Panaah - IshRa OS - Page 9

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

beautiful...

"not again...at last"

"i want to believe..."

bestest lines...loved it!!!!!!

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Brilliantly captured...it almost makes me long to see it rendered on screen, but i am sure the CVs are not half as talented and would surely botch the delivery, marring the impression this read has left in my mind...so i will be careful of what i ask for.

But thank you for a spectacular read!! 👏

--Nags

Originally posted by: swathibalan

This was simply beautiful, Aani. A lot was communicated in just the few lines

"Not again Ishita...at last."

"What I have with you is a family, a home; I never had it before...now that family is about to be completed Ishita that's why I said not again but at last."

They will build new memories between them, of them and their family.

A house is build with board and beams. A Home is built with love and dreams.

He lost a house in the fire but together they will build a home

Awesome Girl🤗

Originally posted by: Rianshi

Amazing os dear.. loved it..

Originally posted by: prejudiced

Simply Beautiful.

A lot of things were put in place. This was the place where their relationship started .Quite liked how u had them take the relationship ship to the next level in the same place.
Loved it!

Originally posted by: ALEHA2011

Brilliant loved how u showed them taking the next step at the home where it all started

Originally posted by: pri12

outstanding...pls continue if u can...thanks for pm

Originally posted by: rutu83

i love your writing! can't stop saying that each time 😃
one of the things i love in all your os is gradual peeling of the layers - both emotional change and the background story that brings ishra to that point. so masterfully done👏
raman's feelings were so beautifully conveyed- that "at last" really brought home his emotional upheaval. raman doesn't want the world, he just wants his world.
loved the os!