Butterflies - Ishra TS - COMPLETED - NOTE PG 19

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Swathi

@swathibalan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

This is brilliant B! A mature narration laced with humour

The quote with which you started is lovely!

Then the convo at the dining table - very true to the characters, esp MiMi..😆

Ramans constant reminders with a wink and smile was

Ishita's confusion.. the butterflies in her stomach - so well written

Her fear of disappointing him..so understandable.

Then the convo between the ever sane Vandu and Ishita. So lovely. a very natural one between 2 sisters. Loved this part.

Also, While it started with a discussion to calm her fears, it ended with their usual banter😆

You brought out the understanding and care between the sisters wonderfully! Reminded me of the many heartfelt conversations I have had with my sisters where we have encouraged each other and calmed the others fears.

Waiting for the next part..Ab mujhe bhi jaanna hai ki Goa mein kya hua😉😳

I was chuckling when I started reading it and by the end I had a happy smile on my face.

Thank you for that.

Awesome one Behna!🤗

Edited by swathibalan - 10 years ago

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sulochana90

@sulochana90

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

wow Its just too good 😊

cant wait to read how naught Raman is gonna get

Please update the next part soon

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ALEHA

@ALEHA2011

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

That was brilliant loved the sister talk

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shidin0117

@shidin0117

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

loved it , loved it actually Jaffar babe ko mail kar do,let he incorporate it in YHM. Superb yaar, abhi jaldi se part 2 bhi likh daal bhanu. Loved the dialogues written for Raman/.

Pls updt sssn

Shilpa