ff-My Life Starting With An Unknown Person updated part72(a) aug28 - Page 64

Originally posted by: janani_divan

Hey sriya baby post once again this update,there is a lot of distance b/w letter to letter..once check it dear.

hi dear i changed the font i think now it is readable😊

i xpctd this ishu is upto some thing when she hugged raman and saying all these...

Very emotional update I literally cried reading this update very well written

awesomely written and an emotional part...liked very much..thanx for BIG UPDATE dear...👏

It was so emotional part... Ishu took so harsh step of eating sleeping pills...thank god she is fine...all mistake was of appa and raghu but an unknown punishment will be given to vandu, madhu and shantiii, they deserve to meet her...But now appa and raghu will repent for their mistake...Mrs bhalla was too harsh on ishu...I mean choosing between parents and husband is very difficult , hope Raman and mrs bhslla realised this...I loved appa ishu scene...Sometimes I think how difficult for girls to live without their father...I think beginning 20yrs atleast girls have only one hero, their father imagining life without talking them is very difficult...

So now new beginning in life...hope everything will sort out soon...waiting for next...I read u are updating today...waiting

Thanks for pm.

Nice update ur story writing Is superb I love the way she interacted with her appa and raman but raghu is missing he should apologize for his deed. update soon...

So touching!!! Love can be in many ways... Parents love partner's love siblings love ...so n sooo different shades of love hats off coz in dis one u have coloured all of them in one portrait... Keep dat love flowing 😊 😳 😳 n update soon...

emotional update
ishita was emotional and she didn't think properly before taking sleeping pills...but she should not done this...thank god she is fine
raman knows how difficult it is for ishita to choose between him and appa coz she loves them both so much...i hope ramam will do something to understand this to mrs.bhalla...waiting to read what will happen next
update soon😊

awesome... so we will wait for d beginning of ishra life

part-60

hi friends sorry for not updating yesterday here iam updating new part,hope u will enjoy

