Ek 'OS-Thon' Thread YHMians Ke Naam- THE LAST UPDATE PG 70 - Page 49

My comments for "subah hone na de..."

Originally posted by: OfTheHeart

I wrote the Last Part of Phir Le Aya Dill... OS (on Forum... different post)

Do Give it a shot! 😉

*Last-Part*

hello guys...
myself priya..
a rare visitor of this forum...
here i want to contribute a little to the thread..
and yes congratulations everybody for the 1st anniversary of yhm...
...
THE NAUGHTY COUPLE
she entered the room wearing her lingerie that raman brought for her..
her breasts were jingling up and down as she had not worn her bra that would support her naughty breasts that her husband raman kumar loves more than anything..
she went near to the bed and started thinking what will happen to the satin sheets on the bed after few hours or say few minutes...
raman walked inside the room to find it completely dark with a few candles lighting the room..
he walked inside carefully to find his wife smiling standing near the bed
he went more closer to find her wearing the same lingerie that he brought for her which barely covered her sensitive parts and upper thigh..
he stood behind her and moved his hands inside her upper part...
ishita became shocked but by the touch she realised that it was her hot and loving husband
ishita: toh app aagaye??
his hands reached her globes and hold each one of them
raman: haan
he squeezed the globes like a sponge in his hands
ishita moaned
ishita:pehle khana kha lo phir mujhe pyaas bhi lagi hai
raman smirked and twirled her so that she was standing facing him
raman: woh toh mujhe bhi lagi hai..
toh pehle pyaas bujate hai
he smirked again while ishita smiled shyly
he started roaming his index finger on her face till her jawline..
then he started placing wet kisses on her eyes then on her nose then near her lips making her to want more..
then he again slid her hands inside the dress
her nipples hardened as he roamed his fingers over them..
he started squeezing them between his fingers
ishita could not tolerate the sweet torture anymore and pressed her lips againt his hard ones...
her hands ran in his hair while raman's hands roaming on her back..
after the kiss soon their clothes were lying shamelessly on the floor..
raman picked up ishita and placed her softly on her bed
ishita: jaldi karo raman pyaas lagi hai
said ishita smirking at him
he too smirked her back and the next thing was raman liking breast valley , chewing her nipples and sucking them..
a loud gutteral moan escaped from ishita's mouth
ishita:ahhh raman i need u there she said pointing towards her bottom..
he slowly travelled south of her body licking, biting and soothing the area..
he reached her belly botton and bitted it making ishita moan..
he reached down between her thighs..
it was glistening with wetness
raman: i think my girl is ready..
ishita blushed
he inserted his finger in her damp core ..
ishita moaned again
he licked his finger
raman:u taste so good..
he licked her private part bitted it
an orgasm escaped
ishita cheeks showing the deepest shade of crimson

ishita: i need to fulfill my thirst to my darling
raman entered deep inside her..
a very loud orgasm escaped from her
he could feel the wall of her sex tighting against his manhood making him to thrust deeper...
raman pulled out suddenly
ishita came out of her pleausreful ride to know what happened
ishita: what happened raman..
before she could speak anything more he filled her mouth with his private part..
she realised he did it as he cumming and sucked hard till a last drop was left
raman: so how was it?/
ishita licked her lips
ishita : meri pyaas bhuji nahi!!! i need more
raman: u r so demanding first let me cum inside u and fulfill my wish then we will fulfill your other wish..
he blinked at her and she blushed
and the rest of the night passed with the room full of moans and orgasms...
...
sorry if i hurt anyone sentiments...
i know i am really a bad writer..
if really i hurted someone fillings do tell so i can delete this post..
priya

@omshreejaanu pls check mu update on pg.64
criticism welcome

Wah!What a thread girls. This is super guttery. God,only RKB's one minute scene our gutter minds r overtime working.
Tweety,amazing start dr.It's 2 HOT."no touching till 4 pm change 2 only touching till 4 pm" 🤣
OftheHeart, urs is emomantic,hot dr.loved it.
Hey aruna,i like carrom scince my childhood.bt never thought it can play like this.Raman's strip show.wow awsm idea.
Dochdoe,ur OS is hotmotional dr.I like the theme.
RaYaKapoor,r u seriously mentioned this1 is ur 1st G type.It's superb yaar.
Bscorp,what a honey moon dr.OMG 4 the umpteenth time.poor hotel staff.super se*y.love this 2.
Ankita,it's a party time.Bt i think raman's party started at middle of the party they attend.
Jenny,ur ishu is so dumb. combined flavour sharbat.Wow.
Peace,urs is the 1st 1 I read.u destroyed my peaceful,poor,innocent,little mind baby.poor me.It's super hot dr.Funny 2. Raman's dream about sharbat.various flavours.🤣 how thoughtful u r.
And thank you 2.Bcoz of ur pm i found this thread.I saw this b4 bt didn't think about checking what this is.So thank you again.
OSJ where's urs? Post it soon dr.And tnx 4 making this thread.All of them r super hot.
Luckely,b4 read this1 i got the key inside & locked myself in my room.This is my halaath after read this.☺️🤣

no body reading mine???
so can i delete it???

Sorry girls I am a bit busy right now. Will get back to u real soon to update the main post if ever there are new entries!

Omg all updates was hot and awesome. Wow.

Note: I have updated my OS "The Hot Game" in between. Well Divya had requested me to add those parts as well. I couldn't refuse her at the end of the day. I am now way continuing the OS, as it wil just get erotic after this point. Nikki, invited me to write an Os and I did write for her and now am dedicating those updated lines to Divya. Here you go !

Do let me know your comments on the updated portion. Thanks a lot for this amazing response