Love at First sight SS Chapter 8 on page 12 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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An interesting start ... plz continue soon m very curious to know what happens next ... nd plz PM me this SS
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very interesting
update soon n do pm m
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Soo interesting start. .Plz cntinu soon! If u can plz upload long ones!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
cont soon! interesting! pls pm me! thanku!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its nice n different. When will Raman enter?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start
cont soon
and if possible..pm me plss
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys i knw i hav updated late sry really sry i dont knw how 2send PMs.pls let me knw fr next update i ll PMs yu guys.here goes..Chapter 2

I was shocked 2c my appa in ICU,after recevin d call frm stranger myself & amma rushed 2 the hospital.
I started praying 2god fr my appa health.
Doctor came out and said mild heart attack n 2b careful with appa.
Me:Thank yu so much doctor
Doc:well its our duty young lady but yu should thank ful fr d person who brought yur appa here..n he looked around and said there he goes n made his index finger at sum point..
A person carryin old lady in his arms...but i couldnt see his face..but i saw dat OL..before i reach him he had already left wit dat old woman.
Doc went in ICU sayin dat v can meet him after shiftin him 2ward.

I looked fr d stranger who helped appa..but he was nt der.
Appa recovered soon..but he was in mental trauma.
We brought appa 2our home.
Me:Appa yu need 2b strong..
Appa:how can i beta..I myself runied yur life...
He was feelin gulity
Me:Appa nothin has been runined yu stop feeling guilty pls
Appa:yur marriage has been broken up...n doz romours beta tomorrow no one will cm frwd 2marry yu.
Me:Appa am I burden 2yu??
till now i was controlling my tears but diz broke my dam..
Appa:no no beta its not like dat.pls dont cry..he was goin 2say sumthin i made him cut off n said
Me:Den wat appa..does marriage is necessary in life..with out dat alz v can b happy appa..n i m happy.
Appa:Beta its not d question of 2-3 yrz..untill vr alive its okay but me n amma cant b wit yu till yur end beta..i m worried abt yur future.
Me:okay appa lets discus ltr.yu take rest pls.
I knw arugin wit appa doesnt make sense..may b he s true..I gave him d medicines and went 2my room fr sleep.
But its vry far frm me..i tossed n turned in bed but no..I went 2balcony fr sum fresh air n started stare on empty roads..my eyes widened wen i saw same old lady who was carried dat day by dat stranger..she was fightin wit her son.
Suddenly i ran outside 2c him n thank him fr helpin my appa..but wat i saw dat old lady was being beated by dat man..i ran 2dem n separted dem and I took hr wit me away frm his drunken son.
Me:how ru??yu didnt get any hurt??
OL:no beta i m alrt..thank yu..
Me:y yur son fightin wit yu??
OL:Its big story beta..lve it
Me:hmm can yu ask yu sumthing
OL:go on
Me:before sum dayz i saw yu in hospital with yur son.I mean dont mistake me..he was so carin fr yu dat day but today!!!
OL:oh!!!Raman beta!!!
I can c OL eyes sparkle by dat name..
OL:He s Raman,he s nt my son..he treats me like his ma .
I was not well..so went 2hospital fr check up but near by gate i fell down as sum big fat lady pushed me..in dat time raman took care of me..
Me:Raman soundz gud!! he s d one who saves appa dat day..excitedely asked wr he lives?
OL gives him d addres n asks
OL:Beta tel me one thin...y ru so excited??sumthin sumthi with wink.
I was shocked 2hell...
Me:No nothin nothing i started 2blamber but OL woke up frm d place pattin my head.n i heard hr say made fr each other god bless.

I saw her walkin figure n i blushed but instantly reality hit me hard.No i cant dream again n hurt myself as last time..i hav 2b strong..no matter wat..i should nt leave my heart lose fr any one r any reason.
I came 2c appa n amma dey were sleepin amma has wrapped her arm around appa.
I smiled myself and went 2sleep with peaceful mind.
Next day i informed amma dat i m goin 2thank d stranger who helped appa.Amma just nodded n said b careful i took my keys n left home.

I was nervous hell nervous..y i m??i just came here 2say thanks.nothin els..but y i m sweatin...coz diz s first time i m goin meet a man alone.But diz never crossed my mind wen i took decesion 2meet him.o murgan pls help me!!

Before I press d bell..door opened automatically..n all I heard him say

Yu r der!!!wat took yu so long 2cum to me??

Guys diz z fr d day ..plz let me knw how it is

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow...very nice...
i hop raman has planed all his moves...

its gtng intrstng...ishu felt nervous nd blush... thts so cute...


ishra meeting... very cute...




regarding pm's... u hav to select new msg nd u vl get ur friends list... select thm whom u want to send...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update...
father-daughter convo was emotional...
finally ishita getting know about Raman,
the spark in her eyes was identified by old lady...
Raman is too good person...
last line sounds strange...

waiting for next update...
continue soon...
if possible PM me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
awesome update
d last line sounds interesting

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