Agent RKB & Agent JKR! *COMPLETED* 12a &12b - pg46 & 47 IS

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@.SSSS.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Nice update.
Promising story.
Looking forward to read more :)

Edited by Spana_stylo - 10 years ago

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

This is amazing!!!
And such a thriller..you HAVE to update soon...I love your stories :)
Don't say you're not a writer. Everyone writes their way. And you have your trademark style. (Which I love, like I said)

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Sorry, double post. This stupid phone...

So, I hope you're gonna make this long enough. Yknow make it drag out a little...wouldn't want things to be revealed too soon...and stories of these two as agents have the potential to be very very entertaining (not to mention G-y ;)
All the best!

Edited by Ribelle_IshRa - 10 years ago

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usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Great start very interesting please continue.😊

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dundumol96

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Where did they go.???????????? Suspense...

Waiting for next part

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arnavkidevani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa
This is amazing!!!
And such a thriller..you HAVE to update soon...I love your stories :)
Don't say you're not a writer. Everyone writes their way. And you have your trademark style. (Which I love, like I said)

Thanks Ribelle! Your comments are very much appreciated😊

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arnavkidevani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: dundumol96
Where did they go.???????????? Suspense...

Waiting for next part

Wait karo!😉😉

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Interesting part..!!

Though i was little confused...but then it was soon cleared..!

Is that was Ishita dancing with that man..!!

Well continue soon..!! I am curious to read further..!!

thanx for pm

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Sunita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Ohh wowww!! promisingg start!! brilliantt darling!

u write awesumm!! ek confusion.. in ur prolouge i read raman ishita are husband wife right? if thts the case , hw does raman not identify his wife?

cont soon!

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Soul_Stirrer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

That was fab dude☺️ first of all take a bow. I am waiting for next part. Deary u say that this is short story...please give long updates to this short story😆..waiting for them to meet and then the shock😳 there are so many prospects in this story...u can do lots of interesting things with this one😳