Ever After - IshRa OS (12/3) Note Page 4 (12/5) - Page 2

Thank you for sharing this with us, I loved it! It was so cute and I loved those little moments that they stole for each other whilst in the midst of their family. It was a treat to read.

Where were you until now? I'm sure this is your first work I'm reading. By saying this I wished you would write more because this was absolutely brilliant. Loved this witty, naughty side of Raman and Ishita sharing her feelings so easily.

You are a fantastic writer👏

This is just wonderful!👏👏

Very well written, very light and sweet. I love the concept.

Loved the back and forth, the pliers, the way you wrote them... well done!👍🏼

I hope to read more from you on the forum!😊

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

<font color="#6600FF">GOSH! What a brilliant piece of writing this one was..⭐️👏
Starting from the beginning to the end, it was a classic example of flawless writing. I loved the somewhat mad IshRa in your story! Such flirts these 2 are! 😳😳 Loved their naughtiness and undying raw passion for each other! ☺️☺️ The romance was hot and happening..😳 The emotional aspect was magical. <3 He knew her fears and also the solution to it!

Awesome writing! Loved it <3 😳
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Thanks for the wonderful review! Both Ishita and Raman are a little OOC in the story. Somehow, I feel that the show portrays them as having too much of an innocent relationship although they are married. They've evolved mentally but physically they aren't even friends yet..not too likely for a married couple. I'm not an avid fan of the show but they are a fun couple to write about.

:)

Originally posted by: -Srishty-

Where were you until now? I'm sure this is your first work I'm reading. By saying this I wished you would write more because this was absolutely brilliant. Loved this witty, naughty side of Raman and Ishita sharing her feelings so easily.

You are a fantastic writer👏

Aww Thanks! It is my first piece of writing for this couple, though I have written stories (albeit incomplete) for Armaan Riddhima and a few OS-es for Arnav and Khushi. I don't watch the show much except for when my mother has it on. Watched an episode a few days ago and this came into mind. Glad you liked it.

NeNe

Loved it a complete package!

hayeee naughty raman
loved your dry wit throughout
pls write more and pm me if possible :)

Simply awesome loved it all emotion in 1 shot beatifully written..

Awww, that is naughty, cutey, sweetie story!