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-Srishty-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Done with commenting this story too.

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: paru_rox
Res ...big wala hug to you girl.

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Loved the start which you picked up from the Hens party on loc. Simmy away from everyone and contemplating her problems. It would be wonderful to see her actually thinking about her life for a change along with her daughter's. Would love to see her take a stand for herself this time.

Abhi is being pestered by Mommy to marry 😛 ... well I just hope that we get to see the elusive Nirvaan in your FF while he tests the laws of invisibility in the show 😆

Can't wait to read if he gets Simmy & Ananya home some day for a cup of tea ... you know I would love to see this in the show actually, Mani helping her out when she is distressed. Gets him away from Ishu too for a change :-P

Ammzz ... am so glad you wrote this FF. Can't wait to read the next part.

PS - I read Chasing Cars again the other day (calling amnesia on the recent destruction of Romi's character) and that FF never gets old 😳

You'll be seeing nirva in this fiction all right, I just need to figure out how. For what I have in mind, you'll be getting more than just a cup of tea and before you jump to conclusion no, its no it my fav track of compromised marriage.

I'm glad you liked it, paru.

Guess I'll be reading chasing cars soon too once they ruin romi's character for me on the show.

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: btalwar
Ok ... time for honesty ... Paru saw a spark between Mani and Simmi from day one ... and I was one of them who was like Duh uh ... it cannot happen ... she gave reasons, I countered ... and I decided to stay with the thought that Simmi and Mani ... naah ... forget it ...

And then ... u wrote ... first u make me yearn for Romi Mihika ... (something I could not have imagined in my dreams before Chasing Cars and now secretly wish for... 😳)

And now this ... I still want to stick to No Simmi Mani policy ... but I already kind of know that am surely gonna be on the losing side by the time u end this piece.

Need I say more about your writing .. an intelligent author like u does not need words to interpret a give away

Cheers

Bhanu

P.S.: @Paru: I hate u for pataofying her for Simmi Mani ... NOT possible 😛

To be honest bhanu, I still do not like Mani but since simmi is being lucky nowadays after she recovered her brain loss I'm up for her. I prefer to think of Mani as a new character alto get her and who knows I might start to like him too.😳

Aww not really, let's leave the final decision once I carve their story but I must thank you for your faith in me to come up with a fitting story.

Thank you!

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: -Srishty-
Done with commenting this story too.

It has to be lucky day srishty 😉

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: shavi2311
suprb prolouge nd intrstng strt...
i love abhi nd simmi...
i want to see the eqn of panjabi lady nd tamilian boy...
i knw u alwys keeps ur updtes intrsng...nd i alwys hookd up wid ur FF...
waitng fr nxt chptr...
updte wen u get tym...

Thank you shavi, its good to see you here :)

Let's see how things turn put for them.

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aaminah123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: -Srishty-
This is not IshRa but I'll read it anyways because it's yours.. will be back.

I've seen many posts on IF about Simmi-Mani and honestly it's hard for me to picturise this couple erm maybe because I haven't seen them on tv together and imagine them as a couple is weird.

Although I liked the beginning. We are getting to read what Simmi feels and her concerns about her life and Ananya's. On the other hand Mani's mom is insisting on his marriage.

Waiting to see how the story develops.

I know, the idea is still foreign but I have seen a couple of scenes where took ananya from simmi to play with at the golu festival or something. It was sweet, and for a change he was after any other girl other than ishita. Perhaps its also my wish yo get him hooked a on that he leaves ishita and Raman alone.

Thank you!

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Yes, now I'm humming Magic by Coldplay

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

I think I ship him with Shagun. Her redemption. He's too good to be true (in the annoying yet overly sweet way) and a day with Shagun will balance him out. I am thinking of starting a new SS with him and Shagun... Married.