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Posted: 10 years ago
Plz don't wrap up this story.
This is so beautiful dr.
It's ok if u can't update daily. Bt plz don't end it soon.
Want 2 know hw appa 4give ishu, hw ishu realize her luv, ishra romance and all.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Don't wrap up the story u hav an excellent storyline which we never imagined. so plzzz don't wrap it n ur story is the only multi vitamin dose for me these days as yhm tracks r nt gng well n u update daily with excellent twists n loving scenes so continue the story bt a small request frm my side is start subtle romance of ishra before ur weekend updates.i m ok evn with delayed confession bt show that ishu started loving raman before weekend updates.love allur updates.i read thm evn at midnight if don't get sleep
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Posted: 10 years ago
😊 thanks for your pm sriya.story in good track don't stop pls..update as soon as possible.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sarayasriya

hi friends

thanks to everyone especially to the people who encouraged me with their comments and suggestions,i actually thought to end this story with ruhi introduction,but iam thinking to windup the story because in future i cant update daily,ur decision matters me,i will update every weekends if u want to continue the story or else i will end with 3 or 4 more parts,its all upto u


dude u r doing a wonderfull job.. dis is like my bed time story... i mostly read ur update and den oly ll go to sleep... the story is going fabulously... please dont stop it... i would like you to continue... even its going to be updated every weekend dats ok... but dear please dont stop it... this is my view... but the final deceision is in ur hands and am ok with ur decision
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Posted: 10 years ago
now coming to the update... firstly am very sorry as i couldnt comment on that day itself.. it was an awesome update... poor mihir he always gets scoldings from raman... hope in future ishu will save mihir from raman scoldings... and seriously yaar if blackmailer award is given then she would surely receive that... and the guard OMG... that was hilarious... i was holding my belly and was laughing my heart out... poor guy.. fell prey for ishu's prank and raman's gussa.. haha😆 but one thing that i couldnt understand is why did she say live in relation she could have said dat she is his wife na... and den the finally part and the most cutest part of this update... awww she is chooo cute and innocent yaar... she saw a movie a did wat they showed... i was like awww... i just oved when she cutely complained to him that the husband in movie smiled seeing his wife and why is he shouting on her... aww that was too cute... please do update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
next parts

