THEY are not friends - Page 5

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya

Hey! I think this is DIVAN to the T! Seriously I feel like they are not best friends, probably don't know much about each other, but at the same time, enjoy each others company. Its nice to have one of those people in your life, where there are no expectations, its just a day-to-day relationship! I love it, I think this has to be one of my favorites!

Originally posted by: mnr123

awesome Love the way how u turn real into a dream 😳👏

Originally posted by: Mrs. SIR

why are they NOT friends!!!!!!

so many memories(?) or shall i say moments... scenes... (take your pick) in this one...😳 and loved them all...👏 its the best when the image comes to your head and the rest of the scene just plays out... without fail... ☺️

the old memories with the new.. her 'hindi'... 😆😆😆 loved that, checking to see how old the word was... 🤣 EPIC! and not surprising...😉

i start reading with a smile.. which becomes a grin and then my face just hurts for the longest time.. cuz im still sitting there >>> 😃

and i sooo didn't go back and watch the on location videos... 😳

Originally posted by: PreciousPri

Hey Columbia!!

This was beautiful just simply beautiful. 👏

They are not friends, friends know each other. They don't even know themselves when they are with each other.

Esp this ^^^^

I had noticed the OLV moment you have written too and it was great to see you tie it in so well

Aabru origin on google... classic 😆

I have read all your RPF's though I may not have been able to comment on all due to time constraints !!

It's a pleasure reading these, thank you !! 😊

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">They are not friends, friends know each other. They don't even know themselves when they are with each other.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">C, you use such DEEP verses to end your FUN fiction?😭</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">WHY?😭</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">This is the best line Ive read in any fictional material thus far online...superb!👏</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">How did you come up with this one... when I read it I was like "OMG! THIS IS IT!! This is EXACTLY it"</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Romantic frission is what I call your stories...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">The humor is sharp and direct...Raman;s Googling of Aabroo to her "Bahut saara paani"</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">They are so unbelievably made for each other... sometimes I fear they are true soulmates...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">if they are then they must have a happy ending...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Very few couples truly make each other laugh, your couple does...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">His "Haan kya tha?" is SO alluring and enchanting..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Transports me to a different world and makes me yearn for something REAL</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Fabulous... never stop writing</font>

Originally posted by: Aamina2013

Best line:
They don't even know themselves when they are with each other *blushes* 😳

Thank you so much for the update and pm. 🤗

Originally posted by: aishu_divan

Colu😃😃..thank you so much for accepting my request.🤗.and also weaving such a beautiful one from those lovely moments..⭐️⭐️

Some very effective and impactful dialogues for me:😊

<font color="#0000ff">"Now ask me if pink roses are my favorite!" </font>- This was so beautiful☺️..Trying to blend in their favorites together..😃

<font color="#0000ff">"Jab tum apna portfolio kichva rahi thi!</font>" - Haha..He will never change come what may..😆😃

<font color="#009933">"Naram aur namak ek hi hai"</font>

<font color="#0000ff">"Woh pata nahi, Lekin dono ke bina swaad nahi bantaa"</font> - killer lines👏..Love the way they get back at each other😊..Not meaning to offend the other person, but in a very subtle and beautiful way..😳

<font color="#0000ff">"Arrey we know about SRK fans isiliye pehle se hi this madam made sure he stood next to his hero in that TV event.</font>" - Haayyyeee..I like to belive that this is actually true..No matter how much she denies it..😳☺️

<font color="#0000ff">"Haan Lekin main yeh google kar Raha tha ke kiss zamane ki word hai yeh?</font>"- bwahahahahaaa🤣..this is such a cute moment😃..After all, <font color="#0000ff">"itni sadi hui pakao Hindi bolti hai joh aaj tak his baap ko samaj mei nahi aaya</font>"..Wonder whe she met his baap😉..Lol..😆

<font color="#6633cc">"They don't even know themselves when they are with each other." </font>- Haayyee😳..again this line spoke volumes to me dear😃☺️

Love the way you connect the offscreen moments and create magic out of it yaar😳❤️..Can actually imagine each scene playing in fornt of my eyes😃..Thanks a ton for helping me visualize what an offscreen moment may be like😊..I dont care if its true and I dont expect it to be true😊..But your figments of imagination is something that I would like to believe is true for me..😃

Originally posted by: rajji-cutest

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