SS- AsMi: Its Destiny Part 2 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

Intrstng start

cont soon
and add me to your pm list

sure dear...
thanks a lot...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa

very very interesting!

ekdum real feel aa raha tha :D
So I'm eager to read further...PM pls?

Thanks a lot...
i will surely pm u ...😃😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: The_Imane

Ok havent read it first lets me celebrate
First AshMi SS 😎 🥳 thanks for this 🤗

Welcome...😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: The_Imane

Great start
Loved it!!
Cont soon

Sure dear...
Thanks a lot...😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: sita_rama

Very interesting update

thanks for the pm

u r welcome..
and thanks for the appreciation..😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
I was really glad with the response i got for the first part..😃😃 Thanks a lot...🤗 hopefully you like this part too.. Enjoy reading and let me know your views...😊😊
Part 2

Ashok and mihika are on the door step and ashok is about to enter when mihika holds his arm and looks at him romantically and ashok is confused...

Mihika (in a slow tone): main nahi chahti mere gharwalon ko humare rishtein pe jara sa bhi shak ho..

Ashok: As you say BABY!

Mihika: apni limits mat bhulna...

Ashok: tUM HO NA YAAD DILANE...

Mrs. Iyer opens the door... she is shocked to see ashok and mihika like a perfect couple. But she doesn't let her shock to be revealed on her face.

Amma: welcome! Welcome... Aiyye JAMAI RAJA...

Ashok is shocked...

Amma: Baitho Ashok beta...

Ashok and mihika sit on the couch.. and vandu offers them water. In few minutes the entire bhalla family enters...

Raman sits just besides ashok.

Raman: kyun saadho saab kaise ho???

Ashok: (confused at raman's behavior) accha hun.. saadho..???

Raman: kya hai pehle tum meri x biwi ke boy friend the toh tab tum mere female sautan the.. ab toh tumne meri saali se shaadi ki ab humara rishta change hua na.. ab hum saadho-saadho...

Ashok was totally confused at raman's behavior. But at the same time he was happy that shagun was nowhere...

Ishu giggles: kya raman aate hi apne jiju ko tang karna shuru kiya...

Ashok: jiju???

Ishu: kya ashok jiju aap bhi jiju hi hue na aap... aapko hume sab samjhana padta hai... aapko yeh toh yaad hai na aap mihika ke husband hai ya wo bhi..

Raman: are Ishita aise kaise bhulne denge...

Amma: khana ready hai toh jaldi chalo...

Ashok (low tone): THANKS A LOT!

All of them take their place on the dinning table...

Ishu serves ashok a lot... Ashok keeps screaming that's enough for him, but she is ishu after all...

Raman: kya ashok pehli baar shaadi ki hai apne sasuraal walon se khatirdari toh karva lo...

Ashok: yeh kuch jyaada hi khaatirdaari hai...

Raman: beta tune khatirdaari dekhi hi kaha hai!!! Ishita iska rassam khatam ho gaya...

Ishu: han.. she starts pouring rassam..

Ashok: bas Ishita... bas...

Vandu: nahi ashok.. aisa nahi kehte?

Ashok as wondering what he shouldn't have said...

Vandu: ishu mihika se badi hai aur mihika use akka bulati hai toh tumhe bi use akka bulana chahiye.. right amma..??

Amma: 100% right.. chalo ashok, bolke dikhao..

Ashok:kya?

Romie: shayad umar ho gayi hai inki.. inhone bola Ishita bhabhi ko Ishita akka bulane...

Ashok: Ishita AKKA.. BASS!!

Bala: very good!!

Raman (murmered): Pehle tuzhse business main bada tha ab toh rishtein mein bhi bada ho gaya...

ASHOK WAS HAVING A HARD TIME DEALING WITH THEM!

After dinner...

Ashok was feeling uncomfortable because of over eating south indian dishes...

Raman: beta yeh toh shuruaat hai..

Amma: yelo ashok... (giving payasam) yeh tumhe acchha lagega... sweet dish ki tarah...

Ashok: bas.. auntyji bas!!! Muzhse ab aur nahi khaya jayega... bas! (he said with a pain in his voice...)

Amma: yeh kya? Aunty kisko bola?

Ashok (was scared): sorry.. DIDIJI.. bass...

Everybody was giggling..

Amma: arey mera matlab yeh nahi tha.. main mihika ka peri amma toh tum muzhe peri amma bolo... Chalo bolke dikhao..

Ashok (to himself): aisa lag raha sab lok aaj meri oral test le rahe hai...

Ishu: amma ek kaam karte hai ashok jiju ko sabka introduction de dete hai, taki phir unhe yaad rahe kisko kya bolna hai...

She started pointing towards everybody..

Ishu: (pointing towards amma) Yeh hai mihika ki peri amma (pointing towards appa) Yeh hai mihika ke peri appa (pointing towards vandu and bala) inhe aap bala jiju aur vandu akka bula sakte hai... (pointing towards raman) inhe aap raman jiju aur muzhe toh app akka bula hi chuke hai... (she gave a wicked smile) Okay?

Ashok: okay.. ab hi sab ko unke respective naam se bulana hai ya baad mein test lenge?

Ishu: Its okay jiju take your own time to get acquainted with the names... Ab yeh payasam pijiye.. give amma...

Amma: ha...

Ashok: bas pleae..

Raman: dulhe raja sharma gaye.. (patting his shoulder)

Ishu: koi baat nahi jiju kabie aur kha lijiye.. ab toh rishte daar ban gaye hai.. ana jana laga hi rahega..

Ashok: Tanks... (giving a sigh of relief...)

Mihika: humein ab chalna chahiye...

Amma: mihika, tumhari abhi abhi shaadi hui hai... ashok ke gharpe koi bada nahi hai tumhe guide karne ke liye... hum soch rahe hai ke main kuch dinon ke liye tumhare ghar aake rehti hun taaki tumhe sab sikha saku phir toh tum apna sansaar chala sakti ho...

Toshiji: oooye!!! (she said screaming)

Ashok was startled...

Toshij (caressing ashok): iss bechare Punjabi munde pe kyun zulm kar rahi ho...

Amma: zulm...???

Toshiji: aur nahi toh kya? Tu iske ghar pe jaake pure ghar ko dusra madras bana degi... Main bhi chalungi taaki main mihika ko sikha sakun puinjaabi taur tarike...

Raman: are amma, mumma jara ashok se bhi puch lijiye.. use chalega kya?

Ashok thought over it and remembered that mihika acts romantically in front of her family members so he readily agrees to take both the women to their home...

Amma and mumma (toshiji) grabs the back seat and the car starts...

The entire family waves them...

Ishu: yay level 2 bhi complete!!!

Raman: ab jara hum bhi ek level age badhe...

Ishu (blushes): kya aap bhi!!!!

Raman: Ishita, Ishita!! Suno toh...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Great update!!!
Lol Everyone is "pampering" Ashok 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
wondrful...
becahre ashok ki tho band bajarahe hain...
loved it compltly...
i laughd lik any thng...
thnks fr pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Awesome update
i loved it
update soon
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
this was awesome
I totally loved it
poor ashok khatirdari krke band Baja rahian hain
hayee Raman rishte main bhi bada aww so cute
this was hilarious

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