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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Uff and the bar has been raised!

You use of the subtle actions seen on screen into something magical is laudable! Thoroughly enjoyed it! I loved the last scene where HE is googling the word aabru's origin rather than meaning! 🤣

Thanks for the PM :D

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Divya

@.Divyaa.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: columbia

Wohi hoga Jo manzure dot dot dot 😆

I hope jinke baare me tum likh rahi ho wo bhi khuda ko manzoor ho.😆

Edited by -Srkfan4ever- - 10 years ago

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columbia

@columbia

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: -Srkfan4ever-
This is AMAZING, C! 👏(I hope you don't mind me calling you that )
I've read all of your DivAn OSes from day one. And I simply LOVED them. You are S U P E R A W E S O M E.⭐️
Keep writing! :D

Of course not I don't mind

Thx for the kind comment hope you continue to like 😊

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Colu😃😃..thank you so much for accepting my request.🤗.and also weaving such a beautiful one from those lovely moments..⭐️⭐️

Some very effective and impactful dialogues for me:😊

"Now ask me if pink roses are my favorite!" - This was so beautiful☺️..Trying to blend in their favorites together..😃

"Jab tum apna portfolio kichva rahi thi!" - Haha..He will never change come what may..😆😃

"Naram aur namak ek hi hai"

"Woh pata nahi, Lekin dono ke bina swaad nahi bantaa" - killer lines👏..Love the way they get back at each other😊..Not meaning to offend the other person, but in a very subtle and beautiful way..😳

"Arrey we know about SRK fans isiliye pehle se hi this madam made sure he stood next to his hero in that TV event." - Haayyyeee..I like to belive that this is actually true..No matter how much she denies it..😳☺️

"Haan Lekin main yeh google kar Raha tha ke kiss zamane ki word hai yeh?"- bwahahahahaaa🤣..this is such a cute moment😃..After all, "itni sadi hui pakao Hindi bolti hai joh aaj tak his baap ko samaj mei nahi aaya"..Wonder whe she met his baap😉..Lol..😆

"They don't even know themselves when they are with each other." - Haayyee😳..again this line spoke volumes to me dear😃☺️

Love the way you connect the offscreen moments and create magic out of it yaar😳❤️..Can actually imagine each scene playing in fornt of my eyes😃..Thanks a ton for helping me visualize what an offscreen moment may be like😊..I dont care if its true and I dont expect it to be true😊..But your figments of imagination is something that I would like to believe is true for me..😃

Edited by aishu_divan - 10 years ago

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columbia

@columbia

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Maaneet099
Uff and the bar has been raised!
You use of the subtle actions seen on screen into something magical is laudable! Thoroughly enjoyed it! I loved the last scene where HE is googling the word aabru's origin rather than meaning! 🤣

Thanks for the PM :D

I love HER Hindi so effortless and I love HIS lack of it so decided to play a bit there

Thanks so much for your comment and encouragement

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

"They don't even know themselves when they are with each other."

perfect line...lovely...

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columbia

@columbia

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ybarfa
nice lovely update

Thx

Originally posted by: RomComFan
Terrific! 👏👏

Love, love, LOVE the last 2 lines!

'twas the aim 😊

Originally posted by: monalisa123
Amazing as always
Keep rocking

Thx 😊

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Raatri

@Raatri

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

reading ur stuffs luks like...what we see on TV is all FALSE and this is the REALITY...

very well written...actually superb...story ke andar story👏

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Arooj

@Arooj.M

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

I always love the last lines of your OS's

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DiVa

@Dihiva

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

columbia🤗.. tell me you spy on them on the sets😳.. haha! Just kidding! How beautifully visualize their working/friendly relationship!! Love the last line.. 'They don't even know themselves when they are with each other. ' 😉

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