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Posted: 10 years ago
Sunday Noonish
Part 85
Story

Amma went to Rohini for her book meeting, the neighbors across had washed their entry way wiping Amma's kolam off,
she wanted her to make a new one, and put a brick red dye border (semman used on special occasions)on it for some "chant completion" celebration as part of Appa's pooja
Appa went to Sarojini Nagar Ganesh Temple for monthly meetings... she showered and wore her treble clef lounge pants and a matching orange skinny tee,... played her favorite Hindi
playlist and sat on the sofa working... Amma had made kesari (halwa) her favorite 😳

Sree texted her "Good Sunday?"
"So far" she said
He talked a LOT and texted a lot too, his texts were three paragraphs long sometimes😆
Nothing creepy just random work, humor stuff...he sent her pictures of Blore traffic, and work place images HE thought she might like
He was obvious... NOT MYSTERIOUS☺️... she knew when he was frustrated, angry or happy😃

Maybe in affairs it doesnt matter, maybe they dont care about each others' mood swings or dont care to understand likes and dislikes as much as a marriage?😭😡
Marliese seemed "normal" she was not quiet and brooding like him

She shook her head to chase away thoughts... put her feet up made herself a third dose coffee, and finished her kesari😉
Selvi was done, she left the twin wood doors open upfront and shut the grill/wire mesh...
Shravu tried to kill Selvi, she walked away like she was invincible
Well... she was...🤣


Shravu ran from room to room to balcony to room, even bugging Periappa on occasion, she wondered how Akka manages him...
Periappa's nurse wanted to go see an "Aunt"

Like Amma would say "Leave venum na they will have VasudhaivaKutumbakam, when they want time off then the whole world is their family"🤣
Since Amma was not around, she agreed


he shot his darts down and went off to collect them came back and shot it down again
Watching him made her yawn... ermmm... no not true... Rakshasan made her yawn... sleeplessness produced by heartbreak made her yawn☺️

Subbu's smug gleeful eyes... as he walked out thanking R&B overly graciously bloody kiss up!😡
Angling for his next promotion... I hope M Co. sends him to Papua New Guinea
I hope the aborigines mistake him for food and chop him up😡
As Ponagl approaches she couldnt help think back on how he spoke in the balcony... with the chakara pongal bowl in hand...

She went to IM, pinged Bally...
"Hey"
It said "Inactive for 30 minutes"



She remembered she didnt do the kolam, so went and got the rice flour and the red dye.. and sat down to make a huge huge flower,
she set her phone on the chest of drawer along the wall so she could get it if it rang... and crouched down... for her "art project"
Amma was brisk and to the point in hosework
II NEVER did any housework, being younger of the two... but now that Akka has been gone for 12 years... she would do "if necessary"😆

She would take her time... annoying Amma to the hilt🤣

She made a HUGE pattern one hand on her chest bending down... it was so big she had to tippy toe back out of it, she giggled
... and started to dye the border...

Shravu ran to the balcony excited "Dude I am here" "Here it comes DDD" he made a firing sound😆
"Dey press waala va destroy pannade, Patti onna destroy panniduva, dont kill the press waala paati will kill u"😆

She heard a kid scrambling up, she looked towards the balcony on the inside... Shravu stood there, she watched the landing... NANDAN😲
SHRAVU DID U CALL? NANDAN IS HERE"😲😭

"I KNOW I CALLED HIM CHITHI" the kid said smugly😃

And she saw feet in flip flops... she didnt look up, just felt her insides shoot up to her mouth😳
AYYO... WHY? WHAT IF APPA COMES BACK

He leaned on the rail hands in pockets, Nandan smudged a corner off with his Nike and ran inside,
they NOW shot the presswaala together from the balcony, she heard his bicycle bell...😆

It was like he stood there every morning watching her do that... she took her sweet time.. wiping off extra droplets of red with her pinky
Soaking the cotton ball over and over again...
She went in when she was done

"Fastest bird?" Shravu yelled

"Falcon?" he asked
Shravu bumped her and so did Nandan

"Po da! I am just making it, ONE TOE ON IT, I WILL CHOP IT OFF and use the blood for my border"😃😛

"Chithi is a vampire" Shravu giggled😆
Nandan wanted to know what it was, "Iyer Art" she called it
"Can I try? Can I try?" he asked

"NO! Paatti wont like it... I mean Shravu's grandma"
The boys ran down to collect their darts
Shravu turned from the landing
"Fasted AIR SPEED bird Uncle R" "Falcon is the fastest on land" and he was gone

