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part 15

Scene starts with Ishita trying to sleep and Raman sleeping peacefully.Ishia is just lost in thoughts about her life.She could have never expected in her life that her life will take such turn.She never could have dreamt that there would be one more person just like her and she will be coming in her place.Not her place but a new one for herself.

She then looks at Raman sleeping peacefully with his face turned toward her there are pillows in between but she could see his face clearly.How cute he looks when he is sleeping.She keeps her palm over his face and could feels his hot breaths and hard skin.There was a smile in his face and she could understand he is sleeping as if there is no tomorrow to be scared of.No tension in his face as if everything is in control.

She gets into sleep as if hypnotized by his face.

Then in morning Ishita wakes by alarm sound and could see Raman gazing at her.She then realized her hand on his cheeks.Ishita gets panic not knowing what to answer.

Ishita "Sorry accidentally lag gayen."

Raman understood he state and just starts "I know handsome hun.Mujhey dekhey control karnaa mushkil hain.I can understand."

Ishita just looks at him as he is trying to relieve her tension "Aap kuch jyaada nahen soch rahen hain.Mera haath just accidentally slip hogayan thaa."

Then looking at watch .

Ishita "Time sirf paach bhajee hain aap itney jaldhee kyon uthey."

Raman "Badalaa."

Ishita "Mujhsey."

Raman "Nahen Ishita sey.Who bhee mujhey aisey hee uthathee thee paach bhajey.Who nahen hain.Issliyen aapsey badalaa ley rahan hun."

Ishita "Funny." Smiling.

Raman "Kuch nahen .Morning yoga karna hain.Usually issey time pey kartha hun."

Ishita "Aap bhee karthey hon."

Raman "Tum karthee hon kyaa."

Ishita "Main daily karthee hun lekin itnee subaha nahen.Ishita bhee."

Raman "No .Ishita sirf mujhsye karwaathe hain.Who khudh nahen akrthee."

Ishita smiles as he complains on Ishita .It looks cute for her.

Ishita "Aapkey heart problem key wajaha sey hoga."

Raman "Nahen merey gussa control karney."

Ishita shocked "Aapko gussa bhee aatha hain kyaa."

Raman "Bahuth aatha thaa.But control huan hain."

Raman "Jabh mujhye gussaa aatha thaa tho kissey kee himmath nahen hothee merey pass aaney." Smiling .

Raman "Ishita ney suru karwaaya.Yoga."

Raman "Tum sojaon.Yeh merey liyen routine hain."

Ishita "No problem main bhee aapkey saath."

Ishita joins Raman on his exercise and was watching him carefully and helping him in possible and mis postures.

Advicing him new and stopping few which can increase heart rate.

Ishita was happy with her morning and her time with Raman.

Then she gets ready and it was just 7 then.So she goes and checks Ruhi's room and she was sleeping peacefully.

Ruhi is holding a photo of her mother while sleeping and Ishita could guess hom much Ruhi would be missing her mother.Ishita sits beside her and removes photo form her hand and then Ruhi cuddles on Ishita and was sleeping.

Ishita could feel how much Ruhi wanted a mother.Ishita keeps her palm on Ruhi's forehead and and pats her.Raman sees them from outside and smiles seeing them.Ishita din't notice Raman but he leaves to his office quickly.

Ruhi wakes up after few minutes and is very happy to see Ishita with her and hugs her tightly.

Ishita "Kyaa huan Ru."

Ruhi "I love you .I love you so much."

Ishita smiles and patting her" I love you too beta bathoan kyaa huan.Mera baby darr kyon gayee hain."

Ruhi looking at Ishita scared then gets down and stars doing situps counting 1,2,3,4,5,,6,7,,8...

Ishita "Kyaa huan punishment kyon?"

Ruhi "Main bathadoongi.But aapko promise karnaa hoga.Kee aap mujhye chodkkey nahen jaayengey."

Ishita confused "Main kahee nahen jaaongee bathaon kyaa kiyya tumney."

Ruhi "Mainey sab kuch kiyya."

Ishita "Kyaa?"

Ruhi "Mainey aapkey shaadi uss uncle sey honey sey rukhwaaya aur papa ko mainey hee bulaaya wahan."

Ishita confused.

Ruhi tells her about her plan.

Ishita was shocked listening this but Ishita is sure she is not angry and is instead smiling seeing how Ruhi did.