vandu:in her room"amma,bala where is ishu,did raghu uncle and appa fighted,where is raman?u didnt wake up me yesterday?
both were silent
vandu:holding bala's hand "bala what happened is everything fine?"
bala:vandu ishu went with raman to her home
vandu:but why i mean without coming home
bala:little argument was happened b/w appa and raghu,later raman took ishu angrily with him,nothing serious vandu after settling everything she said she will come to see u in mumbai
vandu:hoo ok iam feeling relaxed now"amma why u r silent is everything ok na,bala r u hiding anything?"
bala:vandu amma is missing ishu,hi naa amma by saying he looks at amma
amma:ha vandu iam misssing ishu,vandu u take rest i will come again by saying she moves to her room holding her tears back not to broke vandu
after an hr:
vandu:amma bala where u r going where is appa,i forgot to ask about appa
amma:ur appa was upset with ishu's sudden departure he said he will stay in the temple yesterday,now we are going to bring him back
vandu:ok amma,he will be definitely sad go and bring apppa back
iyers and bhallas reaches hospital
raman completes all the formalities for ishitha's discharge
raman walks out with ishu holding her hand"maa we can leave now,bhallas leave silently without looking at iyers,rinki turns back to karthik and assures him wtih her eyes
while mihika and sarika has a hope that mihir and romi turns back but it didnt happened
ishu:looks at raman asking his permission to talk with her parents
raman:reluctantly leaves her hand
ishu:hugs amma and cries her heart out"amma take care of vandu akka and appa,
amma:ishu i miss u kanna
ishu:i too amma,u be careful of urself too
amma:silently sobs
mrs.bhalla comes back and shouts at raman"raman ask ur wife to come fast,we are getting late"
ishu follows silently her raman leaving her parents in tears
.entire the journey was silent,ishu was afraid to speak santhoshi seeing her anger
in delhi,at bhallas mansion
daadi:thoshi go and get aarthi thali
mrs.bhalla silently walks inside followed by daadi,bhalla,mihir and romi while ishra at the entrance
without a smile mrs.bhalla perform the aarthi,after ishra entering into the house
ishu:tries to talk with daadi"daadi mi..."
daadi:without looking at ishu"raman u both go and freshup,ur wife needs rest by saying everyone departures to their room
ishu:looks at raman with tearful eyes
raman:madrasan now no more tears they need sometime to forget everything till then u take rest,holding her hand he takes her to their room
both gets freshup
raman sitting near ishu on the bed"he makes her to take the tablets while ishu makes faces seeing the tablets
raman hurfully speaks"yeh isa harkath karne ke pehle sochna padega,kya kiya thum ishitha,what if something had happened to u"
ishu:laying her head on his lap"sorry raman the thought of moving away from u made me to take such step
raman:caressing her hair "never take such decisions,i cant live without u"
ishu:i too raman
raman:ok now get up and take these tablets,
ishu:nahi raman iam fine know?now no need of these tablets
raman:dont make excuses you have to take it
mihir comes to raman's room,seeing ishu sleeping on raman's lap,he feels happy.but controls his anxiety and turns towards the entrance
raman:noticing mihir's presence he stops him saying "mihir wait why u came and why r u leaving
ishu:gets up listening to raman's words
mihir:turning back looks at ishu who was smiling seeing him,but mihir doesnt returns the smile,turning to raman"bhai actually US investors ke saath meeting hi!"
it has to be actually held before 2days but u
raman:understanding what he was going to tell speaks to him"schedule the meeting to tomorrow
mihir:bhai but they has to leave tomorrow,already i made them to wait for 2days
raman:ok when is the meeting
mihir:within 2hrs
raman:ok u go and get ready ,we will go
after mihir leaving
ishu:raman dont go please
raman:ishitha it has many days i didnt visited the office,i have to manage everything,after meeting i will come fast,but u have to take care of urself
ishu:nods her head sadly
raman:while leaving ishitha dont skip ur meals,i will tell to maa and rinky
ishu:nods her head positively
raman at downstairs sitting at the dinning table takes his breakfast with all the family members maa iam going to office take care of ishitha,please dont be harsh towards her
mrs.bhalla:raman dont shower too much of love towards her,her appa doesnt know how to brought up his daughter,she cant take her life decisions independently
raman:angrily why r u bringing her father in between,how papa loves u in the same way i will love my wife
by saying he angrily moves out followed by mihir
daadi:rinky after having ur breakfast take breakfast to ishitha
rinky:nods her head positively while mrs.bhalla moves to the kitchen angrily
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in ishu's room
ishu:was arranging the room as she was feeling lonely
rinky:comes to their room"bhabi why r u working u have to take rest,by saying she makes ishu to sit on the bed
ishu:in a sad tone r u not angry on me,everyone are angry at me
rinky:i was angry at u,but karthik told me everything,u commited a mistake but it showed me how much u loves raman bhai,he is very lucky to get a loving wife
hmm aab jaldhi se nashta karo orelse raman bhai will see my end saying why u didnt took care of my wife
ishu:smiles slightly and takes her breakfast
rinky:bhabi yeh aopka dress bhai ka favourite color,he loves very much,whenever he used to buy a dress for me,he only buys blue color
ishu reminds amma's words
fb:
amma:beta when raman loves u so much,u should do small things to make him happy,u know he loves u to see in saree then why cant u wear them