R&B pondered... she thought

GET HIM SHRAVU GET HIM I WILL BUY U ANOTHER DS GAME😈

Shravu left she got up, with pins and needles on both legs... swayed and leaned on the half door...And they looked at each other finally

lemon cream? BR tee and a black cargo
Like the cotton ball and floating in the red dye, her heart squished and expanded...squished...
She went in inside without asking him to come in
He tippy toed on blank spots and walked inside
The boys ran in
She put the bowls on the chest of drawer and stood by it, he stood in front
as if they were talking...
Shravu turned the TV on to Disney and chattered with Nandan
The volume was set at 100
"Shravu VOLUME DA KAMMI PANNU, LOWER IT U know I dont like that" "Paavam Periappa"she shrieked😭
Periappa moaned 😭
"Periappa, my Dad's older brother, he lives with us, he does not have cognitive function..." she said sombrely "Noise hurts him"😳😭

He stared quietly

"I am here to pick Shravu up" he said
NOT TO APOLOGIZE... THANKS!😡


"Shravu... PLEASE DA, THATS TOO HIGH ALSO, kaami pannu, not over 20. I hate this"
Shravu lowered it

His sunglasses hung from some neon green strap around his neck

"What else does Chithi not like?" he asked looking at her
Shravu the motor mouth like chithi...
"She does NOT like rasam rice since she got monomyobacterium"😳
"She does not like to wake up early on weekends"
"she does not like cold feet in bed"
"She does not like if I comb my hair"😳
SHUT UP SHRAVU THATS ENOUGH" she stopped him😭

"What does she like?"😈

"She likes to WIN EVERY TIME"😳
"She likes to be called "BOSS" and SHE WANTS TO BE BOSS OF THE WORLD"🤣
"She LOVES SOOORYA? SURAYA? SHE LOVES HIM, she says she will kill Jyothika and marry him☺️
HIS HALF SMILE CAME AND STAYED😳
"She loves paati's kesari"(seeing the empty bowl on the coffee table)
"She loves tikki in South Ex
"She loves short clothes, skirts and shorts paati doesnt let her wear any"☺️
"she loves dal makhani, paneer and naan and aloo matar, she keeps making them even at night"🤣

AMA DA I WAKE UP IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT AND MAKE ALOO MATAR
LET THIS RAKSHASAN LEAVE I WILL KILL U FIRST THEN JYO😭

They went to the balcony leaving the TV running
And shot some other poor soul

He took a step forward... Sree called, he waited... she didnt take it,😳 He saw who it was too
"SREE CALLING" it said😡

Where is Marleise?" she asked sweetly
Asleep I think" he said
RASCAL!
MUST BE AFTER THE "MORNING RENDEZVOUS"😳😉
PIG

He took another step forward

She reached and crushed her red stained hand on his tee, slowly began wiping it off ,
using her left hand cleaned the stain off her nail edges, dusted the remnants of rice flour
Bending down on his chest focussed on cleaning her fingers, he smelled like some citrusy woody soap
She felt warm color sweep all over, bringing with it a frothy soft sensation, her spine began to tingle
Just STANDING SO CLOSE without being kissed
He still had his hands in his pockets, letting her go for his tee

When her fingers were all clean, she leaned back on the wall

"There! U better have a good story for that now"😈 she said hoarsely between dry lips her eyes stormy and deeply hurt..

He dipped his right hand in the red dye, and began on her chin, and rubbed down... slow firm and steady WITH PRESSURE
She held his wrist at it got to her V... he used his left hand to pry hers off, and held it down...
and went down over her mound... and to the belly to the edg of her tee
She knew she was tall... but the road from chin to belly was MILES LONG AND TREACHEROUS
Or so he made it appear...
She will probably deny it later but he lost his way and took different routes.. and took the same route many many times, she lay back on the wall with her eyes closed... writhing?

