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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#811

Finally I am all caught up... and I am loving the direction that you are taking this I have to day.

Little glimpses into their longing and flirting and self confessing- so nicely done. Vandhu is their cupid and poor appah... not so much. Definetly not going to be smooth sailing even after II & R&B accept their situation- but it's certainly going to be fun.

Again they are going backwards, head first into the physical and now the flirting and 'getting to know you' bit a little more... unconventional courtship of two unconventional people.

can't wait for the next bit...

BTW: I love the emoticons in your updates, always add to the feel of the story.😊

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Nivi ;)

@nividances

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#812

It's now becoming more than just physical attraction and I'm so loving it! Really Nish, hats off for being able to keep the same level of intensity between the couple even when they are not on top of each other. The subtle way in which you write about them just leaves me in awe. Seriously amazing. 👏

II ka ek aur jhooth pakda gaya...

Loving Vandu for the plan she is cooking up. I do wonder how it will all pan out, but I just want to savor and enjoy every step of the journey.

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Payal

@-Payal-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#813

The JCrew Update makes me realize that he feels the way she does.

When Marliese was thrown in her face, she felt a punch in the gut, easily replaceable (replaced), rejected and dejected.

This update, his quips about "best seat in the house" and "couldn't wait", tell me that with her throwing Sree in his face, and then finding her in those circumstances, perhaps he feels the same - that maybe she's not invested as he might be...that he is easily replaceable & she's just having fun. Though he may know better - knowing she's conservative, knowing he has a certain affect on her, knowing that it shouldn't affect him because he knows how women are...you can't blame him for thinking so given his experience with women - ones who have only been after his money...or ones who ruin his parent's marriage and unceremoniously rip his mother from his life.

He may be the "I've been around" type, he may not trust women or relationships, he may be trying to heal his heart, lessen the pain, but he cannot deny to himself that he is becoming emotionally attached to HER...the idea of HER and HIM. I have a feeling that he probably doesn't even realize it yet, and hasn't allowed himself to really even give it a second thought, but the pull is there...she's gotten under his skin...under all the pain and distrust...the cynical skepticism. He's possessive about her. It's undeniable.

So yes. I believe Marliese is really just an old friend (flame), but my heart won't allow me to believe he's been with her since he's been with II. I just can't believe it. I'm not calling him a saint, and sure, theirs isn't even a real relationship - its just moments of heated passion, but I just don't see him stringing her along...cause then, he'd be walking in his dad's footsteps...he wouldn't. Not ever.

That line about his mom made my heart hurt.

I try not to speculate and just let the story unfold, but a lot was revealed about R&B with this update, so couldn't help but throw in my two cents of speculation. I needed to explore his plight before I could allow myself to read further. I'm read now...for him to realize he's in love with this woman. I'm ready to see how this realization affects him...and how he will react.

I'm glad he was there to be her Knight in Shining Armor. I'm glad he's talking more. I'm glad they are both aware of the pain their inflicting on each other.

I'm glad you're writing this story. So so glad.

Love,

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Payal

@-Payal-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#814

All caught up.

I should be commenting on the last few parts, but I'm too smitten by R&B to say anything, really.

(I'll come back to it when I can stop swooning & blushing.) ☺️

So instead I'm just sitting here hitting refresh every 5 minutes.

(I've gotten nothing done all day. I've just been hanging out here in this thread reading and rereading...falling deeper in love with R&B and these two crazy kids, and this story.) ☺️

❤️

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Ashu25

@Ashu25

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#815

I thouhht ll wake up to an update... I am waitinggg

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jinvera

@Jinvera

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#816

when r u going to update Nisha DUI? still in bed under blanket,refreshing the page .. no new update 😭 update pls.

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Nivi ;)

@nividances

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#817

Are we getting any more updates tonight Nish or can I head off to bed? 😛

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Nivi ;)

@nividances

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#818

Around 1 am EST that is. 😲

Let's see if I wake up in time to read it. 😕

Otherwise I'll have to catch it first thing tomorrow morning. 😛

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SunshineBliss

@SunshineBliss

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#819

I had read the updates once very early this morning before heading off to work. How do you do it Nisha... I'd read them just once and they were still in my head so clear.

Got some time now and I read and re-read the last couple of chapters again. Amazing ... its progressing so naturally and warmly' . Simply wonderful. Akka's character is shaping up so beautiful. The typical elder sister cum friend , balancing out between amma and II and plotting on...

And Appa the quintessential father of our times

And R&B II - you are unravelling the layers of their unique relation in such a beautiful manner without losing any of the intensity. You're doing a fantastic piece of work here Nisha

Had to share this

my desi co-worker and best buddy knows that I've been into this amazing rom fiction' (Too bad my work place is an all-mans world at present ); and this afternoon he texted my hubby -Teri biwi pagal ho gayi, yaha client band baja raha hai and she says she needs to check for an india-forum update- 😆

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Ashu25

@Ashu25

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#820

Originally posted by: SunshineBliss

I had read the updates once very early this morning before
heading off to work. How do you do it
Nisha... I'd read them just once and they were still in my head so clear.

Got some time now and I read and re-read the last couple of chapters again. Amazing
... its progressing so naturally and warmly'
. Simply wonderful. Akka's character is shaping up so beautiful. The
typical elder sister cum friend , balancing out between amma and II and plotting on...

And Appa the quintessential father of our times

And R&B II - you are unravelling the layers of their
unique relation in such a beautiful manner without
losing any of the intensity. You're doing a fantastic piece of work here Nisha

Had to share this

my desi co-worker and
best buddy knows that I've been into this amazing rom fiction'
(Too bad
my work place is an all-mans world at present ); and this
afternoon he texted my hubby -Teri biwi pagal ho gayi, yaha client band baja raha hai and she says she needs to check for an india-forum update- 😆

Rofl.. Ach ahi hai

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