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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ALEHA2011

Loved it really touching the family moment was so cute really felt for Adi



Thanks a lot ..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

Phew...done reading all the parts dii

will be replying individually soon

So srry 4 d delay dii
m really feeling so bad
You know chote comment wont go with me
and long comments will be taking time



Take your time Ankita.. Really no compulsion..
Please don't feel bad.. You had your own reasons which were more important...
I am giving my next update. Adding one more to your reading list.
Thanks a lot dear 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER 12

He reached the clinic hoping to find her with two minds. One part of it wanted to meet her and the other part wanted him to sort the issue on his own. He was waiting in her room and found a frame lying on the table. Two people in a warm embrace and he kept staring in to the picture. His thumb traced the man's picture on the frame and a tear dropped down his eye. She noticed his actions from the time she entered her room without his knowledge. To gain his attention, she cleared her throat. He immediately placed the frame on the table and wiped his face dry. She offered him water and he looked at her inquisitively. She pointed to his pooled eyes and gave him the best assuring smile. I did not cry... I can see that and brought her hands forward to ruffle his hair but withdrew in a couple of seconds. He did not know whether to thank her for understanding him or hate himself for his behavior over the past. At present his priorities were different.

He mustered courage and asked her "Will my dad and Ruhi forgive me ?" . She felt terrible when the boy asked question. How could she assure him that he was a part of his father and not just his son. She wanted to tell him that his sister has always loved him and will always. She did not know whether whatever she did was the right thing or how the boy would react. She trusted her motherly instincts. Raman's words rang loud in her ears which gave her all the confidence and she took him in a hug. The boy rested his head on her chest and sobbed. She wanted him to give all of his worries to her. She stroked his back patiently and was waiting for him to calm down. After a while both of them reached home. He entered the house today for the very first time with a new found confidence. The house was silent. She entered her room to freshen up and the boy entered his room and the scene in front of his eyes caught him in a fix. Ishitha was walking towards the room when she found Adi standing at the entrance of his room. She let out a chuckle when she saw the state they were in. Both father daughter were clinging on to each other in sleep. This was one picture even she kept staring at from the day she entered this house as Ruhi's mother. Today it was Aditya's turn. She walked inside and sat near the small place which was left on bed. She had both her palms one on each one's head and stroked lovingly.

You came already ? he spoke. Hmm. He then carefully moved Ruhi and sat on the bed. He took her in a hug without realizing Adi's presence in the room. When he found her not comfortable in the hug, he straightened himself and looked at her. She pointed towards Adi . Before he could speak further Ishitha was out of the room. It was only the father and his children. Dad ... and he bursted out crying. Raman sat near Adi and hugged him. His son hugged him tight and never wanted to let go of him. Even he couldn't stop himself from shedding tears. A relation which broke 6 years back was pieced together in to one after years. Will you ever forgive me ? he spoke between his sobs. What did you do Adi ?

Adi: I hated you and have always landed you in trouble. Mom's fake poisoning, My change of initials in the passport, the accident, my behavior at school and recently I had put Ishitha Aunty in to trouble during the party. I have done everything possible to degrade you and you are asking me about my mistake ?

Raman: Adi, I agree all this happened but none of it was done by you but you were a puppet in someone's hands.

Adi: Did I not agree to all of them, Dad ?

Raman: Shagun had her own intentions and as far as Ishitha is concerned yes it was your mistake to send such a message from someone's phone but that poor lady was a victim of my enemies. She has always suffered a lot cos of my past but don't worry about her. She is way too strong for all of this. It is because of her that I got my son today. I will not speak anything about Shagun, She is your mother. I know it is difficult for you to give that place to someone. But can I request you for something Adi ?

Adi: Anything Dad..

Raman: The word "anything" is too big a word, Use it carefully. It is this word that has put you in to trouble all these days.

Adi: I don't get you dad.

Raman: Remember you always say anything mom ? haan. That was responsible for all of this.

Adi: Sorry dad.

Raman: I see myself in you Adi. Don't apologize to me there is someone else who deserves this. Adi, I do know you are not comfortable with Ishitha, neither have you accepted her as my wife. But that is reality. Truth is a bitter pill to swallow but this one is a sweet one. The earlier you understand the more you will enjoy. But respect her for Ruhi.

Adi: I will try dad.

Raman: That's a good step in any relation. Proud of you Adi. His son continued to rest on his chest and he was stroking his back. Soon Adi was long lost in his sleep. He made him comfortable on the bed and walked out of the room closing the door behind.

