MY DREAM TRACK FF.UNDEAD(part 23added)28/01/2015 - Page 29

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Posted: 10 years ago
when r u updating all the 3 stories??
these r very nice eagerly waiting for next parts to read
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Posted: 10 years ago
Please update this ff soon..
Waiting eagerly for the next part...
Edited by friends870 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
When are you updating this story ?
Have been waiting for this update since long..
Please update at the earliest...
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Posted: 10 years ago
No promise.
as all failed but one thing to say.
had exam in morning and holy days for 9 days .
No promises on when update would be better make an update and speak so not speaking
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

could'nt make tonight .i will start morning I am very sorry but can't help myself.

I will start first thing morning.
I want to do now but can't.
OK for information.

Nisha asked to bring Hercules to UNDEAD.
So Hercules will be coming in next update to unite Ishra diff buisness yhis time.

Then in your heart.
Ishita will get to know about Raman trying to divorce her from Subbu.

you know what is waitng in Restored


@bold ... yaaay yaaay yaaay
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Vikas plz do add me in ur PM list ... and send me pm whnevr u update ur writings ... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vikas please add me to your PM list, I would really appreciate it
Edited by ishraBest_2014 - 10 years ago
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part 20

Scene starts with Raman realizing changes made in his room.

Ishita was silent then Raman looks in all surroundings.

Ishita "Kyaa dekh rahen hain?"

Raman "Bahuth cheezey missing hain.Extra pillows aur mattress nahen hain aur AC ka remote bhee gaayb hain aut temp bahuth low rakha hain."

Ishita was confused not understanting the meaning.

Raman "Jaroor maa ney kiyya hoga usskey alaawa koi nahen kar saktha."

Ishita "Who aisa kyon karegee?"

Raman "Humey saath laaney key liyen.Pehley bhee aisey hee karthe thee."

Ishita "Kyaa?"

Raman "Ussko patha chalgayan hoga kee hum pillow partition banaaya hain .Abh pillows gayab aur ek he chaddar lagaaya room mey."

Ishita "Aap itnaa socho math main Ruhi key room mey jaakar sojaongee."

Raman "Jab maa ney itnaa socha who nahen sochegee kyaa?"

Ishita "Mathlab?"

Raman "Tum jaakar dekhloo.Ruhi maa key saath soyee hogee aur Hercules yaheen kaheen ghoom rahan hoga."

Ishita "Hercules kaun?"

Raman "Dekhloo."

Ishita tries to go outside the room but she realizes door way was blocked by something sitting/sleeping next to it.It immediately started barking with the sound near it.Ishita was scared immediately to see a heavily built White boxer at door.Ishita immediately runs inside and falls on Raman.

Raman was not that surprised by it.Ishita just lays on Raman's arms clutching him tightly.Raman was just looking at her who closed her eyes tightly.

Raman "Oy!Oy Madrasan .Utho raath bhar yahe n rehnaa hain kyaa."

Ishita just comes out of trance hearing Raman's voice.

Ishita "I am sorry kuttha peechey."

Raman "Who attack nahen karega.Bass darrayega."

Ishita getting up from Raman.

Ishita "Issey ghar mey kyon rakha hain."

Raman "Who maa ka hain.Mainey maa key liyen laaya thaa."

Raman "Merey sabsey bade galthee hain who.Uss din sey maa ney usska itney taraha istamaal kiyaa jitnaa koi jaantha b hee nahen hon."

Raman "Jabh bhee merey aur Ishita key beech jhagada hotha tho maa issey bech dethee hain."

Raman "Aur yeh jab thak nahen jaayegee jab thak ek doosrey key ..I guess you can understand."

Ishita "Excuse me?"

Raman "Utnaa bhe math socho.Just hug kee baath hain."

Ishita smiles seing awkwardness in Raman's face.

Raman "Aur yeh bhee puraana trick hain usska."

Ishita "Yeh sabh chodo abh humey kyaa karna chahiyen."

Raman "Bass humey adjust karna padega.Doosra option nahen hain."

Ishita "Aap kuch kariyen naa.Who aapkey baath nahen sunegee kyaa?"

Raman "Jaroor sunegee but kabhee karegee nahen ."

Ishita "Ishita kee baath?"

Raman thinking "Han Ishita ka sunege nahen but Ishita ka best friend hain.Ishita hee hummesha exercise karwaathe thee."

