looks confused..I explained him abt d FB n how i got address frm dat OL.
Me:Thank yu so much...
Ra:He nodded in response n asked abt appa health.
Me:He s recoverin..
Aftr sum min of silence..i woke up 2lve
Me:okay get 2go thank yu once again..bye
Ra:Gimme yur Address
Me:huh!!
addrees he repeated!!!i handed him visitin card.
Ra:Sensin my doubt he cleared it..may i cum 2yur home 2c yur appa once.
I smiled broadly n said anytime.
He receporicated dat smile with dimple on cheeks...I just wanted pinch his cheeks n kiss dat dimples...again my trance broken by him.
Ra:ru okay miss Ishita..
Me:yeah sry thank yu bye..
I just ran 2my car...i saw confused look on his face.
In car i took heavy breaths 2calm myself.
Wats hpnin 2me??y i m thinkin abt diz man...I nvr evr felt diz new feelings..wen i was infrmed dat i was goin 2marry...but today y?? & wat ru d feelings dat rushed 2my heart...with only one look on him...frm him i feel goosebumps..my heart..i can feel its jumpin like a mad kid ..o murgan...diz man makin me crazy.
I shrugged all my thoughts n drove 2my home.

Raman closed d door n remember abt ruhi..he started searchin fr her..every wer in house..but she was not der.
Ra:May b she s with Shagun...better I will go n bring her.

guys sry its short update..actually i m nt satisfied wit d part
sorry again i couldnt do PMs
pls let me knw if i need 2continue r nt

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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
nice part...
finally ishra met...

its very intrstng yar... loving it...


gives updtes regularly... will b waitng...

nd shagun yar... complte this shagun chaptr soon...cant tak her...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update! Eargely waiting for the nxt!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nyc readed al prts
New diff stry... Like it

I thought ruhi nd shagun is not dere...
Ruhi its ok but wat abt shagun..? Is she is a neighbour..?
Edited by SuryaIshraholic - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Just awesome updates..
Read all parts in one go..
Please pm me next part..👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Hi guys thanks fr yur uncondiotional support.
Here goes Chapter 4
errors will b der pls excuse me.


In the same time he got a cal frm office fr urgent work..with out no choice he left fr office.
Around 8 o clock he came back and searched fr Ruhi...No he went 2pick her.
He crossed the road opp 2his house..n rang bell on Khanna house.
The door opened by Shagun..n she warmly welcumed him
Sh:Arey Raman yu here..how cum today yu came fr our home dat 2in diz time.
Ra:Actually Shagun..I came fr Ruhi..I hav not met her frm mrng so I thought..
Sh:She laughed and said she is studyin wit hr papa..frm tomo her exams will strart na so Ashok s teachin hr..cum vil go der..
Ra:Oh..Ashok is in home...he has not met me frm so many days idiot kahika...wit diz he went 2Ruhi room.
SH:Nw dey begin 2start quarrel again .better I go kitchen so dat i cant hear dem..
Ashok:Beta wat yur doin?Cum on concentrate on studies tomo yu hav exams na??
suddenly he felt sumthin hard on his back..
As:Maaa!!he turned 2c fumin Raman
arey Raman..how ru??
Ra:kamina chor idiot kahika.. do yu remember me??yu hav nt meet me frm so many dayz n today yur nt lettin my Roo 2meet me..I m goin 2kill yu..
As:Sry baba...I was out of town on bussiness n Ruhi..she has exams tomo yaar!!
Ra:so wat??yu could left hr fr sumtime wit me..I missed her so much..with dat Raman hugged Ruhi..while she was gigglin by listenin d fight bet her papa and Raman Uncle...
(in my story Ashok & shagun are gud by nature and classmate n best frnds of Raman in coll)
SH:if yu both r finished yur fight na den cum fr dinner its ready.
Ra:No shagun I m takin Ruhi today wit me..yu guys carry on and wr is Adi
AS:He is gone fr combined studies 2 his frnd house.
Ra:Den yu both enjoy winked his eyes wit naughty intention.
SH &AS both blushed n embarssed @same time and looked fr Raman but he was already went 2his home along with Ruhi.

