SS: Zindagi.. Kaisi Hai Paheli!! Chapter 5 Page 28 - Page 7

I just hate people like subbu...and I know that there are a lot many out in this world...and d poor girl ends up in marrying them at least for the sake of family... Good stuff...

Originally posted by: Divancraze

Nice update!

Please PM me when you continue!

Hey thanks!

Send a buddy request on the PM I'd mentioned!

Originally posted by: palakmangla21

OMG

What a nice story. I mean very different from what I hav read up til now. Poor ishita, surely subbu needs punishment. Very well written dear

Hey!

Thanks a lot! I'm glad you like it!
Subbu will get what he deserves! Thanks again!!
Keep reading

Brilliant! Very sensitively written. And I so agree with the point that you're making here about marital rape or date rape! A man who doesn't have any respect for his wife or partner-to-be as a person, is not suitable as a life companion. Period!

Awsome...can't w8 for nxt chapter :-) :-)

nice update
emotional too
how could this creep do that
n its so wrong wht her Amma was saying
d point u mentioned last was right

What a wonderful update- thanks so much for the PM!😊

You had previously replied that this wouldn't be a soft romance as I had initially thought but I don't mind- sweet or spicy i know with your writing skills and imagination this will be amazing!👍🏼
And looking at this first chapter I am even more sure of that.
Your start is amazing , love how you are bringing them together, love your characterization and concept.

For one moment I want to commend you for writing about such a hard topic and the points at the end of your chapter as well. Assault and the sometimes backwards attitude towards it in our community has always bothered me and I appreciate the concise way you spoke of it and Ishu's reaction. I know I will love Raman's as well. I can say more, but I won't because this is a FF. Just... bravo! Take a bow... and this gold star for this amazing chapter.⭐️ You deserve it.👏

I am really looking forward to your next update.

Brilliantly written. Feel so bad for Ishu..

sorry can't read rape stories 😭
i'm bowing out of this one- will wait for your next one 😊