reminiscing ishra moments... raman helping ishu on pg 53

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Ardor

@Ardor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Thanks shavi for pm...

Hello sakiv,

I loved the way u wrote ishita and ramans Valentine's day...perfectly romantic...being alone on a riverbank and no one to disturb that too under moonlight and bonfire...confessing their love at the same time...ruhi helping her papa in surprising ishimaa...conversation between shagun and raman perfectly showed Shagun was always interested in expensive gifts and grand parties and wants to show off to other people...whereas ishita finds happiness in simple things and wants to keep some moments exclusively for themselves...I loved the way u indirectly showed difference between ishita and Shagun in sharing their memories

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shravani_2311

@shravani_2311

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

i loved it...

thnk fr xtra scenes...

ruhi meri jaan...u r so sweet...

thn cmng to plce nd ishra's valentine's day...its awesom...

wen v r wid our loved onnes...plce nevr mattrs nd spending lonely gives peace...a prfct plan fr ishra...

ruhi ruling the house nd toshiji suprtng...jr rkb hain...

raman is raman...kya one liners yar...lipstik ke jagah fevistik nd purani saadi phenkar kaha aana hain...these are suprb...

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 10 years ago

#103

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Wow. Give it a title with most romantic valentine ever. It was wonderful. If you aren't good at Romantic scenes and this is the outcome after that plz tell me what are you good at? Coz this was most romantic valentine one could imagine.

RuMan, my favourite team... Loved how they teamed up and planned everything. The comparison of a materialistic romance and a true romance was perfectly shown.

Shagun, I just don't want to talk about her. She doesn't exists for me.

Idea of leaving Ishu's phone behind was superb. JM ki aatma na jaag jaaye...

The drive to the outskirts of Delhi was imaginable coz I am a Delhite...

The blindfolding and the arrangement was super cute and the scene was imaginable.

It was a perfect Valentine. away from crowd just for both of them.

loved it buddy.. Great job...

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Jayashree

@JayashreeR

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#104

@vikas
awesome and romantic valatine day os
just loved it and enjoyed reading it
beautifully written!!!!!!!!

plan of ramam making valatine day special only for them alone was super
ruhi helping raman to surprise was nice
just loved idea making ishita to leave the phone at home
love confession in unison was perfect!!!
i was literally laughing in part were shagun was trying to call raman and tried to disturb them 😆😆

all together it was perfectly written 👍🏼

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aarti hari chandana

@Ishradivani

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Its just perfect so baap beti again partners in crime.so romantic a very secluded place only ishra there lovely yaar .ishitas description n simmis taunts wer super.n rkb dialogues aftr returning r perfectly ravankumars style. wonderful writing vikas

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ishra123

@ishra123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Suprb... & Romantic valentine day os. beautifully written, enjoyed reading. RUMAN my fav. team. Fabulous. u hv witten it beautifully... hoping to see such a scene in show.

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ishra123

@ishra123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Suprb... & Romantic valentine day os. beautifully written, enjoyed reading. RUMAN my fav. team. Fabulous. u hv witten it beautifully... hoping to see such a scene in show. Thank u so much