Change Your Mind - IshRa FF Chapter - 2 Page 13 (2/21) PMs Later

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

wow, this was really amazing⭐️
totally worth the wait👍🏼
and am sad that you wont be updating anytime soon but i understand and wish you all the best...👍🏼

like i was saying, fantastic part👏
high on emotion. loved it👍🏼
i was panicking too at the beginning when ishita was untraceable. thank goodness she was found.
im glad raman is repenting and promising to put things right. am really looking forward to him winning back ishita's love, trust and respect again.
will be waiting patiently for the next part😃

take care

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Sometimes, it all depends on destiny. Raman tried so hard to find Ishita but he got to her in the most unlikely way. That says that there is still something there. Raman begging for forgiveness from Ishita was written beautifully and was heartfelt. I can understand why it's hard for Ishita to forgive him but I do hope she gives him a chance to repent so that they both can find their happiness together.

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

I know you are really really busy in your real life but this ...this is amazing.

I loved it. I know Iwill sound like a class A sadist but, I dont care. I love when an Alpha male grovels. I know it sounds horrible but gives me a weird kind of satisfaction. whenever an alpha male commits a mistake...i love reading/seeing him seek forgiveness.

Usually its big but if its a small mistake..the hesitancy that creeps into that character because of ego issue is another fun part! :P

I am loving this story. I hope you'd update sooner but koi nahi, whenever you get the time :)

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Beautiful FF...

Awesome...

Please pm me the next part...😊😊

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Just chanced upon your fiction today, and I must say, I did enjoy it. It has a mysterious aura, and it looks grey.

You have a great sense of emotions in your penmanship and people can relate to what you write as they read. I did. The worth of the characters and the emotions can be seen well and I m pretty glad that I had a chance to read this piece. Its a warming piece, and makes you empathize with the people in situ. Your skills are worth all appreciation.

I hope you decide to continue this soon, and keep me in the loop, will you.

Regards.