Ishita "Ruhi ney Ishima key shaadi papa sey karwaaney kee plan kee thee.Who bhee itna bada plan.Tumhye kissney bathaaya."

Ruhi "Mihika chitti ney koi movie dikhaaya thaa ussmey bhee yahen huan thaa.THo mainey bhee wohe kiyya.Aap mujhsey gussa nahen hon?"

Ishita bringing Ruhi on her lap.

Ishita "Nahen .Main apnee princess sey gussa kasiey ho sakthee hun.Tum nsey sab kuch merey liyen kiyya."

Ruhi "Han.I love you.Aap hee meri mama hon." Kissing her.

Ishita felt this relation for long.She always felt special coneection with Ruhi from the moment she eneterd this room for first time.Feeling of motherhood.She knew Ruhi is not her daughter but her heart said different Ruhi is her daughter and only her.

Ishita "Abh jaakey ready hojaon .Tumhey aaj school mey ishima drop karegee."

Ruhi goes out and Ishita looks t her with affection.

Ishita to herself "Ruhi ussmey tumhaare kyaa galathee hain.Subbu mey sachaayee nahen hain.Ussko merey uupar vishwaas hee nahen hain.No relations stands without trust.Usspar mainey bharosha kiya thaa.Butt ussey kee wajaha sey tum kidnap huin hon aur tumhaarey papa kee jaan khatarey mey pad sakthee thee.Usskey saamney tum ney jo kiyya kuch galath nahen hain."

Then she remembers Raman telling he trust Ishita she would'nt have helped kidnappers.

Then Ishita drops Ruhi in school and goes to clinic.She saw Subbu near clinic.

Subbu came to meet her and Ishita was not interested to speak to him.

Subbu "Ishita mujhey tumsey baath karnee hain."

Ishita "Mujhey kuch nahen karnaa hain.Everything is finished yesterday."

Subbu "Ishita you are cheated.Tum samjh nahen rahen hon.We were in a trap."

Subbu "Shagun jee ney mujhye tumhaarey uupar shak daala .Aur tumhey mujhpar."

Subbu "Everything was laid to separate us and then so you shoul marry Raman."

Ishita already knew the truth.

Subbu "Uss Raman Bhalla ney kitnaa bada plan banaaya tumhey usskey zindagee mey laaney kaa.Younare fooled now."

Ishita knew how much Raman was involved and it is in no part.She knew except Raman everyone in his close quarters were involved in her marriage but they all respected this relation and did it.

Ishita "Raman ka naam math lo.Issmey usska hoi haath nahen hain aur main sach jaanthe hun."

Subbu "Tums ach jaannney key baad bhee uss dhokey mey kasiey rehrahen hon."

Ishita "Yeh bathaon.Tumney Ashon Khanna ko Raman ka weakness key baarey mey bathaaya ya nahen."

Subbu "Han bathaaya thaa.So what mainey merey promotion key liyen kiyya for our future."

Ishita "Ek admee key jaan khatarey mey daalkar apna zindagee banaaney chaley they tum."

Subbu "Why do you care.Usney humarey sentiment sey khelkar tumhey apnee bachee ka maa banaaya."

Ishita "I care.I care he is my husband now aur usske jaan tumhaarey wajaha sey risk mey hain."

Ishita "Aur Raman ney merey kamzori ka istamaal kiyyaa but he never pretended before me.Ussney merey saamney kuch naatak nahe n kiya.Jho tumney kiyya,."

Ishita "Ussney jhonbhee kiyya saamney sey kiyya peech peetey chupkar waar nahen kiyya."

Ishita "Yes main dhokey mey jee rahen thee.Thinking that you are correct for me.But for you everything valued on your purpose.Raman bhalla ney uss park khareedha thaa lekin who ussey tumharey boss sey bacharahan thaa."

Subbu and Ishta argue and Ishita bashes him completely and then sends him out of clinic.

She enters her cabin and she could see her new name plate reading Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla.

She moves her fingur through name plate and remembers Raman telling."Tum Ishita key jagaha nahen apney jagaha iss gahr mey aaya hon.You ave your own place in this house."

She remembers Raman telling he need time.

Then same time her mobile rings.

Mihika "Akka aapka appointment chahiyen."

Ishita "Kyaa?"

Mihika "Appointment mil sakthee hain"

Ishita "Han khalee he hun.Kissko aur kyaa huan."

Mihika "Jeeju ko .Khatey waqt kuch katgayan hain aur bleeding horahen hain." Ishita got panicked.

