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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

aww this was such a beautiful os
loved it... definitely brightened my mood😃
superb dear⭐️

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Jiyaa

@jiyaa02

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

awww soo cute

Last line is just awesome " running together towards one goal- happiness"👏

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Beautiful.there are so many dialogues which touched my heart."His heart wanted to quit beating at the thought of leaving her and letting go of her ",- Without me?, But you need me, don't you? n the list goes on.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Nichuss
awesome one...
i loved the dialogues more😳

First one to comment on my story is the lovable n crazy kitty girl!!😃

Thank u very much. Glad u liked the dialogues.

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

What a wonderful One shot 😃 Love it so much. The moments were beautiful, so subtle and so romantic. I hope this scene is what we get at the conclusion of this track.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: dazzzling
This is so beautiful dear. I love the Ishita in your stories. She is so brave and loving. She is so sure of herself and so confident of their relationship. Indeed raman's strength and pride.
The dialogues are simply awesome.
and you are simply outstanding OSJ. You make people fall in love again and again with IshRa with your stories. Keep writing!

Awww thank u so much. 😳 Believe me it is not easy to write these days with the current track. Yesterday I watched only the IshRa scenes n turned off my lappy unable to bear Mihika n her Shagun saving obsession.

And today I had some free time and was feeling bored. I felt like writing and here I am.

Happy u liked it so much n happier that I strengthen ur love for IshRa with this one😳

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sulochana90

@sulochana90

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Cute

Very beautifully written

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: jiyaa02
awww soo cute
Last line is just awesome " running together towards one goal- happiness"👏

Thank u so much for being here. Means a lot!

Wanted to end this shot with a feeling good line, glad u liked it. 😊

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: -Anku-
What a wonderful One shot 😃 Love it so much. The moments were beautiful, so subtle and so romantic. I hope this scene is what we get at the conclusion of this track.

Thank u so much Anku. I am pleased to know you liked this write up. Coming to the show, I am not hoping much to be honest. Because of the multitudes of tracks going on at the same time in the show, ishRa's track never get the closure they deserve but still I am hopeful that Ishu will not let go of Raman so easily and would add one to add and understand how that "going away from her " germinated.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: lourel24
Beautiful.there are so many dialogues which touched my heart."His heart wanted to quit beating at the thought of leaving her and letting go of her ",- Without me?, But you need me, don't you? n the list goes on.

Thanks a lot Lourel. Being a regular reader of my work, I always look forward to your comments.

Yes this one shot was mainly based on a heart to heart conversation between our loving couple and I am glad u people are loving the dialogues😃