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Posted: 10 years ago
hi friends thank you so much for reading my story and for the valuable comments
here is the next part hope u like it
The journey was going on,there was full of silence in the car
Raman tried to speak but he couldn't because ishita was not even looking him.he decided to hear ssome music and he keeps then the song kabhi Jo badhal barse starts ,Raman and ishita looks each other ,Raman broke the silence
Raman:yaad hai kya yeh gaana
ishita:(sadly)nahi
Raman:nahi?
ishita:nahi matlab nahi please change this song I hate it
Raman:don't shout yaar I will change it
mihir calls
mihir:hello bhai ,bhabi kaise hai
Raman:bahuth gusse mei hai
ruhi:chachu mujhe dedho phone
mihir:ek min bhai ruhi pooch rahi hu
Raman:kaise hai tu
ruhi:mein teek hu aap batavo ishima kaise hai aur aap usse parishaan math karo and take care of her
Raman:ha meri maa I will take care love u bye
ishita:shagun thi?
Raman:shagun...hmmm bahuth miss karahi hu bechariii
ishita:so why can't you come with that bechaari
Raman:voh...kyya hai ki she is not only a good wife but also a good daughter in law issliye mummyjii ki saath chalgayi uska dyaan rakne keliye
ishita(suddenly) :mummyji ko kya hogaya...i mean toshi aunty ko
Raman:mummyji ko kuch nahi hai
ishita:bewaja pareshaan karthi hu aap
Raman:mein?
ishita:ha aapne toh kaha na mummyji ka dyaan rekne keliye shagun toshi aunty ki saath hai toh meine socha she isnot fine
Raman:yeh mera problem nahi hai tumhari sochka problem hai
ishita:meri soch ki nahi apki aadat haina doosroko pareshaan karnaa
Raman:tumhari problem kya hai sab galathiya mujhme daal rahi hu
ishita:kyu ki aap galath hai aur
Raman:chup hojavo yaar hamesha bak bak karthi hu
ishita:aapne start kiya
Raman:(tired)ha meine hi start kiya mujhe maaf karde
ishita gives him irritating look
Bhalla family reached Chennai
there was no any problem with iyer's and bhalla's
amma and appa comes to receive them
after a long time they were meeting they become emotional
amma:(to toshiji)kitni saal hogaya apke saath jagda karke miss Kara hi thi mein
toshi:mein bhi
they hugged
bhallaji:kaise hai iyyer saab
iyer:teek hu aap kaise hai
bhalla:teek hai
iyer:dulhaa kaha hai
bhalla:voh raat ko pahuchunki actually voh Raman ki saath arahi hai
iyer:Raman ki saath ...
bhallaji:ha voh ghar jaakar baaath karthi hu
they reached home
iyer:Raman kyu araha hai
toshiji explains all the things
amma:(crying)iska matlab Raman ishuka life bachane keliye divorce ki ,bechara ramanko kitna bura kaha hai aur meri beti ishune yeh 6 saal akela...mani aur uska marriage ek drama thi
toshi:ha madrassan ishita kissise shaadi nahi ki aur tumme baatha hai kya voh maa bangayi
amma:kya meri ishu maa bangayi nantri kadavulle ,iska matlab jab Ramane usse choda jab voh pregnant thi,oh meri bachi akele(wipe tears)
toshi:ha yeh Saab matha raani ki ek kel hai hai aur iss kel ka starting bahuth bura tha par mujhe yakeen hai andb mei Saab teek honghi
amma:kaise teek hoki...mera ishu yaha avunkina
toshi:hmmm,chinda math kar
amma:hmm...aaplog fresh hokar avo mein kaana lagathi hu
in otherside
Raman and ishita was continuing the way too Chennai
suddenly someone stops the car it was a couple and their name was Raman and ishita
Raman:aaplog koun hai aur humari car kyu ruko
Raman(2): voh actually sir humari car break down hokaya aur yaha achi workshop bhi nahi hai and we r new here so sir please can u drop us to the nearest lodge
Raman:hmm get in
Raman (2)thank u so much sir much for helping us
Raman:it's my pleasure,by the way aaplog yaha kaise
Raman:(2)honeymoon keliye aya par yeh carne sab karaab kardiya
Raman and ishita remembers their first trip which Raman was planned for them and ishita unknowingly calls everyone and in the trip Raman loosing the way and ishita memory loss drama and they together stays in a lodge,allergy problem everything passes through their mind they had tears in their eyes
Raman(2):sirr aakhe dekar car chalavo na,biwi ka ghar jaake deko please,l love my life issliye aakhe dekar gaadi chalavo
Raman smiles
Raman :by the way naam kya hai apka
Raman (2): mera naam Raman aur yeh meri patni ishita
Raman and ishita shocked:kya?
