ff-My Life Starting With An Unknown Person updated part72(a) aug28 - Page 31

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome😊
Waiting to know how will they confess their love to each other...

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part-39:
in delhi:
raman and ishu reaches home,raman was stubborn to apologize ishu
ishu(st):kithna ego hi thumko,u even didnt talk with me in the flight,i wont talk with u,iss me meri galthi kuch nahi hi
daadi:stops ishu and raman outside at the entrance,she calls mrs.bhalla"toshi aarthi lekar aavo meri potha aur pothi aagaya
toshi does aarthi to both of them
ishu:entering to the house she hugs daadi saying"i missed u alot daadi"
toshi:oyy u missed only ur daadi not ur mummiji
everyone laughs
ishu:wiping tears she hugs mrs.bhalla saying"i missed u and everyone too
daadi:taking ishu's hands into hers she enquires ishu "thum pehle yeh bath bathavo US me enjoy kiya aur nahi" looking at the scar on ishu's wrist daadi shouts"ishitha yeh chot kisa huva thumhara hath par"
ishu:she gets afraid of daadi's question(st):raman was in anger now if he inform daadi about my mental deeds which i done on that day then how will daadi react
raman:immediately answers"daadi yeh bada pagal hi na dekhar chelne ka aadath nahi hina,she banged to the door and its sharp edge rashed on her wrist"
daadi:understood raman was not telling truth but she remains silent
romi:bhabi u didnt brought any gifts for ur devar?
ishu:ha romi sabke liye gifts laya ,by saying she distributes gifts to everyone for mihir,romi and papaji branded watches and for mrs.bhalla she gives a necklace set after a min she gives another set to mrs.bhalla
mr.bhalla:seeing ishu giving 2necklace sets to mrs.bhalla,"ishitha its not fair for ur mummiji u bought 2sets but for papaji u gave a single watch
ishu:one set is for rinki papaji
mrs.bhalla:listening to ishu words she hugs her saying"thum kush rahengi puttar,even his own brother forgot his duty but u remembered her"
raman:feels happy for ishu's concern,(st)this pagal didnt purchased anything for me,thinking she will buy for me i just bought suits for romi,mihir,papa,
he handovers the suit packets to the three
daadi:ishitha u gave to everyone but what about me
ishu:smacking her head,ayyo daadi miney thumhare liye gift karedhne boolgaya
daadi:pretends as she was disappointed by ishu and she walks to her room
after breakfast all men leaves to office
ishu:she immersed herself in work to forget raman's words
daadi(st):observes ishu,"what happened to both of them,they are very dull,mujje lagtha yeh raman ne kuch kiya voh bewakoof kabi nahi sudhar rahengi"
ishu sees mrs.bhalla packing lunch
ishu:mummiji to whom u r packing lunch
mrs.bhalla:raman aur baaki logon keliye,bhallaji said they have an important work,raman ek hapthe delhi me nahi hina isiliye bahuth kaam hi unko
ishu(st):ha he is so busy,he cant come to home even for lunch,mujje kya farak hi,miney kuch nahi kiya,i wont worry for him
in office
mihir:bhai did u hurted bhabi she is so dull,why u always do this to her
raman:u all people know how to worry for her,but u dont know how ur bhabi worrying me,iam showing pity for myself
mihir:laughs at raman,voh chodo bhai,only bhabi can deal u,she is doing good job,tell me did u confessed ur love
raman(st):already she is playing with me,if i express my love first then catching my weakness she will play more games on me,i wont give her any chance from here on
mihir :kya bhai bolo,
raman:kya bolna chahiye thumko,u r office,concentrate on work,u think about site to construct new factory for our project
mihir:its my mistake to talk with u,u will never change
raman:aab thumko samajgayi na,jakar kaam karo
mihir:taking his file angrily ha javungi,poor bhabi i dont know how she is tolerating ur anger from the starting day
raman:its audible to me
mihir:isiliye bol rahi hu,mera aavaj jyada karke
raman:dekho kithna attitude hi unko,ekbar bi phone nahi kiya,pathi me pyar hothe tho call karengi lekin unko mera chintha hi nahi hi na
at night
after dinner:
ishu:seeing drawing room locked she walks to wardrobe,without looking at him"drawing room ka chabi kaha hi?"
raman:he was sitting on the bed silently ignoring her words he starts studying a file
ishu:facing him"miney aapse hi pooch rahi hu drawing room ka chabi kaha hi"
raman:how can i know where it was
ishu(st):now i know about u clearly,u only hided the key
raman:u bought gift for everyone but u didnt thought to buy any thing for me
ishu(st):he doesnt know to say sorry but he is asking for a gift,thum bi shopping mall me hina?why cant u buy anything for urself
by keeping a packet infront of him she starts walking out from the room
raman:looking at another packet in her hand,u buyed for me did u buyed for urself,if buyed u show me ur item to me
ishu:karidhne keliye socha lekin baadh me samajgayi miney keval insaan keliye hi nahi,kisi cheezonke liye bi layak nahi,isiliye kuch nahi karidhkiya mere liye
without looking at him she walks out from the room wiping her tears
her words gets pierced into ramans heart
raman:with sad tone,she will take even small issues into heart,she has a very good skill,everyone looks for a weapon to kill a person but for her,her words are more than weapons,even i have no right to scold her,by saying he takes the cover into his hands,by opening it"kya laya madam mujje liye"it was a gold bracelet engraved with diamond letters "I and R",by kissing the bracelet see i will make u to wear me this bracelet with ur hands
in mumbai:
vandu:bahuth late hogaya amma,now itself u have to talk with her,raksha bandhan bi aarahi hu,karthik will be hurted if she doesnt comes to mumbai to tie rakhi to karthik
amma:u dont worry i too waiting eagerly to see ishu,now itself i will ask daadi to send ishu
bala:amma vandu ke saath aapka dimak bhi karab hogaya kya?
amma:isa kyou bol rahi hu bala
bala:lekin kya amma,ishu will be coming for the first time to our house again after marriage,u have to invite raman too he is ur SIL,ask daadi to send both
amma:calls daadi and informs everything
daadi:madhavi they came from US today,i will think about it,even for rakshabandhan their was moretime,due to US visit raman has lots of work pending
amma:ok maa but u send them before rakhi,
daadi saying ok she cuts the call
ishu:entering into the daadi room she sits near her