part-36
ishu:raman kuch bolona thum moody kyou?subah se yehi bath pooch rahi hu?
raman:chodana yaar,kuch jaruri bath nahi hi
ishu:raman thumko project mila aur nahi
raman:ha our association got the project
ishU:then why u r so upset kya hogaya,she walks to raman
raman:tries to move to his room,but ishu holds his hand,i wont allow u to go until i get my answer
today morning i forgot the file na?
ishu:ha tho kya?miney lekhar aaya na saahi time me
raman:but akash made it a big issue in the association,now they are thinking to handover the project to some other in assoc.
ishu:voh akash koun hi?but u r the head of assoc then how can they decide
raman:every board mem gets a chance to become head for a certain period of time,now its my turn,but they have the right to decide if anyone commits mistake
ishU:but u worked hard for the project not they,now u r in US only because of this project hi na?everyone commits mistake,u brought much fame to the assoc,how can they do this to u?
raman:but being in a responsible position i should not be negligient
ishu:with tears rushing from her eyes,its all because of me only,u didnt slept whole night taking care of me,u were tired off and in hurry u forgot to carry the file,mihir ne kaha thana ye badi project hi humara company ka naam uunche jatha hi iss project se
raman:wiping her tears,"why u r blaming urself,its not ur mistake,let them do their duty,if i lost this project then it doesnt mean that i have to shut my business,i have my own fame
he gets the call from assoc and he leaves
ishu:mi bhi javungi unka office ko,he should not loss anything because of me,she asks the driver to drive to raman's office
in office:
one of b.of.d:mr.raman being in a responsible position how can u be very careless,luckily we got the file in last min,but what would happened if file was not reached in correct time,akash informed u beforeday to submit all the project details but u didnt obeyed,all our directors decided to handover the project to mr.akash,so u have to handover the project documentation and coding details ,we cant take risk by considering u in this assoc,and ur share is 40%so we decided to buy ur shares as we have majority shares,u have to submit ur resignation letter for the head of assoc position by tomorrow
by the time ishu reaches office by she was stopped by the same guard
guard:mam u fooled me before but u cant do now,sab log andhar me imp meeting me hi,aap andhar nahi jaa sakthi
ishu:as she was not in a position to talk with him as she listened every word accusing raman from inside,she drags the guard aside and barges to inside the hall
in the C.H:
everyone gets up from their seats shockingly thinking who the woman and how she came inside,among them raman was utterly shocked seeing ishu in office
a dir:who r u miss,dont u have manners,how can u barge into the offical meeting place,he calls security to take her away but raman signs the guard to leave
ishu:i didnt came here to learn manners from u people
raman:coming near to ishu,"ishitha thum yaha kyou aaya?chalo yaha se mi badh me avungi
pilo(he respects raman):raman do u know her?who is this lady?while raman was silent as he know ishu wants privacy and she doesnt want to reveal her identity to anyone
ishu:iam mrs.ishitha raman bhalla,everyone in the hall were shocked as they didnt know about raman's marriage
raman:sorry mr.pila,i will send her back,by saying he hold's ishu's hand to take her out from the office but ishu frees her hand shouting"raman aap ruko"u should not be silent with these people
another dir:what is this disturbance,its not ur house,raman ask ur wife to be polite
ishu:i know how to be polite and well-mannered with other who deserves respect but not for u people,and i brought up by my father mr.vishwanath iyer,who was well respected business man in INDIA,who always believes in ethics and moral values,composing herself a bit,sorry sir for speaking rudely,but how u people behaved with raman was not fair,what u r thinking about him?will he get afraid of losing his shares from ur assoc,or for his position,by birth he is rich,if he decides strongly then he can buy all u people shares following the rules,he has a company in almost every state of india,he is the no.one young businessman in india,if he thinks he can keep people like u as his assistants,"sir hum sab bhagawan nahi hu insaan hi,saab insaan kabi kabi galthi karthi hi,did u people never commited any mistake till now?i doesnt want to make u people low try to understand urselves,what u people are doing is wrong
u r older and experienced persons in this field but what i know is very less,within these 3yrs raman brought much fame to ur assoc with his talent,if u people are capable then why u requested the person who was staying in india to handle this project,he worked very hard to crack this project,yes i agree he did a mistake but did he done like this previously,u people asked him to send the project details before day but i was ill,he has no option as he cant leave me alone,what u people will do if any urgency takes place for ur mother,sister,wife,children will u leave them alone,every company participated to win this project but only u wonned the project ,what u people would do if u lost the project?will u people accuse raman?how can u justify a person with single mistake keeping atll the good done by him aside
mr.akash:stop ur speech we are not here to timepass with ur speech
