Well .. what can I say about this piece ... poignant, beautiful, sad and yet amazing ...
The way both of them were pulled to their own spot ... the way she rushed to meet him giving a damn to the world, rain, her circumstances, the way he disregarded her as an illusion unable to believe his own fate ... the way she just crashed into his arms ..
I am being honest here .. I have been to Mussorie multiple times as a kid so I could literally imagine the scene, infact I could smell the fragrance in the air and feel the weather ... your update was that beautiful that it actually transported me there ... and I could visualize them pretty well...
And the reason for her separation ... could it be more beautiful yet heartbreaking .. she wanted to keep her promise to a departing soul ... she sacrificed her love to be by the side of someone during his last hour ...
You are truly a beautiful writer ... 😊
Looking forward to the new update
Cheers
Bhanu
Edited by btalwar - 10 years ago
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