Iyer House

After givin medicnes 2appa I told him abt Raman n our conservations n our meetin mrng.
Appa:yu did a gud job beta..diz days ppl wit gud heart n selflessness are hard 2find.
Amma:yu should hav invited him fr dinner na ishu?
Me:O yeah!! (with my ajeeb feelings) i forgot dat amma
Appa:yu go tomo n invite him fr tomo dinner beta..i wanna meet him too.
I turned 2amma side and said..Amma yu 2cum wit me tom..
Amma:Ena ishu..how can i lve yur appa alone..
Me:I forgot Amma no prblm I ll do it tomo.
In my Room:
Aio again i need 2go.. but one side i m excited 2c him again...in my first meetin only I felt sum strange feelings on him..i dont knw wat should I do nw??Mrng wat i decided dat I should nvr meet him..if I do aio murgan i cant control my emotions towards him.I was standin in balcony n thinkin abt Raman n his behaviour...he z vry gud,gentle man n he s vry handsome also..i blushed n i remember his deep chocolate eyes,short nose n his dimpled cheeks..sharp chin n jaw line...his strong arms..Aio Amma wat i m thinkin...diz man o god ishu get hold on yurself.
i dont knw wen i slept last thin dat i remember is all about Raman Bhalla.

Next day i was woke up n got fresh n went 2Appa room.
There Amma was feedin Appa...i smiled @dem...n my thoughts were went 2Raman...i imagined myself n Raman in d place of Appa &Amma ghosh...Amma voice broke my imagination..Aio murgan pls help me.. how can i get rid of this Raman.

Amma:Ishu yu knw today yur appa went 2joggin.
Me:Appa...yu could hav rested fr sum days na
Appa:I m okay ishu..chill
Me:okay pls tc Appa..n bye nw i m goin 2invite Raman fr dinner.
Amma:No need Ishu..yur appa has invited him..he ll b cumin by 7 to night.
Me:little disappointed..n wat appa!!!but how he has nt seen Raman.
Appa:beta today i went fr joggin na...der i met him..actually he only recongized me n asked abt my health n after sum normal talks..i invited him..he ll b cumin..yu go n hav bf.
Me:okay i was excited 2c him eveng.

Bhalla House

Raman:Roo..beta wru
RU:Uncle cum on search me..
Ra:Beta cum on I need 2 go out dont play today..i ll drop yu
RU:No i m nt goin 2today i ll sleep wit yu.
Ra:hmmm okay done..but i m goin out nw..beta once i cum back I ll pick u up..dont say 2 mama n papa ..its our secret ok
Ru:promise
Ra:Ruhi promise.

He droped ruhi in Khanna house n left fr Iyer house...

Me:its 7.10 still he s not here..wat took him so long..i was Sittin in sofa so dat i can clearly c main gate.
I was disappointed and went 2ask appa whether he has given correct address r nt.
Appa:Ishu..he told dat he has yur vistin card..he ll cum dear..
He was confused abt his daughter behviour...the way Ishu eyes shinin sayin abt Raman,her disappointed look on mrng and shouted on Neelu(maid) fr nt cookin properly fr dinner and she herself prepared all d dishes.
Appa: Ishu i think yu love him rt?
Me:Appa!!i was shocked 2d core fr direct question frm Appa.
Me:Appa ..i dont knw wat 2say my appa coz myself was in confusion..Am I in love with him .just few dayz b4 i have saw him...how can it hpn??i dont knw anythin abt him..
Me:i told everything 2Appa n he said
Appa:this s wat v call love @first sight...yur in love ishu i m so happy..i ll talk with him
Me:No appa..yu knw na my kundali n broken marriage n doz romourz..pls Appa i dont deserve him.
Appa was abt 2say sumthin amma came in bet.
Amma:Ishu...vishwa Raman is here cum
Me:Suddenly I ran 2to the hall n rooted 2d spot..
Raman was dressed in black jeans with white shirt d first 2buttons left open...I was so lost in him.
After introducin Amma n casual talks we finished our dinner with silent affair n den Appa asked him abt his family..he said dat he s orphan..bachelor n workin in press.
Mean while Appa got a call frm our company n informed dat v had huge loss in bussinezz which made my Appa fell down.
With Raman help v admited Appa in hospital again..Raman me and amma were waitin outsude d ICU.
Doc came out n called Raman aside.
Doc:Raman i think he cant survive he has very less time..better yu fulfill his all wishes.
Ra:Doc
Doc:vr helpless yu can go n meet him.
Ra:Ms.Ishita cum v will meet yur Appa.
V3 entered ICU appa was lookin so weak..he called Raman and said he needs 2talk alone with him.
Me and amma left wit out choice.

After sum time he called both of us inside d ICU and came 2me and said
Ra:Miss Ishita..Will yu marry me??
Guys let me knw how it is??
Next part will be by next sunday..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Raman Marrying ishu sake of her father ...
Hope Raman also lyks her... Or after marriage ..
Wonderfull updt..
ND loved d way how appa has easily knw abt her daughter feelings..
Nd thnk u... 4 keeping Ashok -shagun gud in nature.. Lol

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