ishu:going near akash,u r mr.akash ,how can u expect that u can handle this project when u not worked for it,from how many yrs u r waiting for this chance,how can u be so greedy,without any evil intention u want make this into a big issue,iam warning all u people if u decide to take away raman's position then ur assoc will be the looser not raman,a simple,intelligent,hardworker and goodhearted person only can get success in their lives,if not this assoc their will be many other assoc waiting for raman's entry into their companies,and even the delegates how gave u the project may snatch if from u people if they learn that raman left this assoc and its final in every way u people will be the loosers,and if u people badmouth on raman i cant tolerate,i cant be so much good like him,i wont keep quiet,handovering the project to inefficient people will only make ur company to degrade
akash:he gets worried as assoc can change their opinion listening to her words,he gets angry on her as he can loose the wonderful opportunity"u misses ishitha now i remembered u,u r the vishwanath iyer 2nd daughter,in india i seen news about u,u r talking about success and efficiency who was literally failed in the life,ur marriage was called off as u are cheated by the going to be partner and because of ur mistake ur father was hospitalized with heartattack,when u cant be careful about ur life how can u say about capability
stop ur nonsense think about urself first
ishu:listening to his words tears starts rushing from her eyes
raman:outburst on akash as he made his wife to shed tears remembering her past"raman holding akash collar"again dont even try to slip ur tongue,cant u see with whom u r speaking she is mrs ishitha raman bhalla my wife,mind ur words i will believe in take respect and give respect philosophy better u too follow the same,if u again speak ill about my wife or about any other woman the next min u will be hospitalized in america's best hospital to save ur life,he adjusts akash shirt properly leaving his collar signaling him to be careful,turning to other members i will submit all u needed by tomorrow sorry for inconvenience created by my wife,she bashed on u people worrying about me,and my hardwork on this project
thanku",by saying he comes out holding ishu hand
at outside ordering a driver to drive alone to the house,they gets inside the other car taking back seats
in car:
raman:was in cloud nine thinking about ishu's words her extreme concern on him,he know that she cares for him,but he never expected that she breaks her shield of privacy for his sake,she fighted with a business world which she never liked
in house:to lighten her mood he mocks her"turning her to his side,he lifts her head holding her chin"ishitha mujje malum hi thum jhansi rani,but i seen only jhansi rani warnings by showing her sword,but today u fought with all those people by ur sword like words i was really surprised"
ishu:hugging raman she bursts out in tears,"iam sorry raman,i cant see now one in pain or losing something because of me especially my people,iam not worthy for anyone first i defamed appa,now because of me u stood there like a wrong committed person
,u lost ur name infront of them,which u builted with ur hardwork in this 3yrs ee sab meri vachan se huva "
raman:wiping her tears,why u r coming with that person words,voh ek bada bewakoof tha what he knows about u?,why u r digging the past now u travelled very far from the past,baar baar voh water tanker math kulo its better for me to start a water supplying business whole india will get sufficient water from u,no water problem will raise in india in future
ishu:whiping her tears"raman comedy math karo"
raman:when i did "only u have the petent rights to do comedy iam saying true
ishu:raman joke math maro mujje kuch hasna nahi aarahi hu?
raman:ishitha subah me thumne kuch sharma action kiya na aab aur ekbar karo mujje dekhna ka man hi
ishu:i did to make u smile but it didnt worked na?now i wont do
raman:u know husband feels happy when wife was shying,then do u know how husband feels when wife was sad?
ishu:innocently she enquires her husband"i dont know raman,tell me how u will feel when iam sad
raman:winking his eye,i will be very happy when u r sad
ishu:thum hi na har bath mujje tease karthi hi rahithi
raman:u made the environment hot hot?how can u confront akash?i did a mistake he pointed it out
ishu:nahi voh sab intentionally kiya,every organisation works in a friendly bond,if he is really friendly with u he would have supported u,the person who will stay with us in bad time they are our people not the one who abandon us when we need them
i can see fear of loss in his words and selfishness in his eyes
raman:vow madam is good injudging people ane very good eye reader
ishu:ha iam good in judging people but sometimes i failed it doesnt mean that i dont know about people intentions,mi bahuth samajdhari tha,lekin eh bath amma aur sabko nahi samajthi
raman:chupkaro pagal what u know about me,u raised me to peaks infront of them
ishu:i know everything about u,daadi said each and every matter of u voh kabi jute nahi bolenga
raman:ha bolo what u can tell about me looking at my eyes
ishu:thum bahuth kadus,bahuth attitude dikayengi mera paas,insensitive and u dont have any manners
raman:keeping a puppy face,r u getting these by looking at my eyes
ishu:with a smile i can also tease like u
raman:pulling her towards him,he holds her tightly by placing his hands around her waist
ishu:raman chodo mujje pointing her finger towards him"manhandle math karo"
raman:folding her finger "yeh manhandle kya hi"
ishu:ha akka everytime manhandles jiju i have to save him every time but to save me their is no one here aab thum mujje chod dho thum bahuth harsh hi
raman:first u tell about me then only i will leave u
ishu:looking into ramans eyes "u r very good person,u takes care of everyone,u like taunting me,and romi and mihir are ur prey and rhum daadi ka chamcha hi,
raman:natak rani javo jakar sab kuch pack karo(St):no work finished i lost project and my determination to make u love me