Ishita "Kaise?Theek hain unhye yahan lekar aaon main dekheloongi."

Mihika "Theek hain."

Then on other side.

Raman was speaking with his bleeding mouth.

Raman "kyaa appointment milee"

Mihika "Han jeeju."

Raman "Kahann?"

Mihika "Akka key clinic.Aap aka key pass jaarahen hon."

Raman "Usskey pass."

Mihika "Kyaa jeeju .Patnee dentist hain aur aap kissey aur dentist key pass kasiey jaasaktheyb hon."

Raman "Theek hain jaa rahn hun.achee dentist hee hain naa."

Mihika "Jeeju yeh tho hadh hain."

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part 16


Scens starts with Raman coming to clinic and he covered his mouth with his kerchief as it is bleeding.Ishita immediately takes him to surgery room.

Ishita "Kaisey huan yeh sabh." Taking kerchief form his hands.

Raman "Kharahan thaa.?"

Ishita" kyaaa?"

Raman "Fish.Kyon?"

Ishita "THoda dhyaan nahen rakhsaktey kyaa khaatey samay.Abh dekhiyen .Kitnaa chot lagee."

Ishita "Raman thoda cut huan hain.Mujhey stitches lagaana hoga."

Raman "Jho karnaa hain jaldhee karon.Mujhey office jaana hain."

Ishita "Aap mahen kar rhaen hain naa.Kahee nahen jaayengey aap.Seedha ghar.Office aap kal jasaktey hain."

Raman "Mera meeting hain yaar."

Ishita "Aap kuch baath nahen karpaogey.Anestsia key baad.Ko samjhega bhe nahen ."

Raman understood what she meant.

Raman "Theek hain tho fir main meeting key baad aatha hun."

Ishita "Aap nahen jaarahen hon.Pehley hee late kiyya aapney itnaa bak bak karthey rehthey hon.Cut bhdthee jaa rahen hain."

Ishita "Abh aap chup chaap silent bhitiyen.Kuch math boliyen."

Ishita was arranging things and Raman as usual can't stop speaking.

Raman "Tum log yeh bhee karthey hon kyaa Mujhey laga sirf daanth thodney kaa kaam hain."

Ishita "Joke thaa?Mazaa nahen aaya."

Raman "Sach mey.Main jabh chotha thaa uss samay gayan thaa.Uss dentist ney merey do daanth thoda aur gahr bhejdiyan.Uss time sey main kabhee gayan hee nahen."

Ishita smiles "Raman sirf who nahen bahuth kuch karthey hain.Shaayad kuch misalignment buna hoga aapkey daantho mye issliye thoda thaa."

Ishita then checking his teeths "Har teen mahinon mey ek baar dentist key poass jaana padtha hain Raman.Abh aapka dekhiyen.Aapko jaroor cleaning kee jaroori hain."

Raman "THo karwaaon naa."

Ishita "Aaj nahen .Aaj surgery hain .Yeh stitches dissolve honey key baad kabhee karwaaongee.Abh aap silent bhaitiyen."

Ishita was doing her job and Raman has nothing to do he was just staring at Ishita .

It finished in few minutes and Raman came out.He could hardly utter a word properly as effect of anesthesia.His words which came out don't make any sence.

Raman looking at her name plate Ishita Raman Bhalla.

Raman utters in his own new tone "Tum donon Ishita Bhalla ka pehla patient main hee hun naa."

Ishita just smiles understanding what he meant.

Ishita "Faraq hain.Ishita kaa last patiet bhee aap hee they.Aur who aapkey alaawa kissey ko treat nahen kiyya.But I am professional dentist."

Raman "Whaever.Tum bhee ghar aa rahen hon."

Ishita "Aapka voice translate karna hain naa.Aana he padega."

Ishita informs this in clinic and goes back to house along with Raman.

Then in house as Raman was watching TV Ishita is making fluid food for him as he can't eat solid.

Then his mobile rings and Ishita has to attend the call.

Ishita "Ishita Bhalla speaking."

Phone is in speaker.

"We have to speak to Raman Bhalla."

Ishita "He is not in state of speaking mow.He is listening"

"We are from Aeronautical Welfare council."

Raman gets excited to listen this.

"Raman Bhalla ney airfoil manufacturing key licnece key liyen apply kee thee."

"Unkey saarey details verify kee gayen hain.Aur license ka clearenc eho chukka hain."