Raman:naamme koyi problem
Raman:voh actually humari naambhi Raman aur ishita hai
ishita(2):omg I can't believe this same same name wow it's so surprising , same named couple traveling together
ishita:no we r not couples
ishita:(2):sorry I just thought
ishita:it's ok
Raman(2): tea shop ,stop stop
Raman:hmm kya tea shop pehali baar dekrahi hai kya
Raman (2):aisa nahi bahuth booglakrahi hai issliye come let's go there
ishita(2):ha mujhe bhi
Raman(2):come na it's our treat
Raman:ha of course
ishita:I am not coming ,mujhe boog nahi hai
ishita(2):please ishita avona it's our treat
ishita has no any way she joined them
they were having food suddenly Raman notices mushroom in ishita's plate and he throws her plate from her
ishita:Ramannn
raman:andha hokaya kya?what r u eating
Raman (2):mushroom,ismei kya hai
raman:usko allergy hai and uska face mei full pimples aur rashes avunki,madam apko yaad hai kya allergy hai apko... hamesha bacho wali harkat karthi hu
ishita:sorry notice nahi ki
ishita(2):it's ok kuch aur buy karthi hu
they had their food
Raman (2):(to shop keeper)yaha koyi workshop hai kya
shopkeeper:ha sir (he points a place says)waha hai
Raman(2):waha koyi lodge hai kya
shopkeeper: ha sir uske peeche hai
Raman (2):thanks
Raman (2):Raman then bye humko workshop and lodge bhi milkaya hai
Raman:oh its nice and nice to meet u
ishita:(2):hum bhi bahuth gush hai apko milkar bye ishita
ishita:bye
ishita(2):aap jaise couple mein aajtak nahi deki ... uniqueness hai...bye take care and forget ur fight and be together all time...
saying this she left
again they starts their journey
ishita:(herself)usko mein kyaa bolo...hamesha saath rahana it can only be a dream kyu ki Raman mera nahi hai kissi aurka hai...
Raman:(himself)ishita mein tumse bahuth pyaar karthi hu,and aaj tum joh kuchbhi sehanrahihu sab meri vajase hai,tum akelathi meri vajase kahi saalo meri hi kaaran...sorry ab mein tumme kissikeliye nahi chodunki...
ishita:gaadi ruko raman
Raman:kyu
ishita:mujhe paani chahiye
Raman:iskeliye gaadi rukne ki zarrorat nahi hai
he takes a bottle and it was empty
ishita:meine kahana
he stops the car and buys water and he returned the car was not starting
ishita:ab kya hogaya
Raman:it's not starting...sab tumhari vajase hui
ishita:meri vajase...?
Raman:hmm tumne toh gaadi ruknekeliye kahana ..
ishita:kya logic hai gaadi rukne keliye kaha iski vajase gaadi karaaab hmmm nice...aaptoh bilkul nahi badli...same ramannn
Raman:yaad karthi hu mujhe?
ishita:ab hum kya Kare we have to go na
Raman:hmmm tumm socho tumhari vvajase hai yeh sab
isshita:kuchbhi...(she saw someone)hey bhaisaab
stranger:kya madam
ishita:yaha koyi workshop hai kya
stranger:ha par kal hi open karunghi
ishita:ufff
Raman:koyi room vaagera milthi hai kya
stranger:nahi sir agar zaroori hai toh mera guest house hai vaha asaktha hai , rent Dena hoka
Raman:ha voh sab teek hai chalo ishita
ishita:par
Raman:par var kuch nahi hai sab tumhari vajase hai avo
ishita:meri vajase?...raavan Kumar hmmm
Raman:kuch kaha
ishita:nahii chale
they reached the guest house,there was many people
Raman:yeh kya hai yaha ki sab log yaha raha thi hai kya isss guest house mei
stranger:aise Baath nahi sir sab tourist log hai koyi lodge vagera nahi haina iissliye sab yaha athi hai
Raman:hummareliye koyi space hoki yaha
stranger:ha ek roomhai
ishita:ek nahi 2 chahiye agar nahi hai toh let us go to other place
stranger:it's only a place,bas ek raat ki Baath haina adjust kkar
Raman:ha we will
in the room
ishita change her dress
Raman:sexyyy
ishita:kya bola
Raman:suna nahi sexy
ishita:apko sharam nahi athi kisi ladki ko dekar aise bolna...
chee
Raman:kya chee,(he looks her )back thoda pathli hogaya hai ,diet karahi hu haina
ishita:chee zaroor apka dictionary mei sharam koyi word nahi hoki
Raman:of course
ishita:shagun ko inform karna chahiye,usko pata chalna hai uska pati gandi harkathe karthihu
Raman:inform karo miujhe kya
ishita:ha sahi hai aapko kya ,apko toh sirf apki zindaki aur khushi important haina
Raman:ha I need my happiness and my life and nothing more iskeliye mein kuch bhi karunki and I am sure I will gain it
ishita:yeh Baath mujhe 6 saal peeche bata chalkaya hai
saying this she goes from there
Raman:uss din mein tume choda it was not for my happiness it was for urs...pata hai mujhse bahuth gussa hai...sorry
apni galathi sudarne jarahihu bakwaan mere saath rahana meri ishuko wapas dhooo...please
-to be continued
sorry for the mistakes
please comment even if it is negative
thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
wooww wat a twist..
Raman & Ishita 2.. hehehehe.. strange but i eny it..
specailly dere convo..
then in shop raman takng cre of ishu.. her allergy..
aww.. it was so sweet ..
Hope all sort out soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for ishus reaction aftr she
Knowing d truth
Lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear
Pls continue soon
Dilshika thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. .Waiting for their patch up..
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
ishra2 such a coincidence
awww mashroom allergy
car sach main start nhi ho rhi thi??? i hve doubt
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome!!
Loved it!!
Waiting for the next part... Please update sooonnn!!xx
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for pm dear.thanks for quick update...ASAP continue soon.i want to see dadi,nani bonding with ram and aman.😊hope u will do that.and happy sunday.give us long update with ishra romantic seens.loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read all parts in one go..
Awesome story..
U have written it brilliantly..👏👏
Waiting for next update..
please pm me when u update next..😊😊

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