Edited by sarayasriya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
part-37

ishu:from kitchen,"raman hum kab jayengi delhi
raman:we will leave tomorrow after completing the resigning formalities in assoc,
ishu:she comes to raman offering a cup of tea,sitting on knees infront of raman"raman u pick any one chit from these two,she opens her hand"
raman:kya lika thum?
ishu:first u pick one chit,
raman:picks a chit and handovers to ishu as she wont leave him until he picks
ishu:reading the content in the slip,she smiles
raman:wow,what a smile,show me what made u to smile
ishu:showing the slip to raman"see raman only u will get this project no akash rakesh wont get this project"
raman:pagal hogaya kya,thum dekha na sabkuch,its decided and over,from tomorrow their wont be any relation with that assoc.and success doesnt depends on these slips,its only depends on capability,its not a children game
ishu:thumko capability hi na?then why they did this to u?
and according to my expectation they will definitely call u back,r u thinking that i shouted on them only for not giving the project to u,i warned them indirectly about their future business career,if their brains are working properly they will re decide about their decision
ishu:when we are helpless then only god will help us,i believe in god if he really present then he wont allow any loss to happen for good people,by saying she walks to the garden
raman:i too started believing more in God from the day when he sent u in my life,iam very lucky to get u in my life,u filled my dark life with colors of happiness,if u r with me then i can win anything in this world,at any cost i wont miss u in my life,u made me very dependent,without seeing u my day wont be good,i love u ishitha,by thinking he starts walking to garden to see ishu
meanwhile ishu reaches hall with a bunch of white rose flowers,both doesnt looks at each other,they are lost in their worlds,ishu dashes raman which makes both to fell on the floor,raman on the floor and ishu on him,
ishu :placing her hair back"kya raman thum kiya kya?,where r u looking while walking dekho phul neeche ghir gaya,by saying she starts picking the flowers near by them
raman:holding her "yeh pagal then where u kept ur eyes while walking why u didnt seen me,instead of saying sorry for breaking my back u r accusing me
but ishu without concentrating on his words she continuous picking the flowers
raman:by slowly lifting his head he places a soft kiss on ishu cheek when she was busy in collecting the flowers,he abruptly gets to previous position
ishu:feels the kiss and she turnsto raman who was looking at her normally
ishu:touching her cheek,thumne kuch kiya raman?
raman:what i will do when u r on me,what happened to u?why u r caring ur cheek did any mosquito bited u?
ishu:if mosquito bites then it will be painful but i felt?
raman:always u blabbers on something ?will u stay on me in this way for whole day?utoo aur mujje help karo
ishu:she gets up from him and helps him to get up,she picks the remaining flowers still thinking about raman kiss which was unknown to her
raman(st):by shouting on her i escaped from her questioning session,chalo raman atlast ekk kiss tho hogaya pura honeymoon me,but this woman made me a thief when i has full rights on her duffer ko kuch samajthi nahi,but being thief is very risky,pakad gaya tho izzad karab hojayengi
he notices ishitha walking to her room
"ishitha where are u going why u brought those flowers from garden
ishu:coming out from her thoughts,she smacks her head"ayyo miney yeh bath booligayi,coming to near raman"mr.raman kumar bhalla iam a reporter,now u have to give ur interview to me"
raman:arey vah ishitha bhalla kab bangaya reporter
ishu:with a serious tone first u concentrate on ur character"handing the bunch of flowers to raman"congrats mr.raman kumar bhalla we are very glad that u cracked a very big project"how u r feeling about this
raman:winning always gives happiness
ishu:can u briefly explain about this project
raman:this project is about aerounatics we will manufacture the inner parts with modern techniques,u can understand more after project completion
ishu:ok,to whom u r liking to give the credits of ur success
raman:i succeeded in this project because of my beautiful,charming and