daadi:ishitha kuch kaam hi kya
ishu:kuch nahi daadi bahuth din hogaya na thumse bathkarke isiliye aaya
daadi:kya baath chup rahi hu thum
ishu:i brought gift for u too,but i thought everyone would laugh seeing that gift,but daadi i thought for along time what gift to buy for u
daadi:koyi baath nahi hi dikavo thum kya laya mere liye
ishu:shows a gold coated japmala to daadi,by handing it to her,ishu starts scratching her head for bringing a silly gift for daadi
daadi;seeing the gift she starts laughing
ishu:keeping a puppy face,i know u will laugh by seeing this gift,because of this i didnt gave u infront of everyone,i thought it will be useful for u as u always chant devimatha name na,isiliye laya
daadi:kissing ishu on her forehead,u brought a very good gift to me,only this will be suitable for my age,iam not young to wear variety of dresses or ornaments
ishu:by placing her head on daadi's lap "daadi today i will sleep with u,please daadi"
daadi:now daadi's doubt was confirmed with ishu's behavior,she understood something happened between them
to make her easy she enquires"ishitha did u bought anything for urself"
ishu:i thought to buy daadi lekin achanak appa yaad aya,infront of his love everything looked to me very small,so i withdrawn my thoughts to buy something for myself,daadi from childhood to before that bloody subbu incident my appa never even raised his voice on me,but because of one mistake which i did in my life,everything was changed in mey life,whom ever i love they will hurt me with their words and behavior,today i lost my appa's love,by saying she starts crying "daadi will my appa never forgive me,will he never talk to me,will i get my appa's love back in my life,tell me daadi will i get everything back which i lost
daadi:caring ishu's hair"ishitha isa kuch nahi hi beta,thumhara appa jaldhise thumko maff karengi lekin ek baath bathavo do raman did anything which hurted u saach bolo
ishu:tells everything how he provoked her and how he scolded her infront of anyone with tears rushing from her eyes
daadi:miney kahathana voh bada bewakoof,har bath par gussa nikalengi,u dont worry i will teach him a good lesson,
ishu fells asleep listening to daadi's words about raman behavior in childhood,how she used to save him from his papa
raman:comes to daadi's room searching for ishu thinking she might be in daadi's room,seeing ishu in daadi lap he speaks loudly "miney socha yeh natakrani thumhara paas hi",by his loud voice ishu's sleep gets disturbed,she awakes from her sleep but she doesnt opens her eyes
daadi:bewakoof thumko dikaya nahi voh rorokar abi abi sogaya
raman:sitting near daadi"mera pyari bibi sab kuch bathaya adhik mirchi dalkar
daadi:twisting ramans ear"miney kahathana ishitha ko acchi tharahse sambal karna lekin thumne kya kiya sabke samne isa dantengi kya?"with love she weared to show u,but what u did,u scolded this innocent girl
raman:kya voh innocent ladki,isa kehna vala innocent hotha hi,thumko patha nahi uss ladki ka shakal ke baare me,dekatho behosh hojayengi thum
ishu(st):kithna jutevala miney kya shakal dikhaya
daadi:bakwas math karo mi ishitha ko acchi tharah se jantha hi,voh kabi dosronko thaglif karne ke liye nahi sochengi,thum unko sorry bolna padega
raman:i wont tell her any sorry,she doesnt looks at her surroundings,sab insaan acchi vala nahi hotha hina,if she wants to show me she can buy that dress na?what is the need to wear in shopping mall,voh bewakoof adhmi bura comment kiya uss par,i controlled my anger orelse i would have killed them,for her eyes everyone looks as good people except me,its her mistake she is not a child she was grown up and she is wife to a person,eh sab galthi ka karan uska appa hi
ishu(st):voh ladka koun hi mi nahi dekha,lekin voh comment karetho uspar meri galthi kya hi,saara ladkiya shopping mall me western dresses hi pehanaya,did all their husbands scolded them,aur thumko kya hak hi meri appa me accuse karne keliye
what he did?
raman:he pampered her very much but i was facing the consequences,he tells everything how she gave him punishment,how she played with the guard and how she fought with assoc members
daadi laughs listening to ishu's deeds
raman ek baath bathavo lekin sach bathavo,ishitha ka hathme voh chot kisa huva
raman:tells the incident happened on that day"but daadi u dont scold her u behave with her as u dont know anything about this incident,voh bahuth senti hi har baath par royengi
daadi:caring ishu hair,no one cant scold her looking at her innocence except people like u
raman:bahuth pyar hogaya thumko uss par lekin yeh math bulo she came to this house because she married ur grandson
daadi:chodo raman,u dont be jealousy,u make her to sleep on the pillow and u to go and sleep in ur room
raman:kya,will u allow her to sleep with u
daadi:ha raman,she told me that she will sleep with me for this night
raman:daadi thum pathi pathni ke beech aag dalne keliye thayar huva,i know daadu lefted u but it doesnt mean that u r allowed to seperate remaining husbandsand wives,voh mera pyari bibi,kabi kabi jagada hotha hi pathi pathne ke beech thum usko samajkarna padega lekin thum humko alag karne keliye thayar hogaya
daadi:hitting him on his head,bewakoof i was the one who selected her for u,but now u r accusing me saying iam separating u,lekin chodo raman ek din voh yeha sojayengi
raman:bilkul nahi,voh mera sath sojayengi,thum usko aagli bar support math karo,if u again allow her to sleep with u,then she will start sleeping withu one day with maa one day,thankgod there are no buidings near by our house,if so then she will sleep one day in one aunty house and on the other day other,then what about me,mi pura zindagi akele sona padega isiliye thum mana karo aur ekbar isitharah plans karetho,by saying he picks her into his arms
daadi:yeh bewakoof thum kya kar raha hu
ishu(st):ha daadi muje bi patha nahi chal rahi hu voh kya kar rahi hu
raman:what iam doing iam taking my wife to my room
daadi:but what if anyone in the house sees u in this way
raman:what will they say,iam not carrying some random girl ,iam carrying my beautiful naughty wife in my arms,aab thum humko disturb math karo aur voh japmala acchi tharah se use karo,thumko liye ishitha sahi gift lekar aaya
by saying he leaves to his room
daadi:bewakoof badmash pathni pyari hogaya aur daadi ko boolgaya

