Change Your Mind - IshRa FF Chapter - 2 Page 13 (2/21) PMs Later - Page 6

my word!
this was so freaking brilliant...👏👏👏
i've been glued to the prologue and 1st chapter...
so passionate, so intense. so heartbreaking... i can just feel the anguish of raman. it was just too beautiful dear👏
i particularly loved the confrontation of raman-ashok-shagun...👍🏼
im loving this already and cannot wait to read how you take it forward from here😃
do continue soon
take care

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

This is so good.

Infact better than the novel. You're writing skills amaze me.

You've got me like :

This hits right where the feels are. So good...

Placing Raman right where Subbu is. Bas.

I get it now. The whole "The Unwanted Wife" scenario. The what if with Ishita and Raman. What if she couldn't get the kid. What if she couldn't conceive.

This is so good. Though I'm worried for Ishita's wealth. Why? Because I'm worldly like that.

This is so oooh effing good. Like my own shot of ecstasy. Si good. I did expect it to be good. But not so golden. So amazing. This deserves re reading.

Imma do math now and then re read it.

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Good one neha!

When I had first read the prologue I thought it was shagun signing the divorce papers but what a twist! Oh and also the command you have over words is brilliant😳

The reason I had stopped reading ff was because people take forever to update so I'm just hoping you will prove me wrong and update as soon as you can.

Since the book you have mentioned is along the same plot in going to read it right away. Yes, that's how much I liked it 😊

Just read the prologue and first chapter of this FF today and I absolutely loved it. I have not read The Unwanted Wife but I'm liking whatever I've read in this FF. The complexity of the situation and the pain that both Raman and Ishita are going through has been written out so well. My favourite part was the end of Chapter 1 when Raman finally realises what the look Ishita gave him that night meant, how he had that same look when Shagun left him. That was heartbreakingly beautiful.

Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety

You are one amazing writer, deary. I wont be surprised if you are a professional😳in love with u, though thats not a surprise given that i have read all ur YHM fics and loved u from the start.

Now coming to the story, you have adopted it perfectly. Starting with the realization of how much he has wronged her was a masterstroke. I can see his hatred for her was just because she was his sister and he thought she was so low as to sell herself to him and not to forget his pre concieved notion thay she already knew the deal.

The revealation was soo passionate that I could feel his anguish. Adopting the plot is also an art and what an artist you are.

Coming to her, I hope you show her side of the story too. Played in the hands of her brother and then her husband, she is a woman scorned as you said.

Now the story will take an interesting turn-how he sets out to have her back. And you will do a beautiful job as always.😳 you have got an ardent fan girl😆

Just came here to give you a hug.

Originally posted by: Jenny..

Now i get what it was all about.here also ashok played a very dirty game.well that was expected from him.after divorce, raman realised that he was trapped by that monster ashok.ishita is actually unlucky to have him as brother.i could actually see the desperation of raman for his wife. That women to whom he blamed for everything. The reason was that she couldn't concieve.after listening to ashok and shagun one thing that was killing him was his GUILT. I really liked what raman did with ashok.he should be beaten up by everyone😆he deserved it...well it was highly emotional.

I am actualy fond of the stories which are emotional...i wont mind calling myself sadist!😆 I dont know why but i connect with these stories so easily.it will be more intresting to see how raman tries to win her back😳

I just loved the whole update. Well i really wanna say that you are one of my writer😳 its really a tough task to adapt the concept and then blend it with your ideas.but you did it very nicely😳 havent read the book as i have tutions for whole day,but really gonna catch up with it as soon as my vaccation starts!😃

Thanks for pm!🤗

Originally posted by: SurrealFantasy

That is why I didn't use any names except Ashok's. Glad it worked. 😆

Thank you SO MUCH.

I'm one of those people who does that.

The problem is that someway between the start and the end of an FF, the muse dies. Especially the way Indian Dramas are written. But I promise I'll end this one fast.

Aww. I love you now.

Because I'm in a giffy mode today!

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Just came here to give you a hug.