The Prequel #1: Tu Nahin Toh Zindagi mein aur kya reh jaayega

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Awesome and great start..

Waiting for the next part..👏👏

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Lucky

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: pri12
awsomeee..plz continue and plz pm me whn u update nxt part

Thank You Pri... I will PM you 😊

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Lucky

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus
There have been many versions of Ishita's story before YHM that I have read Lucky, but I like yours the most. It felt very natural and fitting to the Ishita I know and liked until recently when it turned into "mahaanta" . Her simplicity and maturity is still there of course. But not as much as I'd like. So, thank you for reminding me why I started liking this show in the first place.

Thank You Sneha... that's why I wrote this yesterday. In the middle of all the mind-numbing drama going on, I was watching some scenes from another show, and I was suddenly reminded of what I had felt when I saw Ishita for the first time & heard of her 'situation' .

I am glad you liked it 😊

Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 10 years ago

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Lucky

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Colt.Pixy
its awesome lucky. waiting for next part. this is very much balanced .loved it. you have maintained her character . I wonder if subbu would also recall about "gayatri"

Hey ZD. thank You 😳

arre maine Subbu ke baare mein itna socha nahin hai... he is a black box to me... but I think the way I wrote this part, it implies that he did remember, and that, even if he didnt have Ishita, he still wanted his Gayatri...

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Lucky

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: rutu83
Yayyy you're writing again - missed you. Especially your ramblings :D
Ugh- he actually named his daughter gayatri??! That's somehow wrong to both ishita and his wife :(
Saddest face and fakest smile :(( the jeeju saali bonding is lovely
Looking forward to next part- continue soon

Thanks Rutu 😃 Yes, I know. it's been too long. Inspiration was escaping me😆

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Lucky

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: RomComFan
This is so beautiful.. please continue and please please PM me when you do.

I've read some of your past works and I love your writing style and understanding of ISHRA... you write sadness really well- that's a compliment!😊

I am very much looking forward to your next update, again, so glad to see you writing for ISHRA once more!

Hey Thanks a lot 😊

I am really glad you liked it. Yes, i must admit I veer towards sadder emotions a lot 😆 (don't read too much into it. I am generally a happy person 😛)

I will surely PM you for the next part.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: --mancityfan--
Paaji

Like I have always said

You have a amazing range

And this one seems perfect

And it matches persona of ishita in the show perfectly

Very well done

Continue quickly

A good escape from mind numbing drama going around

Thank You Leo, once again 😊 I shall try and write an update soon.