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Ashu25

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Posted: 10 years ago

Epilogue : He stood there wondering where his life is leading.. Is it him or is his past.. He had many questions unanswered. He knew she was in pain.. With him.. He knew he is not right for her.. He knew his past has an effect on their relation.. On the other hand, she was determined to seek aswers from him.. She did not want to lose him or her family.. She wanted her life to move ahead.. Their life to move ahead... But she didnt know what has been stopping him.. She needed to confront him.. At any cost.. Today. .Now!!! She barges out...
.any might be confused as to why the epilogue is written first.. Well this is how i plan to end this piece... Hope u will like it... This also the prologue to this piece... CONFUSED??? Well.. To clear it up.. You gotto read it further...

Hey people..just trying my hand at an OS..i dont know if it will work out..sorry if it doesnt appeal..Feel free to put up criticism..I shall try writing better..I must credit my writing skills to many writers on this forum..Cant name..they are too many😊. Thanks to each one of you for inspiring me!!! Started a part today..based on the reviews I shall continue...

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Akshatha

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Posted: 10 years ago

interesting ... plz update soon😊...

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Ashu25

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PART 1

Raman Kumar Bhalla...The name was enough for people to notice him. He knew he was powerful enough..he could maintain contacts..he grew in time..he reached the skies..achieved a lot to be envious about..He made girls go weak on their knees..he had the effect and he knew it. But he was fully bowled over by his beautiful wife..Ishita..this is the same woman whose sight he detested and it was nothing better on the latter's part..They came together for one soul and are now on the verge of confessing to themselves and their better halves what is on their minds..in their hearts!

At this point in time came to the fore many murky situations..of his past. He could not do anything but blame himself for all the wrongs happening with them..He was not perfect , he thought..He was not right for her he thought..Her confidant's words ringing in his mind, he decided.." I have to break this relation..for her..for US..for her happiness". He knew she would never let this happen..He knew her now , inside out. His mobile rings, bringing him out of his thoughts.

"Sir, your tickets have been confirmed..The flight would be tonight 23.45 pm ". He hung the call. He made his way through the parking. Sitting in his car with tears welled up in his eyes, he drove off to the service apartments.

She was in trance too. She could not determine what this man was up-to. She was lost. She never thought her life would take such ugly turns where she had everybody to love her and console her but all were helpless at the happening of the events around them. She needed answers..she was confident he will not back out this time, that he will talk his heart out.

She waited for him. Longing his presence in their bedroom, she framed questions in his mind as she remembers him sending her a text this afternoon " I know you want answers. Keep your questions ready.I shall not back out this time".

He stood at the door of the bedroom..their room.. Instructing his mother not to disturb them for a while, he marches into the room. She notices him come in. She has expectations..a lot of them.. He can see them written all over her face..her questions, her doubts, her FEARS...Disgrace shown over their faces, they get ready to confront each other!

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Akshatha

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Posted: 10 years ago

gud start dear😊😊

I thinking what happens next...

thanks dear😊

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Ashu25

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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 2

She decided that very moment when she saw him, not to say a word. He was ready, he knew she had to ask him, needed to confront him. He waits. Moments of silence transcend between the two ,each waiting for the other to ask and speak up. He waits no longer, with rage in his eyes, throws the papers in his hand on the couch. She looks in the direction where the papers are flung and then looks up at him. He with an unshakable voice let out " I need your signatures on these. I am leaving tonight. Give these papers to Pathak tomorrow. Consider its over between us. Your questions are answered in these papers".

With that he turned away from her to the wardrobe taking out his stuff and started packing. She did not move. Maybe , she knew this was coming. She stood there, rooted. She did not let tears to flood. She was mute. He called out for Romi and walked out with his stuff. His mother asked him if he would eat, he refused. He bid good bye to his family, missed seeing his daughter who was asleep. He walked out of the apartments, out of his house, OUT OF HER LIFE.

He reached the airport, in time. He checked in, boarded the flight and it took off.

She was there, rooted, did not move an inch. She was looking into no where. Was she numb ? Was she expecting this ? She had nothing running in her mind. She stayed mute.

He reached the next morning, to be greeted by his employee Mr. Shah, who worked for his company with utmost dedication. He was led to his car out of the airport. He watched the high rise buildings and in no time reached his destination. A plush apartment, in a plush area.

Mr.Shah directed him to his apartment and took leave to be met at his office. He nodded. He went in to change. Got fresh and left for work. As the sun set, he returned to his apartment feeling tired, greetings, bouquets, garlands, shawls, speeches, appreciation, thundering claps, presentations. were part of this day.

He retired into deep slumber as nothing happened, to start afresh.

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WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 10 years ago

Very good start.. Plz continue soon...

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PRACHI

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Posted: 10 years ago

this is awesome start
I'm very curious now
what is in next part so update soon
if possible do pm m

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Ashu25

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Posted: 10 years ago

Thinking of some hatke idea from now..very few pivotal characters, sidelining the Bhallas and Iyers for a while now...i dont really know if this will work, but expecting it to..pls feel free to comment 😊.. Pms ..i donno yaar..ll update it often..u can find it..m planning it a bit long..dekhenge kya hota hai..my next part may not be recieved well..but..dont bash me pls...Dont appreciate but comment kardo 😊😊

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N.R.Rona

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Posted: 10 years ago

Liked the idea..the track is also good..pls update soon..will be waiting...plss pm meee

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Ashu25

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Posted: 10 years ago

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PART 3

As he was walking on the beach sands watching the sun rise and thinking of how his life doomed to a sunset, he felt the waters touch his feet. He went further deep inside the waters, unknown to himself, in his trance. He was remembered of the happenings of his life since his childhood. He suddenly felt a jolt. It was as if someone was pulling him down inside the deep waters. He couldn't breathe. before he could realize what was happening, he had his eyes closed.

The sun's rays fazed upon him. They were bright and direct on him. He was disturbed . As he twisted on the mattress, he saw HER. He woke up in a thunderous jolt with his eyes wide sitting on the mattress with her sitting right across him. She was fidgeting with her nail paint, he observed. As he looked here and there, she felt him awake. With a surprised look on her face, she walked towards him. "What the hell were you thinking you were doing on the beach ???" she asked. He was confused. " If for my presence there, you would have been eaten up by now " said she with her angry tone. " The doctor was here, he told me you needed rest and are in some emotional turmoil he observed.. I do not know whats with you but I found this ", she said as she held his wallet with pictures of his women in it in the air. he looked at her amazed. "If not for yourself, at least think about them you moron!" she added. He woke up from the mattress and snatched away his wallet from her hand and walked towards the door.

"How mean is that!!!! You are way too arrogant than you look ..You do not deserve hospitality ..", she shouted. He looked back at her with seething rage and shut the door in her face as he walked out. She stormed out into her bedroom to change the wet angelic white frock she wore this morning to enjoy a nice Sunday beach day which she thought got ruined by this arrogant moron she brought home.

As she moved into the living room, she heard a buzz. She answered the call and to her amazement, it was Mr. Shah on the other end who was petrified as to why the phone was not answered for a long time. " Mr.Shah..Please..stay calm..He is alright..He was here at my place a while ago .. I got him home as I saw him drowning this morning ".. With that she felt a hand snatching away the mobile in her hands and he spoke " Mr. Shah..I am doing fine..Nothing to bother.. Am leaving now..will catch up in a bit at my apartment" and he cut the call. She was bewildered .

'What are you !!! No manners, no courtesy!! He gave her a deathly glare and left the place again shutting the door in her face leaving her amazed all over again...

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