After dinner, all had retired to the room. Raman Kumar Bhalla was the happiest man today but he felt little less happier than he should. The person who was responsible for all of this was not with him in his room yet. His kids were happy in the room going through some old albums and smiling. He was getting restless and finally found her walking in with a serene smile which was always a part of her. He just wanted a hug from her and was waiting for some lone time with her today. It was a special day in his life. She again kept her promise. He knew, she was the sole person behind it. Raman Bhalla was an unlucky man when he desired for something. Both kids decided to sleep with him and the parents noticed the hesitation in Adi's voice. It was very obvious to the two of them. He looked at his wife but she asked him to remain mute. The only person she had to convince was her junior and she had a way around her. She walked out of the room after convincing her. She did not feel like an outsider even though she was not able to share the bed with them as a family. She was glad that both her daughter and husband got the only person they longed for all these years. Well she was Ishitha Raman Bhalla to feel neglected when such situation arises.

A content father was sleeping in between both his children with their hands wound around him and their legs on him. In the same house in another room, slept a happy woman with a frame clutched on to her hands. As the night passed, the door of a room croaked open. He found his love sleeping peacefully but clutching on to something like her life depended on it. He adjusted himself near her and released the frame from her hands. He found the same picture which was in her hands the other day. He admired the lady even more. The lady who walked out herself giving some stupid excuse slept in another room holding on to a picture of him and their children. He removed the frame from his hands and placed it on the side table. Then kissed her on her forehead and hugged her to sleep. He was sharing the bed with both of his children for the very first time but the warmth he felt when sharing the bed with her was something he could not experience. After all she was responsible for making him a father of two children. He promised her in sleep to give her back her son as well.

To be continued.

P.S: Not Proofread.

Chapter 13 - Page 66

Edited by Aru.Divan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice one buddy.
Adi and Raman's talk was emotional.
Hope Adi follows what he said.
Adi changed now and he got accustomed.
Next part hope for Ishra romance.
waiting for next update
Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesom...
love ishu very mch...
hop adi acpy ishu soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres..

To be very frank...today i am speechless...!! I am not getting any word into my head to describe the part...!! I don't know what to say...m,y comments made you smile..but today i am just at loss of words...!!! How much i will praise this part in the end it will less for it...!! I read this part for 3 tyms...!! And everytime all i can do was smile...!! It was such an emotional part...mind blowing one..!! I was just imagining the scenes..!! Adi and Ishita's moment at her clinic..!! Adi's one question made her heart melt for him...a.www...That was soo sweet of her...!! their hug..!! awww 😳😳 Something which Adi was craving for...it was that affection...
Then best was Adi and raman's conversation...!! Adi just called him Dad and huggeg him ..!! Finally both had got their long lost 6 years relation...!! Raman was so happy getting his son back..!! The way he made him understand the things...and his mistakes...was..way too awsumm...And then he asked him to accept Ishita too..!! And i am glad Adi wants to give it a try...!!
Then loved the family moment they spend together..!! Raman Ruhi & Adi...!! togther sharing a bed..>Awww...And Ishita...she's gem of a person...M glad she didn't felt an outsider...!!
Loved the way Raman came and slept with her..>!! Awww...it was way too cute part..!!
really loved i to core..!! This was the best awaited part of this ss..!! Now it's Raman's turn...to make Adi accept ishita too...I just wish he realises soon..!! Plz continue soon..!! I am eagerly waiting..!! and very curious to know..!!
Apart from that...here i am finished with my unres work,...😆😆Finally...!! 😳
Edited by desire_nikki - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
hope so adi will accept ishu soon
Raman adi convo was good
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Unres

I loved the Adi -Ishita talk...it would have taken lot of courage for him to go and talk to her..adi-raman conversation was also good..but Adi knew he will be able to talk to his dad...but to open up to ishita was a bigger challenge...that is why for me Adi- Ishita conversation holds upper hand than Adi-Raman.

finally Raman made Adi understand What position Ishita holds in his life and Adi should respect that...(i hope this happens even in the show)

Raman found solace in Ishita..arms...
lets see how he keeps the promise of giving ishita her son
Edited by yhmmylife - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update .plz continue soon plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omggg sooo beautifulll! Brilliantly written! Finally Adi is recovering. Loved the moment between Raman and Adi.. too sweet n cute and I was visualising. It wud b a treat if thy showed in the serial?


Cont soonnn! Cant wait for the next part!

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