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fb ends...
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appa's family and gopals family returns to mumbai after bhallas departure
bala goes to his work leaving vandu at amma's house
amma found some solace taking care of vandu as ishitha' memories will be less
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in delhi at afternoon:
ishu:comes downstairs as she is feeling bored,and memories of her parents are haunting in loneliness
she walks to kitchen where daadi was chopping vegetables,and toshi was cooking food
ishu:mummiji i will prepare lunch u say the menu
toshi:no need of ur help,if u take care of urself and ur husband it will be a great help to me
ishu:gets tears listening to her words,she looks at daadi
daadi:resumes her work
ishu:mummiji iam sorry i shouldnt go with
mrs.bhalla:i said u too not speak about any of ur family members,i dont want to listen anything,give us some peace
ishu:runs to her room crying
daadi:shouts at mrs.bhalla after ishu leaving to her room"toshi haadh hotha hi,voh bechari kya kiya,why r u hurting her with ur words,like ur son she too loves raman,if she wouldnt love him she would have happily left with his father,but she tried to kill herself because of only one thing that she cant live without ur son
vishwanath hided some things,u have to think from his perspective also,the situation raman and ishitha married was very different,if u raise voice on her i wont spare u,untill iam alive u cant over rule this house,if iam keeping quiet doesnt mean that i will just sit silently what ever u do
by saying she angrily moves to her room
mrs.bhalla:i too was concerned about my son,i want her to become responsible wife who thinks about her in-laws family and her husband
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at lunch
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daadi:rinky go and call ishitha to come down for lunch
rinky comes to ishu's room to find her weeping sitting on the bed,with the face hiding on her knees
she calls ishu,but getting no response she moves down to inform daadi
rinky:daadi bhabi is crying i called her but she is not responding
mr.bhalla:kya kiya thoshi thum
mrs.bhalla:miney kya kiya,if anything goes wrong is iam responsible
daadi:ur wife gone mad,ask her to think only about u and herself i can deal about this house
by saying she moves to ishu's room
daadi:ishitha get up and have ur lunch
ishu:listening to daadi's voice "why u came here,no one wants to talk to me naa,u too was angry on me,what mistake i did,listening to elders words is my mistake,everything was done by appa and raghu uncle,but u people are punishing me,
no one likes me,iam not a good person i only makes others to worry,i deserve this punishment,why u married me to ur grand son if u didnt like my appa and me
never i didnt seen this much hatred towards me from anyone
raman also left me for his office work leaving me alone here
its all my amma's mistake,she didnt teached me how to behave with in-laws what to do and what not to do
appa mujje nahi amma ko zyada laad dhiya
with ishu's comment daadi laughs heartfully
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rinky:listening to daadi's loud laugh"daadi is laughing this much loudly paakka bhabi has craked some joke,she is very cute,i will also go up to bhabi's room
toshi:rinky chup chap se bhit karke kaavo,jyada smart math banavo thumhari bhabi ki tharah
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in ishu's room
ishu:looks at daadi with a pout for the first time after daadi came to her room
daadi:seeing her tries to control her laugh
ishu:u r getting laugh seeing my inability
daadi:nahi tho kya even while crying u r cracking jokes
ishu:with puppy face "what joke i craked"
daadi:thum thumhari amma ko kyou blame kar rahi hu,she gave birth to a lovely girl
ishu:but u too didnt talked to me
daadi:u made mistake so i was angry,but iam ur daadi na so i cant be more anger with u for more time,chalo now eat fast by saying she starts feeding ishu while talking to her"if u wont eat,if raman comes to know then he will shout the roof of this mansion also gets frightened and will flew away,u cant make ur daadi to stay in a roofless house
ishu:smiles heartfully at daadi
daadi:ishitha u dont worry about ur mummiji's words give her sometime
ishu:Nods her head positively
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2days passes in the same way while ishu was slowly getting healthier,and starts doing some house hold works
one fine morning
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raman:was hurrying to office as he woke up late "ishitha meri blue shirt kaha hi?"
pagal jaldhi aavo kaha hi thum
ishitha rushes to her room listening to his screams
raman:he continues to shout ishitha ishitha meri shirt,he turns towards entrance to see whether she is coming or not
ishu was standing at the entrance with her hands on her hips taking long breath,as her husband made her to rush
raman:smiles at her,kya madrasan,meri blue shirt kaha hi
ishu:coming inside,raman u r wearing white shirt phir kyou mujje pareshan kar rahi hu?
raman:what i did madrasan,i want my blue shirt as i was unable to find it i worn this white shirt
ishu:coming near to him,lekin raman u r looking handsome in this white shirt
raman:sacchi madrasan
ishu:kya raman really this white color apts u
raman:ok as u say madam
he was about to move but stopped by ishu's hold on his wrist
raman:looks at her questioningly
ishu:will u go like this only
