REALIZATION - AN ISHRA SS COMPLETE LAST PART PG 20

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Swathi

@swathibalan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Ohgod!
Bhanu di! Im copyrighting di!! Only i call u di here okay? 😛🤗

Yup You copyright Di.. Ill copyright "Behna"😛😆

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felciya

@felciya

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Its pleasant to read. Loved it. His naughty lines at the end is too good.Feel Good SS.

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Aww ...loved the way they confessed 😳. Her lamba lecture & his simple ILU ❤️

B...this was fantastic. But then you were writing it so I did not expect any less. Waise poor Mihir must be wondering ab kaun pahad toota ... first his bhabhi barges in & bhai cancels all meetings to rush off and everyone knows pyaar ke alawa yeh dono sab kuch karte hain 😆

PS - I hope they do the confession in his office & not at that tour ageency types airport in the show too.

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#164

woww wowww wowww!!! amazinggg and awesummm yaarr!! loved how the confession happeneddd!!! its truely magic!

do write moreee!!

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-HAA-

@-HAA-

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Kitna achcha likthi ho yaar tum.

Loved it

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Bhanu

@btalwar

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: Ohgod!
Bhanu diii.. 🤗
u must be mad to think this ending isnt good!!! 😲 its just sooo beautiful!! And sooo realistic.. And u tho rock!!! To write this beautiful piece even when ur caught up with life takes some skill and patience!! 👏

I loved it.. Completely.. The fact that in the end, the three words Raman ended up saying before her even though she was the one who ensured they finally confess their feelings!! Yaay to that.. How i wish whenever they do end up showing the confession, Ishita is the one to start and then Raman finishes it just like this

This is beautiful!! I forbid you from making any changes whatsoever!! 😳

Love u loads!! And thank u for this! 👏👏

Bhu 🤗

You know how stuck and disturbed I was when I wrote this ... I wanted to make it less cheesy but my tired mind refused to think for a better option ... 😛

Well, now that the confession has still NOT (why am I not surprised 😆😆) happened ... I guess I can come back to this piece while Shagun dances in Bhalla house 😆

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Bhanu

@btalwar

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: janu12345
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Jaanu 🤗

Second one you gotta unreserve 😛

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Bhanu

@btalwar

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_
Thats a perferrrt end bhanu
so beautifully written
excellent ss
thanks for the pm buddy..looking frwd to more stories from u on ishra😉

Thank you Dipsi 😊

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Bhanu

@btalwar

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
awww B...that was so cute and romantic!☺️
the confession was so beautiful and his simple reply, phir naughty remarks from him...it felt so good to read! loved every bit of it!❤️

TV 🤗

Whenever I write something romantic, I always do a happy dance when you like it, cause you are my OS jeanie ... thank you 🤗