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesaom...
last line was suprb...
patni se pyar hogaya aur daadi ko bhool gaya...lol...
loving raman so mch...his caring attitude nd love towrds ishu...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved this update please PM me when you post the next part!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey dear congrtultions4 cpltng 50 pages..!

wonderful updts..
lovng it nd enjyng it also... 😉😆
thnx 4 regulr pm.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...just beautiful update
esp ishita's gift to Raman...
convo between daadi and Raman awsm...
ishita was awake, she was listening i liked it..
i loved Raman lifted in her arms and took her...
that last line superb...

thanks yaar...plz update soon
eagerly waiting..
congo of completion 50 pages

Edited by Akshatha19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am finally all caught up on your story... love it! So glad you decided to continue. And i love that @least Ishu knows both their feelings.. hopefully Raman figures out she feels the same too - even as they fight to see who says it first.

Love you ISHRA, they are so adorable! But I am wondering about ishu's family wanting her to visit- hopefully Ishu will realize soon that she needs to show Raman she values him as well.

Love the bracelet, hopefully Raman got her something too. Can't wait for the next part. Thank you so much for the constant updates- really well done and a terrific story as well.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aweee I m totally loving this...❤️
U made my day beautiful...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
specially d last part
that was so cute
hope so they will soon goes to Mumbai
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update dr. Love it.
Raman is soo sweet. Love him.
Daadi and raman's convo is really nice. Ishu listning all. Raman carried her 2 their bedroom. That last line was superb.
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