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Posted: 10 years ago

I tried and tried to write a gutter but didn't succeed. Hats off to the wonderful writers who can write it so well. Instead I came up with this, personally I didn't like it, but my mind couldn't come up with anything better. I hope I don't spoil the party out here 😭😭😭😭😭

The Last Time

"If I give you what you want, shouldn't I get something in return Ishita?" he raised his eyebrow in question as they sat on the red sofa of his cabin.

"fair enough, what do you want Mr Bhalla?" she said, impatiently tapping her foot on the white marble floor

"you" he flipped casually through the business newspaper. He smirked as he heard her foot-tapping stopped, just the kind of reaction he wanted. He carefully put the paper down and looked at her "be my mistress for a night and I'll sign the papers"

"I'll not do that" she replied firmly after recovering from the initial shock.

"So be it, goodbye then, I've an important meeting in 15 minutes" he got up and pointed the exit door to her.

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5 p.m., the same evening :

A ring in his phone brought him out of the piles of work he was sitting on. He smirked at the caller-id

"Hello sweetheart, I didn't know you missed me so much" he said playfully

"Shut that filthy tongue of yours. I'm talking to you only because I've no other option, I accept your proposition" she said in one breath

"Ah... Ha, now that's like my Jhansi ki Rani, so you want me to shut that tongue? I'll need a lot of help from you for that baby. Just keep my tongue busy with lovely stuffs"

"come to the point"

"The point is, your time starts tonight at 9, in my farm house. Don't be late baby or I'll change my mind. And you will have gifts at your door in an hour"

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She steadied her steps and tried to balance her nerves before she pressed the bell

"Wow, you are 5 whole minutes early" he said as he opened the door for her to enter "good, that means I can first explain the rules to you"

With that he closed the door and pinned her to it. She was taken aback by the intensity of the pull, she tried to push him away.

"Rule number one" he said as he pulled down the anchal of her black saree "You can't push me away"

"Rule number two" he brushed his knuckles softly on her left breast as she hissed with the tingling feeling "you are not going to wear anything today, absolutely nothing"

"Rule number three" he tried to locate her nipple with the back of his index and middle fingers as he whispered in her ears "Too many rules isn't it sweetheart? So let's skip that part and seal the deal" with that he pressed his lips on her trembling ones.

His soft approach confused her, she thought he would be rough on her but he was kissing her like she would break if he applied force.

He nibbled and sucked her lower lips taking his own sweet time while his hands managed to throw the blouse away from her body

"Talk to me" he said as he pulled the string of her petticoat open

"I didn't know mistresses need to talk" she tried to shield herself from his gaze.

"well this mistress needs to talk, and moan and do whatever I say" He picked her up and took the staircase to his room. That's when she noticed that the entire house was lit up with candles. He took her to the pool that opened to his room. The pool was filled with rose petals and surrounded by candles.

He dropped her in the pool with a thud splashing water all over "you have grown fat, see what you have done to the poor water" he mocked as he started opening his shirt.

She glared at him "yes, the fat, ugly woman whom you love to hate. So pray tell me why are all these decoration done to welcome me"

He jumped into the pool walked to her and pulled her close to him. It was then that she realized that her nude colour lingerie was totally transparent.

"I see you have worn my favorite colour... your skin" he grinned at her as he rounded his large palms around her cups as if trying to make her see how perfectly they fitted.

Her cheeks warmed up as she tried to resist the feeling that she had decided to school down before coming here.

"I decorated it because this will be the last time I'll make love to my beautiful wife, I wanted those thousand candles and roses to be my witness" he whispered while nibbling her ears as he entwined his fingers with her's. "Now, won't my lovely wife help me undress like I helped her"

Her hands slowly made their way to his button as they came undone one after another. She removed her hands once she was done.

"You have to undress me sweetheart not just open the shirt" he smirked

She slowly moved her hand to his zipper, blood rushed through him as she glided it down.

"Why are you talking like this?" She asked

He sucked a drop of water hanging down her chin and her breath hitched. His hands went down to her waist as he slowly glided them to the bellybutton. He put his finger in and out of it playing havoc to her senses

"Like what?" he took their entwined hands and firmly placed them on her back. He moved his mouth towards the strap of her bra as she breathed heavily in anticipation

"nicely, you haven't talked like this since months, so why now?"

"God, I've always hated those bra straps of your's and I've always wanted to tear them apart with my teeth" with that he started to pull her straps with his teeth, each time deliberately biting some of her flesh as she gasped in pain and pleasure. With a final pull he tore the material apart and threw it away. He then pulled her to himself grinding her breasts into his torso; she closed her eyes

"You didn't answer me, this evening you so rude and now you are not rude to me, why?"

He glided his hands lower "You won't have come here had I told you that I wanted you to be my wife for..." He discarded their final clothing and entered her as tears made way out of her eyes "the last time"

She sobbed harder at that and hugged him tight moving with him "the last time" she repeated.

[Umrein lagi kehte huye... do lafz the, ek baat thi
woh ek din sau saal ka... sau saal ki who raat thi
Kaisa lage jo, chupchap dono... pal pal mein puri sadiyaan bita de]
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety

<font color="#9900ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Aruu its my time to blush now☺️</font>



Thanks a tonne tweety 😳 😳
Hope it was up to the mark !!!! I am still blushing yaar .. Whenever I scan the first page your story is doing the magic.. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sulochana90

Wow it's just awesome😊



Thanks a lot :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Smart game by Raman to get Ishita to break her own punishment.



Puttar's ceo brains
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is just OmG omG !! Whoaaaouuu !!! Brilliant amazing sooperb !! Love it to the core, n when i say to the core, it means to the core !!! ;) wah wah wah !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arunabhi



Hahahaha .. Glad you found it in terms with the thread 😆 😆
OSJ, totally fine with the title name.. I will update the title name in a while..
I have more stories playing in my mind already, so will wait for the others to complete and then give my next update. Thanks for welcoming me 🤗


U r welcome! The more the merrier! I am loving the responses here!
Ok I am editing the title!
Superb work Aruna! U girls r really giving me complexes now!
Yes yes keep the stories coming n safeguard them for later. I hope we go on for the whole festive month of December! 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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*edited

I don't think now anybody will ever play the game of carrom without thinking of 'THE HOT GAME'...I think we are spoiled for life (as with drumstick😉)

After reading that we also needed water as Ishita needed it' She gulped in a bottle of water'

Edited by yhmmylife - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Gosh another update!! By dochdoe! I will have to edit again.
Run to read!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dochdoe u have done a brilliant job...loved it..☺️ Trying to keep myself under control.
One thing i wanted to ask. Maybe I missed something in the story...why was it their last time😲??
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Gosh another update!! By dochdoe! I will have to edit again.

Run to read!


Oju aaj toh dhamaal hi dhamaal hai 😆. maza aa gaya after reading all these stories😳

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