Until we meet again: An Ishra SS -Thank you note -pg 14 - Page 9

Originally posted by: mnr123

👏 😊

Amazing I read it in one go and then again n again n again 😆🤣

OOofff Sharbet and its side effects 🤪

Main toh Lovely hoagyi yaar tera yeh OS Padke 😛

I never knew u were one of those who wud write an OS, i found u too analytical than someone who lives in Dream world 😳 But m so glad ki u proved me wrong 👏 U not only live in a dream world but u have the power to make us visualize ur dreams 😳👏 thats really an amazing quality. 🤗

I liked the Ishra here, confused but yet determined souls 😆 I first read the first part n I was like sh*t I want more! Then within few minutes u pasted another part I was like WOW what was that now i am hungry more n i need more OS'es from u 😆😕 I hope u do write in future coz u write well and I agree with Vyas here that this was similar to Movies especially the way u broke it down in parts 😳

P.S: Do u want PK to give u a sanskari account of what he feels about this OS/TS 😆

Woww.. Its Amazing !
Beautifully Written.

Originally posted by: mnr123

👏 😊

Amazing I read it in one go and then again n again n again 😆🤣

Thanks meghz😳🤗

OOofff Sharbet and its side effects 🤪

Very potent Sharbet it was😆😉

Main toh Lovely hoagyi yaar tera yeh OS Padke 😛

Me blushing😳...itna praise? And that too from a fab writer like you😲

I never knew u were one of those who wud write an OS, i found u too analytical than someone who lives in Dream world 😳 But m so glad ki u proved me wrong 👏 U not only live in a dream world but u have the power to make us visualize ur dreams 😳👏 thats really an amazing quality. 🤗

Sach mein? You thought I am an analytical writer? I started off writing serious stuff re on this forum..but i used to write a lot of emo comments on people's posts😆..haan bbut i never thought I could sit myself down to write an OS..😉

power to make people visualize dreams...omg that's the best compliment ever😳

I liked the Ishra here, confused but yet determined souls 😆 I first read the first part n I was like sh*t I want more! Then within few minutes u pasted another part I was like WOW what was that now i am hungry more n i need more OS'es from u 😆😕 I hope u do write in future coz u write well and I agree with Vyas here that this was similar to Movies especially the way u broke it down in parts 😳

The Ishra here are closest to my version of how I see ishra. ..the way I always saw them ..till ishu changed for the worse...😕...so this is my version of the cvs IshRa...glad you liked them..😊

more?...Ayyo ..dekhte hai...ek aur sherbet shot ki zaroorat padegi shaayad😆

P.S: Do u want PK to give u a sanskari account of what he feels about this OS/TS 😆

Of course😆..Waiting to hear what pk jee has to say..😊

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

First of all...glad to c u writing bhairvi dii

u are an awesum writer and i will request u to write more often please

loved this one

Thanks ankita🤗

it was like a beautiful journey from begining to end

i liked the point of ishita saying to do it the most

thats what they have shown...ishita is more strong headed while raman is vulnerable

Yes..that was my version of IshRa but very close to what I thought the cvs created ishita and raman as...ishita was always the more decisive one...and Raman the more contemplative...and emotional one. I just tried to get into both these complicated souls heads for a while..what would a seperation feel like to both of them. .

glad you liked it😳😊

Only for the fact that she said it made the story more beautiful

Raman would never take that step to think and act. .he would either impulsively act ..like he did when he hugged her...or he just wouldnt...his guilt, his past demons..his baggage would weigh him down the moment he begins to think and contemplate...

Ishita for her pride and stubbornness. ..is also the one to take decisions...wrong and right ones both...and I wanted to push her into a corner...where she is so overwhelmed by her own emotions that she decides for both of them😳

you felt that made the story more beautiful? ..aww thanks😊

and you gave amazing titles to each part

that was a unique concept n i liked it really

That was an afterthought really...glad it fit in well.

superb ending

sometimes words are not neccessary

the only required thing is togetherness and u explained this point in a wonderful way

and the emotions...bang on...perfect...

loved itt

write more dii n keep pming

This is really well done. 👏👏👏

Great job, I love it.

Hope to see more FFs from you on the forum.😃

Pk to PB

PB beta Maine tumhe AK ki Bahu mana hai aur mujhe tumse yehi umeed thi.
Tum bahot accha likhti ho 😊

Mujhe yeh story bilkul bhi Asanskari nahi laga 😆 Although main thoda Dar Dar ke padh raha tha.

Par main yeh manta hun ki physical desires se bhi Love ko express kiya ja sakta hai. As long as log Pyar kare 😳

Mujhe tumhara Part 1 jyada accha laga jo kashish thi dono ke Pyar mein woh bahot hi acchi thi. 😳

Main toh yeh nhi keh sakta ki tumne humare pariwar ka naam roshan kiya lekin haan AK toh jarur Khush hoga yeh padke 😳

Am glad you liked my review😊

Originally posted by: mnr123

Pk to PB

PB beta Maine tumhe AK ki Bahu mana hai aur mujhe tumse yehi umeed thi.
Tum bahot accha likhti ho 😊

Mujhe yeh story bilkul bhi Asanskari nahi laga 😆 Although main thoda Dar Dar ke padh raha tha.

Par main yeh manta hun ki physical desires se bhi Love ko express kiya ja sakta hai. As long as log Pyar kare 😳

Mujhe tumhara Part 1 jyada accha laga jo kashish thi dono ke Pyar mein woh bahot hi acchi thi. 😳

Main toh yeh nhi keh sakta ki tumne humare pariwar ka naam roshan kiya lekin haan AK toh jarur Khush hoga yeh padke 😳

Originally posted by: OfTheHeart

OMG!!!

Was that a TS!!!

I thought I was in some fantasy world... It was more beautiful than anything I have read till now...

Can I disclose a secret... because you deserve to know...

I actually cried for the first time reading some of their thoughts in the first part... they were kind of nostalgic for me...

Thanks so much!!

I think I am going to read it again...

Woh my gawd 😲 ..that was amazing pb.. 😃 ..it was like the perfect blend of emotions and hotness.. 😃 😳 ..I loved your style of writing ..esp the first part..it was brilliant..female pks naughtiness unleashed in the second part 😉 😃 ..pls write more often..you write beautifully 😊 ⭐️