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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RomComFan

This is just beautiful Priya!👏

Not sure why you are unsatisfied, it's a look ta an ordinary moment that works so well.

Your portrayal of Shagun is very well done- not overly 'vamp'; just a very misguided woman full of regrets and and a sense of desperation. I can understand and appreciate that. I love that she witnessed such a normal moment between the couple that says more about their affection for each other then any real intimate moment could.

Terrific job once again, I can't believe you posted two pieces of writing so close together!



hey there :)
Pehle toh naam batado yaar! I dont even know what to call you..

I was unsatisfied mainly because i was really blank when i wrote this and i didnt know what i was typing.. im really relieved it turned out fine..

Im glad you like the way Shagun was portrayed.. thanks for the appreciation..
well sometimes a normal gesture of care concern and affection can create a magic that even physical intimacy cant. Hence this..

hehe! i cant believe i posted two pieces of writings so close together either.. But i needed to get this out of my system.. Bas frustration nikalna tha..





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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

awesome...loved the way shagun realised her stupidity...

absolutely loved this piece of work









Originally posted by: VENBA

A beautiful os...

Loved it,,
So brilliantly written...
Happy new year..Have a great and successful new year..😊😊




Hello guys!

Thanks a ton for the lovely comments.. really glad you liked it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

Lovely OS Priya..
Perfectly well descried emotions..
Its good she knows what she has lost and what she cannot ever get back no matter how much she tries.
Loved the IshRa bits, specially the diary part. Perfect! ⭐️👏

Thanks for the super OS and the PM :)

I still am yet to catch up with your new SS..Will surely do so soon! :D Ohh yes, and a very happy new year to you too!! 😳😳



Hey!

Thanks a lot yaa! Really glad you think its good..
Hope she figures that out in the show too.. But high hopes ho jayega naa woh..

You're welcome for the PM..

Will be waiting for your comments on the SS as well :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nabni

Awesome OS.


Why eggs and tomatoes?????? You need standing ovation for this kind of writings.👏 I am serious.


I wonder if CVs can handle our show with such maturity.


Instead of showing Shagun's dirty n cheap tactics,they could have shown Shagun's character in a tolerable way.



Hey!

Thanks a ton.. Really? well, im honoured..

The CV's have no sense of maturity and they have proved that time and again.. Iss baar bhi im sure its no exception..

@Bold totally agree with this part..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

nice one-shot..👍🏼



Originally posted by: Ardor

Thank for pm

Amazing OS...dairy part was superb...loved how u wrote about shagun observing bhallas routine and regretting at what she had lost.





Originally posted by: AARMAY1

amazing... loved it.



Hey guys!

Thanks a lot! Really glad you like it:)

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