raman:what happened to me,now only u praised me that iam looking handsome
ishu:hitting her head,kya raman in which school u studied by saying she unbuttons the shirt
raman:he doesnt look at the shirt but understood that she was unbuttoning his shirt
"madrasan kyyaaa..kar rahi hu(st):ithna bold kab hogaya yeh mera pathni,subah subah mera shirt nikal rahi hu
ishu:what i was doing u had put ur shirt buttons inorderly if u go like this to downstairs everyone will laugh at u
raman:(st):beta chalo thum zyada soch rahi hu,dekho she is correcting ur mistake
ishu:aap bhi naa u r 28yrs old but u dont know how to put the shirt buttons,but her raman was in full work of staring at her
without listening to her words
after putting the buttons in order,she looks at him which brings him out of her raveria,"raman hogaya aab aavo jaldhi,miney thumhara liye,goobi paratha,alloo paratha banaya jaldi aavoo,by saying she holds his hand
raman:stopping ishu by holding her hand which was on his wrist looks at her
ishu:raman what happened?did u forgot anything
raman:ishitha can i ask u one thing
ishu:looking at his eyes with sad voice"raman humare beech me kaab ithna dhoor aap mujjse permission maang rahi hu kuch puchne keliye?'
raman:madrasan isa nahi hi i ii..ii
ishu:kya raman bolo kya chahiye voh i...iii kya hi
raman:in one go,'mujje ek kiss chahiye',saying that he looks at her naughtily
ishu:immediately covers her both cheeks with her palms,"nahi raman i wont give u that,already daily 3times iam eating that bloody tablets if u kiss me now,then again i have to take another tablet for my allergy
raman:hitting his head,"madrasan vaha nahi hi?"
ishu:(st)tho kaha ,ayyyooo sacchi me thum pagal ishu,he wants to kiss u on forehead,kithna cute hi raman,
raman:(st):hope she understood,if u would have been healthy then i wouldnt asked u permission,pyaari madrasan,coming out of his thoughts he questions her with his eyes
ishu:smiles at him
raman moves forward and cups her face for confirmation he looks one more time at her
ishu:kya raman ek kiss keliye bhi ithna time chahiye kya aapko
raman:(st):meri madrasan ithna bold kab bangaya
ishu:jaldi raman neeche saab wait kar rahi hu thumhara liye
raman(st):madrasan ko kuch romantic sense hi nahi hi,jaldhi karne ke liye yeh homeowork hi kya
ishu:losing patience closes her eyes
raman:beta raman dont leave the chance,looking at her he takes her lips into his
ishu opens her eyes with shock and looks at raman who winks at her still kissing her
unable to stand on her feet she clutches ramans shirt closing her eyes with shy
raman:finally aparts from her after getting his sweet awaited kiss from his madrasan
she looks at raman who was wiping his lips with his palm,she shyly turns her gaze towards the floor
(st):ayyo murgan he was asking for french kiss but i thought he wants to kiss me at forehead,ishu thum saachi me paagal bangaya
raman:walks out ruffling his hair saying "madrasan dont use too much lipstick,my apetite will affect
ishu:shyly sits on the bed replaying the movements which conquered just before
outside of their room
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raman(st):beta aab control karo if anyone sees ur excitment then they will easily guesses what happened,baccha chocolate milgayi tho kaisa behave karengi thum isa kar rahi hu,madrasan was occupied total my heart and brain
at dining table:
daadi:raman mihir was waiting for u,what made u take lots of time
raman:kuch nahi daadi,call aaya tho baath kar rahi hu
mrs.bhalla:dekho pathi breakfast karne keliye wait kar rahi hu,lekin madam uski kamare me busy hi
raman:maa i messed the room with my things she is arranging them,why u became so negative on her
daadi:thumhari maa pehle se hi isa hi naa,by saying she calls ishitha glaring at toshi
mrs.bhalla moves angrily to the kitchen resuming her work
ishu:rushes down stopping her thoughts listening to daadi's call
raman:winks at her which was noticed by mihir and romi
ishu:comes to dining table fidgeting with her duppata
daadi:ishitha serve breakfast to everyone
ishu:starts serving breakfast to everyone
while rinky observes ishitha keenly
rinky:bhabi why ur face was so flushed and u r so tensed see ur hand is shaking while serving,by saying she holds ishu's hand to prevent from her shiver
ishu:vohhh.. kuch kuch nahi hi she speaks with stammering words
raman:again winks at her which makes ishu angry
rinky:bhabi cool down what happened
raman:rinky leave her ,voh paagal hi,saab pagalpan karthi rahithi hi,thum kaavo
paagal madrasan kuch kaam nahi hi
raman(st):starts eating silently seeing her angry eyes,beta raaman thum muhh bandh kar thumhara kaam katham karo na,dekho amul baby jaisi madrasan jhansi rani ban gaya,she is glaring at me angrily,kuch hone ke pehle jaldhi kaa kar baag javo,thinking about it,he takes a bite of food
ishitha:puts the bowl forcely on the table,she moves near to raman and kisses on his cheek,everyone stares at the duo shockingly opening their mouth
invountarily the bite which was in his mouth moves into his stomach without his efforts by his jhansi ki raani actions
he looks at everyone who were still in shock,he mentally curses himself for instigating her
ishitha:looking at rinky,thumhara bhai,issese jyada kiya room me,u imagine it to urself,aur yaha aakar natak kar rahi hu,turning to raman mi paagal madrasan hi tho thum bhuddhu punjabi,dont try to mess up with me,raavan kumar by saying she storms into her room angrily while others in the hall bursts out into fits of laughing section
raman(st):in a crying tone"madrasan meri izzath sabke saamne nikal diya,aab mi kya karu?😭


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