listening to his half words ishu feels happy and proud as he will say her name
raman continuing his talk,duffer,pagal wife,i will give all credits to my duffer
ishu:how can u address ur wife as a duffer,ur indians should respect woman
raman:i too respect woman but if u stay with my wife for a day then u too agree that my wife is duffer
ishu:coming out of her character,"raman thum isa hi bath karengi media ke samne,mainey kiya kya mujje duffer bolne ki tharah
raman:then what i have to say why will media take my interview when someone taking my project
meanwhile he gets a call from pilo
mr.pilo:raman iam sorry,i was not in a position to support u,only because of u we got this project
raman:leave it pilo,it doesnt matters now,everything was finished
mr.pilo:raman if ur wife is near by u,then keep the call in speaker
raman does the same surprisingly
mr.pilo:hai mrs.raman bhalla iam pilo raman's friend
ishu:hai sir
pilo:raman where u found mrs.jhansi rani,raman and ishu smiles
raman:in low voice signaling ishu "dekho unko bi patha hogaya thum jhansi rani hi
pilo:u didnt informed even to me about ur marriage its not fair raman
raman:when i doesnt know about my marriage then how can i inform to u
ishu looks at him surprisingly
pilo:what u dont know about ur marriage?i cant believe u raman,let it be we will discuss about jhansi rani madam at later
but her entry surprised everyone,mrs.raman u r really very good blackmailer,ur words made our bod members to rethink their decision,what u said was 100% correct,we deserve raman not raman,
raman u will be handling this project and u r our assoc head everything was sorted out no change in any matter
raman:but iam not ready to reaccept
ishu:yeh kya hi raman u worked for that project,its urs u have to accept everyone commits mistake they realised their mistake
pilo:yes raman what ur wife said was correct other members are feeling guilty for accusing u they forced me to talk with u
u have to accept it,in evening we are going to declare about the project handovering to u infront of delegates,but after that u have to give us double party one for ur marriage and the other for winning the project he cuts the call
raman:turning to ishu "aab thum kushi hi na aab project hume milgaya,jhansi rani
ishu:walks out to the garden seriously
raman:follows her to the garden,aab kya hogaya thum ithna serious kyou?how many personalities u hided urself
morning u played football game with the guard,next voh sherma act,in office jhansi rani bangaya,aur aab serious shade dikathi rahi hu?
ishu:i was disappointed by u,i wont talk with u
raman:now what i did which made u disappoint
ishu:thumko jantha nahi hi kya?thum kya kiya
raman:how can i know?if u speak out then i can understand what i did
ishu:from one week we are staying in US,but did u ever thought about me,their is a woman who accompained me,she is staying alone in home,she too has a heart,she likes to visit the places in US,she came for the first time for US,its my duty to take her out
acche husband isa sochtha?lekin aap "u know break fast,lunch,dinner and rest only for this u will be in house
for this reason also i forgiven u by comforting myself"ok ishu let it be leave about this person,u can go by urself to visit beautiful places of US"
but u added water for this thought too thum mujje house arrest kiya
after u warning the guard who is standing out,he even not allowed me to come out for giving ur file,after a long plead he allowed me,and the guard at office he too stopped me,so i took revenge on him by telling blabla story
i ever didnt seen a person like u
raman(st):u r really unbelievable,how can i know u will think about ur husband keeping aside ur appa's chant,how can i understand that u like to spend time with me
ishu:if daadi asks me "ishitha what places u visited in US,what raman bought for u and for us then what i have to asnwer should i answer her that herpotha house arrested me for a week in US
raman:joining his palms,"meri maa galthi mera hi,mi thumko kal lejavungi gumne ke liye aab thum maan javo mujje late ho rahi hu
ishu:ha i forgiven u only for this time
raman leaves to office
in office:
all board of directors apologizes raman for their mistake,they handovers the project to raman officialy after signing all the documents and completing formalities
raman gives an interview to the media,he smiles remembering ishu interview,he talks about ishu support in his project
bhallas in delhi and iyers in mumbai watches his interview everyone feels happy
ishu blushes seeing raman's interview in the news
in the early night raman reaches to house hurrily to get ready for party
he directly walks to ishu's room seeing the room dark switching the lights he walks to her bed who was covering her face with her duppata
raman:what r u doing in dark ishitha,remove ur duppata,by saying he pulls it
ishu:immediately she covers her cheek with palm
raman:kya hogaya kuch bathavo,by saying he removes her hand
her cheek was completely covered with rashes
raman:yeh rashes kaha se aagaya thumko kuch kaane se allergy hi kya?
ishu:nahi raman,i too unable to understand,these rashes takes place only if anyone kisses me on cheeks,from chidhood i have this allergy
after learning this appa amma no one kisses me on cheeks
raman(st):eh bhagawan kaise halath hi,kiss karetho unko rashes hojayenge,meri istharah halath koyi dushman ko bi nahi hona chahiye
it means ur amma appa never kissed u?
ishu:ha appa kisses me only on forehead but amma sometimes with over affection kisses me on cheeks
raman:with some happy tone,it means problem is limited within cheeks
ishu:yeh kissing bath kya hi raman choddho aab
raman(st):raman u have to be thankful to god,if she is like a touchme not plant then u have to be spend ur life only looking at her,let it be only cheeks are exception but u have to pay high in future for this mistake
pagal ladki
ishu:no problem raman by morning these rashes will be disappear,u go for party,but u promise me that u should not drink
raman:ha promise aab thum aavo mujje ready hone me help karna padega na
ishu while helping raman to get ready
ishu:raman u stay away from that akash,and u dont switch off the phone,return early,u promised me that u will not drink keep the promise,
raman silently nods the head
meanwhile mihir calls raman,ishu goes to kitchen to drink water
mihir:bhai congratulations that u won the project,i know only u will win the project no one cant defeat u
daadi:mihir ek min aavo
mihir:bhai just wait for a min daadi is calling
raman:gets pilo call to his other mobile he attends the call leaving the other mobile on the table he walks to garden
ishu: reaches raman room and finds his mobile on the table,eh raman hi na saab bul jayenge by saying she takes the mobile into hands seeing mihir call in hold she abouts to talk with him
mihir:bhai we can discuss about project later first u tell about bhabi' s matter
ishu(st):meri matter kya hi?
mihir:did u succeded in making bhabi to fall in ur love,u betted with me,that u will make her to love u?did u suceeded or not?
did bhabi said i love u to u,did u expressed ur love
ishu:was utterly shocked listening to his words
listening to raman footsteps she places the mobile on the table
raman:picks the mobile"mihir i will call u later,assoc members waiting at the venue i have to leave
mihir:ok bhai i will call u later,raman cuts the call
raman:ishitha will u lock the door or should i lock the door from outside
ishu:seriously,u lock it from outside without a back look she walks to her room
raman:what happened to her again?till now she is giving precautions to me,pagal ladki by thinking he leaves to party


i too decided to continue the story

Edited by sarayasriya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
excellnt stry...
glad u r continuing...

pls amk ishu fall fr raman..nd their romnce...
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank u for cntinuing ths story nd giving us update.i was seriously waiting for update frm u. update nxt part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...nice updates...
i loved Ishita in JKR mode...
fantastically written yaar...
every single word was perfect...
IshRa scenes as usually beautiful...
i liked Raman thinking after effects of kissing...
Make ishita fall in love with Raman...
some more romantic scenes...
plz continue soon

THANK U SO MUCH FOR CONTINUING THE STORY

Edited by Akshatha19 - 10 years ago

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