Raman was happy.

"Unhey aaj sham ek even mey participate karna padega.Yahan unkey kuch madad ho saktha hain."

Ishita "Thankyou sir.Is there any more information we have to know."

"Mr Sharma.Defence counsil mey member hain .Unsey milengey tho who aapkey liyen ek contract dilwaasaktey hain.Aap aaj hee unhey meet keejiyen."

Ishita "Thanks for you help.We would be grateful."

Ishita cuts the call and she could feel the next instant she was lifted to air by Raman he is very happy.That is evident in his actions.

He keeps her down and hugs her tightly Ishita was shocked but she is also happy listening Success of Raman.

Raman then kisses on her cheek without realizing what he did .This made Ishita blush before Raman started to call Mihir.

Raman was speaking but Mihir can't understand.

Ishita comes to rescue.

Ishita tells everything to Mihir and he is also happy and tells he will pass news to everyone.

Then he cuts the call.

Then Raman.

Raman "Ishita tum bhee ready ho jaon humey Mumbai jaana hain."

Raman "Ruhi ka bhee luggage pack karon."

Ishita "Main kyon?"

Raman "Mera language wahan kaun translate karega.Aaisey jaonga tho buffon bankey rahoonga."

Ishita "Raman hum teenon jaayengey tho kasiey .Tickets bhee enquire nahen kiyya humney."

Raman confused.

Raman "Tickets?"

Ishita "Flight bhee kabh hain.Tickets availability."

Raman "Ishita kyaa baath kar rahen hon."

Raman then taking Ishita's arems drags her above terrace showing an helicopter over helipad.Ishita is shocked she has been in that house for more than a week and never seen this.

Raman "Hummara private helicopter hain.Main hummehsa issey mey jaatha hun.Aur abroad trips key liyen hummara private flight bhee hain."

Ishita now standing embrassed.

Raman "Jab sey uss flight accident huan Ishita ney mujhey flight pey jaaney sey manaa kardiyan.Issliyen mujhey personnal lena pada.Tha kee isska sab kuch humara hoga aur safety bhee jyaada hain."

Ishita "Ishita nkiya"

Raman "She insisted kee main koi air service pey naa jaon.But business key liyen jaana padtha hain naa.Issliyen mainey apnaa hee helicopter aur charted flight khareedha."

Raman "Hum paanch bhajey nikalenegey .ajab thak Ruhi aajayege aur pilot bhee sab kuch arrange kardega."

Ishita leaves from there and Raman messages pilot about location and everything.

Then it is aroung 5'O clock when Mihir call Raman.

Ishita "Mihir bathaon kyaa huan."

Mihir "Bhai Ashok ney who park firsey kabjaa karney ka plan banaaya."

Mihir "Who oldage home ko legal notice dey diyan hain.Aur ussey hummara park key pass aayega.Suna hain koi minister ussey mila huan hain.Aur uss oldage home key saath saath humey bhee kuch dinon mey ordr mil saktha hain place govt ko surrender karkey paisey leney kee."

Mihir "Bhai legal value sey 10% dengey bass.Means 10lakhs for 100 crores."

Mihir cuts the call.

Raman was thinking and Ishita confused.

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow!!!
all the updates one after the other thank u so much
im running short of words to express how much im liking all the updates
this is just too good
I loved the way Ruhi told the truth to her ishima but scared on how will Raman react to this
now what will b Shaguns plans ,
is subbu nuts ? what made him walk in to the clinic
loved the way Ishita and Ra,an spent time
it was so cute the way ishu admires her new name card i her cabin
superb update
now eagerly waiting to see how ishu is gonna treat the bleeding Raman

A little scared on how Ashok plans to harm nowing Raman's weekness god Ishita would be very guilty to break his trust
hope Raman will be fine and a miracle should happen Raman's heart's problem should be solved
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it! this is just made my day after on location video. thank you very much and please continue
Edited by ishraBest_2014 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 16 added.
now going to sleep. good night
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Posted: 10 years ago
just read the latest update great job. how embarrassed was ishita? you portrayed it very well.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome updates
awww ruhi is so cute thank god she didn't hide everything from ishita
mihika n Raman's convo was nice
omg I'm so happy hug then kiss
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the next two parts..
Awesome story..
Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb updates
loved both parts
the way their relation is growing
is beautifully written
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Posted: 10 years ago
excellnt updtes...
cant wait fr nxt...
;oved rkb kissing ishu...

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