REALIZATION - AN ISHRA SS COMPLETE LAST PART PG 20 - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
Bhanu di, the story is absolutely beautiful! 👏This scene is so nice,subtle and cute that it can be incorporated in the show. I wish they do, wud love to see the same on the screen.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome..
perfect ending...👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
You have given the story such a beautiful ending loved the way Ishu confessed her feelings. I liked how you linked to the horoscope epi and Ruhi, it was perfect.
Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
I reserve with a promise to edit it ASAP with a long due comment. Sorry for the last one :( I forget after I reserve. Bad habit hai.. Rushing to read now.

EDITING 😃

Okay firstly. I need to thank you for writing this. Even though you're so occupied. And you say you've written all of it in intervals, this is one hell of a story.

What I really love about any piece of writing is conversations and your entire story is holding itself on conversations. I love how Ishita realized she loved him and wanted him to know it all. She wanted to rid him of his guilt and let him know of her love and feelings and she did it so beautifully. Ishita was herself, JKR who loves to lecture and Raman a silent listener only speaking with a line that makes a difference 😆

Every dialogue and every moment here expresses their love for each other. And what was more touching was what triggered Ishita to confess so boldly. A moment between a family she wanted to see come alive within hers.

I wish we could have such heartfelt confessions and conversations even on the show, but even if I get to read it from someone as talented a writer like you, its worth it. Such a soulful piece.

Lovely Bhanu 😃 Thanks for writing for us 🤗
Edited by -Anku- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww.. What a beautiful and perfect ending... <33
Why would you think its not good.? It was brilliant.. ⭐️
Her sirf hamare liye from Sirf Ruhi ke liye was so adorable.! 😳 Thier cute whispering always brings a goofy grin on my face.! They are so adorable and intense ☺️ Loved their cute yet beautiful confession.! ❤️

The naughty end was the cherry on the cake.! Raavan all set to prove his version of budhapa to his JKR 😆☺️

Perfect ending.! Than you for the lovely TS and the PM :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
This made me smile :) thanks.
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is Super Awesome B!.. Why do you want to change the end... NAHIIINNN.
dont do pleej. its perfect and very natural and normal for this couple
The conversation, the hesitation, the shyness, yet the understanding LOVED every bit of it!!
The one liners too were hilarious..
And Ravan all set to prove he is not a buddha.. 😉😆😆
IMO its superb and amazing..
Rocking SS Behna.. 🤗🤗
P.S. - This SS had to be good.. second part was dedicated to me after all..(Muft ka credit😛)
Edited by swathibalan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
its such a beautiful ending wow
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was utterly cute and romantic! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was beautiful Bhanu 😳 Loved our Raavan Kumar finally breaking his banwaas 😆
Suno, agar bus travel se tumhare muse ko itnii aur aissi prerna milti hai tu we don't mind a few more trips! 😉


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