"Lets come up with the same story" he said breathlessly😈(not knowing Sree was in Blore)

" I race u to the car" Shravu ran followed by Nandan...
Not giving a second look to the aroused, hurt, angry couple couple by the door☺️




Edited by Nisha0604 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
title changed..bt where is the update...i cant find it😭😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: columbia

Ahahha u made subbu a car salesman

This update touched a nerve
Really heart wrenching in a way

Woke up with a fever this morning so my boss (an ivy leaguer who returned to india) told me to chill, my fianc was an Ivy Leaguer himself - I don't think you can paint all the ambitious educated people with one stroke
I must admit I cannot relate to II at all, for an ambitious girl with middle class values (which I like to think of myself) I felt she handled the whole affair quite silly and childish - but then again maybe being "swept" away is that I guess


Nisha yaar don't explain your characters to me, I may disagree with what II does or is but I enjoy the story just as much. We don't have to agree na on every character's decision or action. You should write them the way yu want buss hum enjoy karenge

Ok off to watch IKNMP promo and gush over it and then a much needed nap


Hi! C
Niice
You work with some really smart people
Ofcourse not, not every Ivy Leaguer is a certain way
But they are all uniformly ambitious and focused... atleast all the ones I interact with

I know I dont have to explain myself I know, I wasnt justifying my characters at all C
I am just providing insight on how they are who they are

I agree SOME we connect with MOST we dont

My existence on this Forum is a testimony to my (DIS) connection with some characters
I know fully well when u say "you cannot connect with II"
I was THERE with another character not too long ago😃


So...understand...

Hope the show is mind blowing... not sure which one it is...
And hope ur nap is relaxing also

LOVE
N

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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it very much...now the game is started..hurting eachother to the core...and specially shravu told ii's likes and dislikes..ohho so cute of R&B..and at the end both hurted eachother..go on...
waiting for the next update Nisha dii😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Are you writing something nish? Just read the last part. You out do yourself every single time. Please can we have more please
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: modernfamily

Are you writing something nish? Just read the last part. You out do yourself every single time. Please can we have more please


OK
U all are addicted and so I am and so I post and u read and ask for more and I write more and u ask for more and I am so addicted I write more

This is a vicious circle😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604



OK
U all are addicted and so I am and so I post and u read and ask for more and I write more and u ask for more and I am so addicted I write more

This is a vicious circle😆



Your comments between the updates are hilarious tooo...

BTW loved Surya reference love him n jyo tooo... 😳 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
read the 2 updates again cause the first time i just glanced through it given the weekend schedule... loved .. how easily R&B got to know all her likes and dislikes 😆 like in one shot done... namma II is not going to know about his likes and dislikes all her life and constantly keep guessing 🤣
gosh surya i love surya... of course not his most recent movies but the older one's, .
You know but for sree i actually love all the characters in this story , i want to eat shravu , hire bally as my new colleague, have an older sister like vandu and bil like bala .. perfect di..
oh and the iyer holi was JUST perfect .. pagal hai dono..
you know its the small details you add like the kolam , the love for punjabi food the description of clothes love it and yes this is the 85th part and I am not bored thats a first for me..
hopefully will be be awake my time EST to read your next update.

-anu
Edited by Ranu1234 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ranu1234

read the 2 updates again cause the first time i just glanced through it given the weekend schedule... loved .. how easily R&B got to know all her likes and dislikes 😆 like in one shot done... namma II is not going to know about his likes and dislikes all her life and constantly keep guessing 🤣
gosh surya i love surya... of course not his most recent movies but the older one's, .
You know but for sree i actually love all the characters in this story , i want to eat shravu , hire bally as my new colleague, have an older sister like vandu and bil like bala .. perfect di..
oh and the iyer holi was JUST perfect .. pagal hai dono..
you know its the small details you add like the kolam , the love for punjabi food the description of clothes love it and yes this is the 85th part and I am not bored thats a first for me..
hopefully will be be awake my time EST to read your next update.

-anu


Enna di pahal tookama?
Siesta?
I will post in an hour, the morning madness has ended, now it will be floating and meandering

THANK YOU FOR LOVING IT ALL AND LOVING THE CHARACTERS...
I retained the MOST endearing ones from the show and created the rest...

Shravu is my 7 year old, hes a Rakshasan, my husband will beg me
"GIVE ME ANY OTHER JOB but I cant watch him, just looking at him I need a nap🤣...the whole world fears him, ONLY I GOT HIM😈
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Goosecool



Your comments between the updates are hilarious tooo...

BTW loved Surya reference love him n jyo tooo... 😳 😆


Hey GC
Oru Tamizh kadai SOORIYA illama epdi ezhuda mudiyum?😉
HOW CAN AN IYER GIRL'S STORY BE COMPLETE WITHOUT SOORIYA?

Anu,

I know what u mean, I died a million deaths watching Kaaka Kaaka😳 GOSH!!

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