Ishita "Theek hain main try karoongi."

Ishita goes to door and slowly starts patting Hercules and Hercules accepts those friendly pattings and starts playing around Ishita and slowly Ishita takes him to Ruhi's room and realizing it is empty decides to sleep there.

Raman "Itnaa simple thaa .Yeh idea mujhey kyon nahen aaya."

Raman covers himself with duvet and tries to sleep.

Raman "Sach mey iss madraasan ney hercy ko control kiyaa.Yhe kaisey hoga."

On other side Hercy was sleeping on floor while Ishita was on bed thanking gods for managing the situation.She then covers herself by duvet and tries to sleep silently.

Raman "Main jaakr dektha hun sab kuch theek hain yaa nahen."

Raman get up from there and slowly walks towards Ruhi's room and he sees Ishita sleeping on bed and hercy on floor.

Raman "Sach mey yeh madras an ney kardikhaaya.Baath hain." Not realizing he spoke a bit loud enouh to penetrates Hercule's ear lobe.Which wakes him and instant.

Seeing Raman at door and Ishita on bed it starts barking immediately on Ishita.Who wakes in an instant and at sight of seeing Hercules rushing towards her she runs away from there and hugs Raman who was at sight.

Hercules calmdown there and as if drolling over them.It silently goes to door and sleeps there.

Ishita was breathing heavily still in Raman's arms.Raman realizing the situation before breaks the hug.

Ishita is surprised to see Raman.Raman tries to walk out of door but Hercy did what it do best

Raman "Shit.Kyaa yaar hum donon yahan book ho gayen ."

Ishita "Pehley aap yeh bathayiyen kee aap yahan kyon aaye they.Sab kuch theek thaa aapney aakar ussey uthaaya." Annoyed and angry.

Raman "Main bass dekhnaa aaya thaa."

Ishita "Tho dekhkar chup chaap chaley jaathey.Utney badey aawaj sey ussey uthaaney kee kya jarooori hain."

Ishita "Sab kuch aapkey wajaha sey hon rahan hain abhee."

Ishita "Aap yahan nahen aaye hothey tho kuch problem nahen hothaa."

Ishita "Abh hum Ruhi key room mey fassey hain."

Ishita "Itney chota bed mey hum donon ko sona padega abh.Uss room mey bed tho atleast bada thaa."

Ishita is angry while Raman is listening everything silently.

Ishita "Kahan gayan who Raman Kumar Bhalla attitude.Thoda dimaak use nahen kar saktey hain kyaa.Har cheez mey attitude dikhaathey hon jaisa kee sab kuch aapko patah hain.Abh kahan gayan yeh nahen patha kee aawaj aayegee tho who uth jaayege."

Raman unable to do any thing finally rises his hand as if doubt.

Ishita "Abh kyaa?"

Raman "Mujhey daatney sey kuch hoga kyaa?Nahen naa tho kuch socho.Abh uss dimaak par kuch zoor daalon,"

Ishita "Aap tho usska naam bhee math lo.Dekhliyan mainey aapney kyaa kiyaa,"

Ishita once again tries to do same trick but this time Hercy gave her a deaf ear.

Finally Ishita feds up.

Raman "Abh ho gayn tho mujhey neend aa rahen hain."

Ishita "Mujhey bhe ekoi shauk nahen hain.Aap sab kuch bigaaddiyan hain."

Raman "Yaar abh tho bass karon yaar.Ek galathee jho kee itnaa chillarahen hon."

Ishita"chillaungee nahen tho kyaa kisss doongi kyaa?."

Raman "Chahey tho de sakthee hon."

Ishita gives him an annoyed glare and sleeps on her side.

It was small bed for Ruhi and can accommodate one fully grown person properly but being two people at a time.They have to make adjustment.

They slip to sleep silently and Raman keeps an arm around Ishita to stop her from falling on other side and later Ishita herself snuggles into his arms.

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazng updte...
Loved it...
Hercy is too genius..
Kaha fasa diya ishra ko...
Thanks fr ishra's hug
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Posted: 10 years ago
Raman "Itnaa simple thaa .Yeh idea mujhey kyon nahen aaya."

dont underestimate power f ishita... 🤣

how much raman show she hates ishita...
inside deep in his heart he cares her a lot...
this care is also a type of love...🤣
waiting for raman to fall in love with ishu...


p.s vikas r u fan of boxer breed... next time i want labrador breed..😃

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